Akdha SS - The Deal. ||Chapter-3 Page-39|| 13/01/16 - Page 9

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

So well.. Mine is the first comment here!!! Yea.. and we know how! right?😆Can I just do a small yippe dance!! akele...akele? Of course I can!! Yeah! I know how much crazy things I did, just to comment first here..! But still, I feel its all worth it!😳 obviously!😆

I mean can I just fall in love with each and every word you typed out! awwie!! I am waiting for yours! ❤️ As it is, I've always been a fan of your writing.. Like I am a fan of yours?😆 but now.. like seriously, it has improved and spectacularly at that!😃 It feels so great listening that 😆I wasn't really thinking to comment now, you know, how lazy I am..😆 Yea! I am now quite habitual with this.😆 But then, can I stay away from this story of yours??!! ❤️ I love you!🤗 I love you more! ❤️

Now, I really don't know what to say.. I've gone through the chapter again right now so that I don't miss out on any point..But you have missed two points...the CPR one and the 'syphilis' one 😆 and I have like zillion things to say!! But but.. I don't know how to say them..😆 I feel tongue tied! really!!😲 I hate you for that!!😲😲😆 But I've promised you my biggest comment ever.. soo.. here it goes! Ready for a long lecture??!!😆 I am also promising you mine biggest comment on your new one! ❤️

So the story starts off with the diva, the girl who is obsessed with popularity, the ever ready argue girl.. Shivani! 😆 She is like ahaana😆So well, I am not really a fan of her..but yeah! I like it how she is crazy for her makeup! Quite good for a 16 year old!😃 Yep! make-up is normal for a girl whose obsessed with popularity. 😆
Okay yeah.. the daddy of all is here!😎 An over-protective dad who is scared that someone will impregnate her daughters 😆Now how can YOUR story miss out on fun? That 'I delivered a set of twins to a teenage girl.. and do you know what she said? Do you know?' Oh god.. it was 🤣 And it that was ROFL, then Shivani's reply- that protection one! Oh god! What do I say?!! It just made my stomach hurt!🤣 Oh my goodness!! I hope it was not that bad😆 I was already having headache and now stomach ache too! I hate you!😆 I love you too ❤️

Now to my fav.. the ever frustrated, mysterious Jodha Sharma, 17, smart, sharp tongued, and sarcastic!! This is the first time I have made my Jodha like this.😆I mean I love her ever ready for a fight kinda nature... I don't know why but she resembles me.. and you too!😆😆 Yea...mixture of us😆So there is practically no similarity in the sisters, except their haughty nature, and of course, the no dating rule!😆 yep! you got it!😆 So yeah.. I love daddy for this!😆 'First rule- no dating till graduation .. second rule- no dating till graduation!' Oh god!😆 It was a good one..right?😆

Now I am sitting here with my laptop, dad's crying watching some show.. and its totally funny here.. !😆😆 what?😆

God! I forgot to bow down to you for your extensive research on the streets and corners of London! Tu es le meilleur! (You are the best in french!)😉 I know a lil bit of French😆I mean Greater Manchester, Boston, Brentford ( if thats what it is 😆) Like seriously? I told you...I want this story to be my best.😆

Okay now.. to the lover boy Ryan!😆 So he was a treat to read! And Daniel too.. what was his full name? Yeah! Daniel Gingell.. 😆 Gawd!! I hate his surname😆I mean I loved it.. he just fell for Shivani.. love at first sight!! like wow!😆The 'you're welcome' thing was awesome!😆 And Shivz being Shivz didn't even utter a thanks then! Way to go, girl!😆 She's somewhat like you!😆

Wait a second! Did Ryan wet his pants in second grade?😲😲 Gross!😆 seriously!! Yukks!😆Shivz, best of luck babez!😉 now do I need to say something for the mysterious bike rider and the haughty Jo? Their first meet was fantabulous! Like purrfect! 😳 Oh my goodness!! So much of praises. I am flattered.😆

A question now.. is Ross your personal favorite when it comes to last names?😆 Devin Ross, Ashley Ross.. woah!😆 Wait. Katherine Ross in UL.😆Now comes the Barrett siblings.. Sofia and James.. creepy!😆 Haww.. You are in the bad list of Sofia's. 😆I mean what do I say for Sofia? She's one arrogant head... and James.. modern version of Shariffudin!🤢 Ah! I liked this...modern shariffudin!😆 I mean yeah I don't like Shivz but so what? I won't let her destroy herself with this guy! Ryan is her prince charming! Yea! the guy who wetted himself in 2nd grade😆

