Akdha ss: Beyond innocence chapter6 Updated on pg1 (21/11/2016) - Page 98

this Jo is totally a stranger...still, nice update and different theme...

hey payu
wonderful update dear
our payal come back to her original self
after so long you update now plz don't stop
plz update your all stories and try to complete dear
OK jalal is such a flirt
every time he is flirting and he don't leave any chance either
but yes I think jodha impress with his flirty nature
I like his quick reply in every jodha questions
like he is expert in this
awe so jodha all the time thinking about jalal
now he affecting her
his every gesture she like
of course who can ignore jalal
nobody resist his charm
Sam I know jodha like him as a friend nothing much
but I hope Sam also have same feeling for her
I like his character
from his gesture and description I think he genuinely care for her
like how he worried for her when she not responding his calls and text
and he remember that she don't have lunch also
one sweet gesture of jodha melt his anger
such a good friend
who know how to cheer up jodha
jodha don't understand her own behavior why she is waiting for jalal call
so jalal gift her that dress which Sam don't let her buy
good choice
jalal now he started to understand her little bit
he know she is waiting for his call
whenever jodha talk about Sam jalal royally ignore that topic
possessive from the beginning
love the way jodha differentiate between jalal and her other male friends
something so different you added
like that part
very beautifully penned down
OK poor Abdul
each time jalal ignore him in front of jodha
but he should thanks Abdul to remind him about Saturday movie plan
really like the way you write their chat dear
now waiting eagerly for their dinner or their dinner date
I guess jalal flirt with her too much and jodha going enjoy lot
once again wonderful update dear
thanks for pm