~JJ FF~||Caught In The Web Of Relationships||ch 4 pg 104(9/5) - Page 21

Originally posted by: sridevihota777

Nice prolegue.update soon.interseting characters.plz update. Love u.

thank u so much dear!!
will surely update soon!!
love u too<3

Interesting setting of the story.. Shy jalal and egoistic jodha...blending with story and other characters...cantvwait for next update

Awesome prologue

Originally posted by: lovejodhaakbar

Interesting setting of the story.. Shy jalal and egoistic jodha...blending with story and other characters...cantvwait for next update

thanks dear! Will update soon!

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Awesome prologue

Nice character sketch

Great concept & Continue soon

Thanks for pm Sona

thank u so much di!!
will cont soon!!

sona ..unress kar diya re .
page no 22

Originally posted by: mushat

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Sona 🤗
Cograts for your new story..
First of all ..thank you so much for choosing this topic sona ..its more about social problems ..caste system and Swadeshi movement than love strory ..thanks a lot for this different plot ..
I'd love to read this.. sorry for late reply ..Google karne mein busy thi ..prologue itself is intriguing.. it seems Jodha ll get attracted to Shurya ..and Hamida is gonna oppose JaJo relationships...
And moti is Jalal' s bhabhijaan ..I don't know why ..I laughed out loud here...
continue soon ..
tomorrow is Saturday...
have a great day ...

Nishu..
thanks a lot...
I chose this topic for these reasons only... There are so many love stories in this forum.. That's why I chose a different topic!
Moti is Jalal's bhabijaan🤣 bohat nazar daalti thi ye mere jallu pe serial me... That's why punished her!🤣
I know tomorrow is Saturday.. I'll update this one tomorrow!!

chapter 1 is coming up shortly!!!
please don't comment now!!!

"Yesterday's programme wasn't bad..the war cries were powerful too..and harsh", calling Jalal in his office room, Surya said.
Jalal remained standing without saying anything.
Surya again questioned, "Was the procession meant specially for me only and that's why it was taken from this road so that I get afraid?"
This time Jalal opened his mouth and answered in a calm and composed tone,"It wasn't specially for you. Aur chahe koi bhi raastay se jaye, jise darna hai vo to darega!"
Surya smirked but disregarded his younger brother's answer.
"Your brother doesn't fall in that group,it was known by many in that procession.Warna unke war cries sunne liye mujhe balcony mein jana nhi padhta. I could've listened to it sitting in the room. I'm not afraid of your colourful signs and big lectures. Bohat achi tarah se janti hu safed daanto se insaano ko daraya ja sakta hai par kaanta nahi".

The reason for which many were silenced yesterday was already known by Jalal and it was in the indirect indication to that, Jalal felt greatly ashamed in his heart. He is usually a calm and cool person and respected his elder brother very much. If it was some other matter then he would have kept quite but the matter with which Surya pricked, it was tough for him to tolerate that.
But still he answered in a soft tone, "Dada, mujhe pata hai ke banayi hui daanto se kaanta nahi ja sakta par is saansar me asli daant wale insaan bhi hai. Zarurat ke din unki kami mehsoos nahi hogi!"
The answer was completely unexpected. A flabbergasted Surya looked at his brother's face for sometime and then said, "Indeed!"
Jalal was going to give a fitting reply but stopped timidly.
The fear wasn't for Surya, suddenly a female voice was heard outside the room, "Why do you all hung curtains in the door? na chooke andar aau uski bhi raasta nahi hai. Pura ghar English fashion me bhar gaya!"
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