The library thing was funny.. Jodha was literally boiling.. like about 6 seconds away from slapping you so hard that your teeth will bleed.. woah girl!😆 So me!😆 And the way Daniel got scared like a kitten... Ryan just guessed it that she is her sister! That's what I call, the genes... Jodha and Shivani have the main things same, okay at least some of them!😆 They are polar opposites.😆

Oh my god! Jalal was naked in the basketball court! Not naked! Half naked!😆 Seriously that guy, and flirting with a 40+ lady, He wasn't flirting, just having fun.😆 whats more, a counselor! I am sure he's got hit on his head by a basketball!😲 A bad guess!😆Detention was deserved..😆 How much Jodha nd Jalal like each other naa!😆😆 Like really!😆 'Stupid Girl'😆 I would say Jalal was right there! What? You called her stupid! 😆

Now now what's left! Oh yeah! Shivz's acting skills!!⭐️ Kudos to you girl! Her mascara, cockroach thing. The car thing😆. how about joining the theater group at your school?😆 popularity and Shivani are synonymous😆 Correct! 😆Two silly girls are together now! Shivani and Sofia.. S,S you see!😆 I seriously don't see the point of Shivani going with James, I mean a boy she just met!😲 The story is taking place in London.😆 but then again, she's crazy.. and a teenager.. and teens have the right to do anything!😎 Correct!😆

So now comes the climax, at least of this update!😆 Jodha is such an awesome sis na!😆 Way too nice! 😆 immediately spilled the beans.. my ever frustrated lady!😆 The perfect word for her😆Shivani would have been like what the hell when she told her dad..😲😲😆 you know what, I kinda like this daddy.. 😆 he's funny!😎 Yea! The dad is hilarious.😆

So yeah.. this is it, I guess... I am so glad you started this story yrr!🤗 Thenkew! For you know trusting me ❤️ I remember when you were sceptical about starting it, and now I am soo happy that you did! Everyone's loving it!🥳 I hope so!😆 So the update was like... oh god I am short of words!😲 Oh come one! you weren't😆 I mean every one in school thinks I'll never be short of words.. and here... urrgh Aisha!😡😆 I love you!! ❤️ 😆And the thing that you think I am worthy of being cherished.. oh god.. I am so in love with you!🤗 Save it for your price charming😆You are a wonderful friend and person.. and I hope you'll always get the best not because I want it to happen, but because you deserve every bit of it!❤️ Aww!! that was so sweet of you! ❤️ Btw. I too think I am a deserving person. 😆

So was it long?? Extra large😆God I am really hoping it was.. wait I didn't say much about Jalal.. haaw😲😲 so yeah! I loved him.. he's awesome and really cool!😎 (like me!😆) Me too😆Just day (or night😆) dreaming about them being together..! both are so crazy, what will happen when they come together!😲😆 Oh god!😆😆 You are dreaming a lot!😆

Now update soon... because I really can't wait anymore! 😳 But yeah! Its UL's turn and lets be fair.. I want a shayari in that one basss...😡😡😡 I am confused regarding it!!!😆otherwise!😡 Then feelings and then this one! Wow! everything is scheduled by Ms. Anushka Agnihotri And yeah! I know you are confused.. how will you manage three stories?! Don't be.. your heart wanted it to be the way it is now.. I know how excited you were for this one. . so just leave it on the future! Thanks! ❤️ like dil se😆 everything will fall in place!⭐️ Just be calm, and crazy like you are always!!😃

Now what.. I love you a lot!🤗 me more!❤️And yeah, take care and update soon!😆 (oh god, soo cliche lines😆) Naah!😆

Naam pata hai na?😆 Erm...Anushka?😆

Originally posted by: rima4ever

congo for new story
thanks for the pm
amazing start

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

awesum start .love it.
continue soon..

Originally posted by: jansijodha

nice story aisha
continue soon
but update feelings nd upl too yaar
we are waiting!!!

Originally posted by: jansijodha

thnxs for pm

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Congratulations foe ur new ss

awesome start...

waiting for next chapter nw

nd tq for d Pm...

Originally posted by: cuty1997

aisha finally you pm me. after i read whole update and and also comment here. 😆

Originally posted by: sireesha76

Congrats for new SS🥳

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Hi dear first of all congo 4 the new ss it is vry interesting i liked jo's charecter she is vry bold and jalal is naughty😉 good start continue soon😊