~Jodha's Diary~ Part 10 Pg. 103

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: sho123
I read all chappis
ur work is really nice plus different
u took a unique concept
I mean writing story as a dairy
next time do pm me

Thank you so much...😳😃

Soo glad to know that you liked it...😳😃

Will PM you...😊

What is your name BTW? 😛

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deepa111

@deepa111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#422

Awesum update 👏
Penned down really well.
Its like reading this u remember n visualize the scenes in jodhakbar.
Jo really hurt n suffered with sujamal betrayal,suryabhan's death n then her brothers kept as hostage n top of that amer hv to go so much difficulties.
Muh dikhayi part was like u actually seeing it..
Grt work shagu.
Nd nxt time update soon...

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#423

Hi shagun...
u have written it very well dear...
I loved it...
update next part soon...
nd thanks for pm...

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#424

Nicely written her inner thoughts and ups and downs of her emotion in her life. update soon.

Thanks for pm.

Congrats Shagun for turning dazzler and change in green.

Edited by melovesja - 9 years ago

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#425

beautifully written shagun...jodha's emotions on seeing jalal's reflection in water was really put well...loved it...update soon... 😳

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#426

@Harshu di, will you please press the like button di? 😛

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Bhagyashree

@Bthakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#427

Hey shagun, sorry for late comment.

Ekdam jabardast chapter. Next update jaldi dena .I'm eagerly waiting

Thanks for pm

Edited by Bthakur - 9 years ago

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Sonali

@sonali96

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#428

Amazing update dear

Beautifully written

Enjoyed reading it

U depicher everything so simply yet beautifully

Continue soon nd thnks fr the pm

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan
Awesum update 👏
Penned down really well.
Its like reading this u remember n visualize the scenes in jodhakbar.
Jo really hurt n suffered with sujamal betrayal,suryabhan's death n then her brothers kept as hostage n top of that amer hv to go so much difficulties.
Muh dikhayi part was like u actually seeing it..
Grt work shagu.
Nd nxt time update soon...

Thank you soo much Deepu di...🤗

I'm so so glad you liked this one...😳😃

Yeah...I will...😃😛...😉😆