Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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zakia4

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Posted: 10 years ago

#751

wow dear superb chappy.jalal kitna caring husband hai.lekin jodha ke parents use itni jaldi jalal ke saath jane denge eagerly waiting for the next chappy thanks for the pm.you describe everything perfectly dear.

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...Ishika...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#752

Prema di it was such a emotinal chappy..
Jo comes to knoe about her twins death... 😲 but jalal handles her perfectly.. 😃 he is such a caring & lovely hubby... 😳
Jo parents as well as her in laws are so understanding & caring... 😊
Hope jo will recover soon & everything will soon trn to normal..& our joja will be back in their form 😉 😆 plz do continue soon & thnks for d pm di...!! 😛

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Krina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#753

awesome update dear

finally jodha know everything

jalal take care of her very well

it's hard for parents accepting the truth

thanks to pm me

update soon

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Raksha Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#754

awesome chapter dear... i love reading it... tq for pm..

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manasvi_swaraj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#755

Its a marvel piece, and I have fallen head over heels, with this story of urs...

Trust me, I am so in love with this FF...

may u n ur writing blossom as a spring in heaven!

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2thless

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Posted: 10 years ago

#756

Hey.. great update!!!

the part where Jodha knows the truth and jalal trying to tell her ... was sooo heart wrenching... I was worried Jodha waould go into depression😭 -- I guess Jalals love had her survive this and vice versa...😃

Poor SUnny hated more for no fault of his...😆

Jalal had decided to take her back home... but now as Bharmal said -- its going to harder -- with her always in front of her... he would have a hard time controlling his desires just for the sake of Jo...😊

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deepa111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#757

Wonderful update yr.mindblowing. 😊
when jalal confronts jo about their children'death is so emotional. 😭
nd hatsoff to u that u described that superbly .
Its really hard time for ja nd jo.only they can help each other to recover from this pain.
as u described how jalal suffered during this phase i really feel that he truely loves jo.
bt when now he is taking jo back to his home its really tough for him to control his desires.
bt may b this time he'll control for jo's sake.

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mama17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#758

Superb update and a lengthy one indeed.
U described very nicely emotional vulnerability of JaJo, post twin death.
What's next, eager to know

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crystalwings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: manasvi_swaraj
Its a marvel piece, and I have fallen head over heels, with this story of urs...
Trust me, I am so in love with this FF...

may u n ur writing blossom as a spring in heaven!

Thanks Manasvi...that was the most pleasant blessing I have received till date...loved it...😊