~Jodha's Diary~ Part 10 Pg. 103 - Page 45

Originally posted by: harshu27

hi shagun good u finally updated it... 😉 I was thinking whether u have frogtn abt ur stories... 😉 anywys as usual good update...loved jodha's inner turmoil's d way she felt betrayed by her own family and had no option but to give in fr d sake of amer... 😕 update soon...and my like button is not working so couldn't hit like... 😕 sorry...

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

After reading the chapter,which was more than awesome,when my eyes stuck at your dp,I could not help but smiled... In which situation Jodha is now in your writing, had she ever thought in her distant dream that one day she will stand with that 'jallad' with such a comfort,touching with forehead and sharing the pain with only a touch!

OK, now for your new chapter... You have beautifully picturised the depression and distress of Jodha. The inner conflict of Jodha, the confusion about whether she is depressed for her bad luck of marrying the man she hates the more or she is hurt for the betryal of her closest persons has been penned out nicely. The line-"my tears have dried up...not only the tears, its my source of life also,that has dried up" has moved me from core...😭

I especially liked how you explained the thoughts of Jodha when she burnt the 'shadi ka joda'... 😊

Jodha's thought regarding the conditions are also quite well explained...(better than the show itself!)👏

But I really loved the finishing lines...this is like a fighter!👏who does not lose even when all doors in front of her seems to be closed...⭐️

Waiting for next updates... Eagerly longing for the time when she will realise her love.😳

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Awesome chptr dear..
beautifully written..
u really vry well describe about jodha's pain..
tnxx for the PM..

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Accha...😆

No di, I remember them very well.😛

Thank you. M glad you liked it.😳😃

Its okay di. Your comment is more valuable.😳😃

Originally posted by: harshu27

surprisingly now d like button is working... 😆

Originally posted by: erning_w

Awesome as usual Shagun

Continue soon

And thanks for the pm :)

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Thank you soo much Divya di...😃

I am soo glad to know that you like my writings...😳😃

You're most welcome...😃

Originally posted by: Blacktulip

Finally you updated ..I hope you mix both diaries in one to be able to read both reactions and pov of them at the same time :)

Nice update and thanks for pm

Update soon :)