Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#741

again mu about sunny... finally jodha back to home. Liked the changes in jalal lustful husband to caring nd loving husband... continue soon nd do pm

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meera

@meeramiss18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#742

Awesome chappy..

Both of their emotions and feelings are described well

do continue soon dear😛

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Neetu

@NSKay

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+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#743

prema di superb update
poor joja .,
u nailed the chap
well and beautifully penned their emotional turmoil...
thankew for the pm di

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Sonali

@sonali96

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#744

Awesome update dear...though the chappy was emotional but it was amazingly wriiten...continue soon dear nd thnks fr the pm

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#745

Finally everything is going to be alright... finally their love is going to win against all the hurdles n obstacles... Finally Jalal n Jodha would be together again after all the disheartenment... You are amazing prema... just the best...

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irene

@sangreal

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#746

Jo is very lucky to have a husband who loves her so much,

parents who stand by her side no matter what, in laws who will do anything for her...this will be her strength...she and jalal have to overcome the most difficould pain ... the death of their children.😭

Prema di, you discribed their emotional turmoil/rollercoaster amazingly, thats whats make a good story!!!!!

Dont understand why jalal could not stay at bharmals house aswell till jo recovers...so she didnt feel bad about jalal going to work or to sleep and maina could care for her like only a mother could...

Amazing and long update...thank you for that and for your pm😛

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crystalwings

@crystalwings

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: lovejodhaakbar
Even bfore they fall in love for each other.. Jodha and jalal have madly desire...their mind and their body will doin the opposite...hardest thing they keep their desire at bay for jodha's shake...but they need it after loosing the twins ..after all it could heal their wound sooner perhap..hope yhis time jalal able to control his passionate desire on jodha...thanks for updating dear

Thanks for your review, it would be interesting to see how long Jalal can keep his passion under control...

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crystalwings

@crystalwings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA
again mu about sunny... finally jodha back to home. Liked the changes in jalal lustful husband to caring nd loving husband... continue soon nd do pm

Lust can mature to love ...atleast it did in Jalal's case...😊

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crystalwings

@crystalwings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: geeta.M
Hey prema wonderful update dear..loved it.
Its myriad of emotions.. U beautifully penned it dear..
I loved the jalal care, his concern, his divine love towards Jo. Hope His support and love helps her to heal her pain of body and pain of losing her twins soon.
Continue soon..
Waiting for next chappy.
Update soon.

I guess we have to wait and see if love can substitute the loss of twins...thanks for the review