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myviewprem

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Character wise

Akbar

- Work more and play less 😆 I mean this love letters to Jodha is umar main shoba nahi detha you can talk directly

Jodha

- Bashan less brain more

- Stop Ruq bhakti

- Give more concentarion on son Salim

Salim

- Stop sulking be happy

- Do not jump to conclusions before hand

- Be nice to mom and papa and GF anar and ignore Ruq

- Keep away from haider and kota and hafeem etc

Anarkali

- Improve dancing

- Do not misbehave with Salim( after all he is walihaad not commoner BF)

- Stop crying start smiling be happy

- Do full nakras and make Salim fall at your feet 😉 do not accept him easily

- Improve dress sense and make up

Ruqaiah

- Stop negativity

- Stop separating parents and child

- Accept you did mistake by giving hafeem

Hamida

- Do patriarch of family role

- Keep an eye on Ruq, Jodha and Akbar and be strict with them and stop their errors

- Give some attention to Salim

Story

- Practical love story/scenes (ex; why anar hugging walihad when he saved her, why jalal singing etc )

- Some good bonding scenes bet family Salim, JA

- Festivals like rakhi, Diwali etc celebrate

- Some good happy and comedy relief

- Bonding bet siblings and friends

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NutellaWaffle

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Posted: 10 years ago

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jodha bashans😳does jo is havin screenspace or dialogues😲 ?all i can find is salim anarkali bashans and ruk same constipated pukeworthy expressions and evil smirks continued🤡 result is trps and JA position😔

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ChupChupKe

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Posted: 10 years ago

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- Stop Ruq bhakti

- Give more concentarion on son Salim

U should add these points for AKBAR too JALAL is the greatest BHAKT of RUKUU more than anyone in agra 😎

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NutellaWaffle

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...SoniSona...
- Stop Ruq bhakti
- Give more concentarion on son Salim

U should add these points for AKBAR too JALAL is the greatest BHAKT of RUKUU more than anyone in agra 😎

Akbar is in Im God mode now😲🤣God knows evrythng happeing around but our Jallu doesnt even know his bachpan dost afeem evilness who is nxt to his hojra🤣

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Mushat

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Posted: 10 years ago

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1.story line
2.increase leads screen space
3.less negativity.
4 .at least 5 minutes political or dek scenes.
5.DEA...last time 6 months pehle huya tha ..
6. plz show some royalty
7. plz cvs remember this is set in 16 th century...

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ChupChupKe

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Akdhaparijatluv

Akbar is in Im God mode now😲🤣God knows evrythng happeing around but our Jallu doesnt even know his bachpan dost afeem evilness who is nxt to his hojra🤣

yuup bhavzz ..this bachpaan ki dosti is beyond my understanding🤣 ... they hv changed the defination of frndship from TOP to bottom 😆 remember how happy rukku was as jalal cried on her shoulder 🤣 ...pata nahin joo loogg jalal koo joruu ka gulamm kehete hainn unhee yee RUKU BHAKTI kyun nahin dikhti 😆

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Mushat

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Posted: 10 years ago

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About Salim..anar..maan..jagat.. noor...just pathetic . even God himself can solve these mess...anarkali was showed as hair dresser..maan and jagat' s bff . 24*7 badmouthing about walihat .and maan and jagat kumbh ke mele main buchdi huyi behen. in 16 th century maan ..princess of amer ..friend of mughal shehjada...OK I understand they were brought up together. but where is parda pratha...I think not only mughal but rajput also follow this tradition..most pathetic character is salim...cvs really don't know what to do with his character..anar ke liye devdas banaye..or ruks ke liye shravan Kumar or maan daniyal ke sath saajan banaye...so sanar love story mein kuch improve nhin ho sakta

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NutellaWaffle

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...SoniSona...

yuup bhavzz ..this bachpaan ki dosti is beyond my understanding🤣 ... they hv changed the defination of frndship from TOP to bottom 😆 remember how happy rukku was as jalal cried on her shoulder 🤣 ...pata nahin joo loogg jalal koo joruu ka gulamm kehete hainn unhee yee RUKU BHAKTI kyun nahin dikhti 😆

😆😆

if Jalal cried infront of jo he is called joru ka ghulam,rotlu jalal and if he cries infront of evil ruk its called fraaandddshippp🤣

if ruk gives bashan with constipated pukeworthy expression its called acting and if jo tells dialgues its called bashan..

if jalal listens to jo words or praises jo he is called jodha bhakth and if he does same with ruk its jalal responsibility u know to other wives especially ruk😆

isnt he RUK'S JORU KA GHULAM,RUK"S BHAKTH😉

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swriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#9

Nice post you said true 😉 but...

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ghalibmirza

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Posted: 10 years ago

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prem, i want to see some reality..

akbar was never a one woman bhakt and ruk always held her position in his life and i want that angle of closeness between the two shown

i am not liking the candy floss scenes of akhda they look forced instead show some brief moments of passion which make us believe they were together one night

more emphasis should be laid upon akbar and his 9 gems and abul fazal played an important role but he is hardly shown and that actor seems to have good dialogue delivery with strong command on urdu!

salim anar angle should be reduced to minimum as both the actors esp salim are not that impressive!

positivity or no positivity i want to see the reality and no white wash characters!

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