Akdha ss: Beyond innocence chapter6 Updated on pg1 (21/11/2016)

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eshalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#991

Awesome chapter dear
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

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harshal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#992

wonderful updte paya...😉so jo was recalling her lunch date wid me...😛itna asar hua ki bandi uske frnd ko jhoot boli kamaal hai😆😆1st date me itna impact pta nahi 2nd me kya hoga😆😆jallu uff kya kehna uskauska husky voice toh sabpe jaadu kar deta hai❤️d last part was funny i guess abdul 😆poor fellow iss baar bhi uska popat hona hai kya???🤣he was confused thru out wen jalal was replying to jo's msgs abt d dinner date...😉nywys eager to read more updte soon...😉

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roseraja1915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#993

Thank you Payal for the update. It was a very enticing read. Jodha's and Jalal's attraction is purely physical at the moment as they have yet to spend enough time with each other to explore other aspects of their personalities.

Both are equally headstrong and impulsive in their actions and this will result in many exciting exchanges , such as the ones at the airport ,the club and the mall. Love the dialogues and the way the story is unfolding. Looking forward to the next chapter!😉

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 8 years ago

#994

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani
Wonderful chap dr
Plz continue sooon
Thnks fr d pm 😊

Thankyou!!😊

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 8 years ago

#995

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

I read it...but u updated after long time...😡

and abt stranger then , whenever I read this story, I try to imagine Jo drinking "Madira"😉😆..and fail miserably...coz then I remember her face in the show giving Jalal, nimbu pani next morning, and I end up laughing...😆

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Frankly, I don't/can't imagine paridhi in any chapter of this story.But yes.. I do imagine Rt and his smirks while writing every scene.😉

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 8 years ago

#996

Originally posted by: piya58
Nice chppy
Update
Thanku

Thanks!!😊

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Geetanjali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#997

Amazing update

liked jo-ja's texting especially Ja's responses

Jo has started felling something for him

continue soon and thanks for pm

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dellaakdha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#998

Sorry for late reply payal..a beautiful update..jodha's feelings which she don't feel for otrs but only for jalal..the uniqueness of this man attractd her..i lyk the friendship btwn jodha and roby...the gift given by jalal surprises jodha..our hero s very clever..the moment jo thinking about him,she got the call..how come he reads her mind..?the text messages btwn them s very cute..i lyk this jalal very much..he s asking for dinner date..?he can't get enough in their lunch date..?so naughty..is this normal date with a girl/boy or something beyond tat..?waiting for nxt part..thanks for pm..

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 8 years ago

#999

Originally posted by: Naazrt
diii update na plzzz

Thode din pehle he to kiya tha😛

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sho123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1000

The chappies was incredible and IRRESISTIBLE
Love jo here a lot and wanna know why she is like this
Love the way both r addicting each other
Can't wait for their next date