||UNPREDICTABLE LUV #5|| CLOSED|| new link added - Page 6

Originally posted by: ...prithibi...

usse aapni tarikhe se likhne dungi hum sabb..wohi toh hoga aishu style

Originally posted by: ...prithibi...

Aishu 🤣🤣🤣 first part mein main thoda sharma gayi thi kyu?😆 i think it was descent SR so far😆...how can u write sooo beautifully describtion??i m just spell-bound...u make words to stop at their paces by beautifully writing..awww oh my goodness!! thnx yaah🤗...nd 2nd part was also awesome..yeh rishika v nah!kitna naugty hain...and jo's innocent talkings and her jealousy for Natasha was ha ha ha ha 🤣 oh my god, so much of rofls😆nd the interviews..uff..jalal ka interview sabse khubsurat tha..nd natasha's interviews..hi hi hi 🤣🤣 arre😆jalal stood outside in the rain and said to every passing car-i hate u!!!! 🤣 nd that blind girl and jalal is being emotional by her talkings..aww...nd jodha is jodha..🤣🤣 AND WHO IS POOKHI?? arre she is my jaan😆BY THE WAY,HAPPY BIRTHDAY POOKHI!!! And aishu,,bada achcha notes likhte ho tum..i m impressed..wah wah!! yeh compliment tha?😆

Originally posted by: chandgothia

Aish...it couldnt have been better..really??.loved every bit of it...specially der first night...truly...madly...deeply in love wid ur writing.so much of praises, 🤗..it can never be enough...the desire to read more and more is always der...loved those lines in the first part describing the plot of UNPREDICTABLE LOVE ... >>>which one? the ending wala?

I knw its too early to tell u to update soon but plz dooo.arre yrr now it's feelings turn😆..natasha ko zyaada tana mat...make sure jodha gets job in his company only and dey having some cute romantic moments in the office which are not spoiled by natasha...and make sure u add a character that would lust for jodha which would ignite jalal and show his possessiveness towards her..haha😆...itni saari cheeze office mei😲😆.... love it loads...❤️ huh! you should say love you loads😡

Originally posted by: Sofia3000

OMG this was awesome updates i truly love it ❤️❤️😃 thanx yaah🤗
the way jodha got jealous of natsha lol 😆 she was cute? haina?😆dat was really good and they night speechless i hope you liked it?
cant wait for the next chapter for jalal reaction 😆 haan...let's see😆and jodha anger and mad at jalal and natsha 😉 but will she be able to pass the interview😆
#with_love_bubbles❤️

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Commented below.😆

Originally posted by: Pookhi

First of all, Congrats on the new thread Aisha!!🥳🥳 thnx yaah🤗
Secondly, thanks for the birthday wish. It means ALOT.😳 you means a lot🤗 {to me}😆

And thirdly, I wanna tell you about the story.😃 {}

The first part of your update was very romantic with Jalal and Jodha.😆😊 Very cutee. thnk you..it was the toughest😆

And then moving onto the next morning, yeh Rishika bhi na..😡 Akdha ko tease karti rehti hai.😆 vo harqate he aisi kerte hain😆

and BOOM! Then comes Natasha's entry.🤣 Three Hugs!!😲 and Jodha is jealous.😆 After all, she is Jallu's wife.😳 But Natasha seems like pretty nice to me.😆 she is nice yaah, positive one😆

and Jodha's thinking is right, when husband doesn't agree then ask Father-in-Law. He will surely help.😆 and yes! Father in law agreed!🥳 yeah...the weird FIL agreed😆

And now this part about Jodha is so cute, how she searches Google for Natsha, Jalal, and Veer's interviews. Wait a moment, Veer.. and Natasha..😉 LOL, I am thinking too much.😆 noo...you will get to know soon😆

Now, am excited to see what Jodha and Jalal do in his company and what kind of troubles Jodha faces. let me tell you the biggest trouble - JALAL😆

Please update soon..!!😛


Love,
Pookhi ;) i know😆

Originally posted by: Sweet_sonai

congratulations for a new thread!!!! thnx yrr🤗
nd now coming to the update
it was as usual an awesome one.. hey...again thnx🤗
the first part was romantic, cute... hey...once agin thnx😆
nd then natasha's entry... jodha jealous... three hugs with jalal... she should be jealous!!!! yeah..it's her right😆
overall another mesmerising update... loved it thoroughly... really?
cont soon!!!