||UNPREDICTABLE LUV #5|| CLOSED|| new link added - Page 5

Originally posted by: chandgothia

Aish...it couldnt have been better...loved every bit of it...specially der first night...truly...madly...deeply in love wid ur writing...it can never be enough...the desire to read more and more is always der...loved those lines in the first part describing the plot of UNPREDICTABLE LOVE ...

I knw its too early to tell u to update soon but plz dooo...natasha ko zyaada tana mat...make sure jodha gets job in his company only and dey having some cute romantic moments in the office which are not spoiled by natasha...and make sure u add a character that would lust for jodha which would ignite jalal and show his possessiveness towards her... love it loads...❤️

Originally posted by: ...prithibi...

yrr truly said...nd great idea..

Originally posted by: chandgothia

Thanks..

Only if she takes my idea...😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Pookhi

<font color="#6600FF">First of all, Congrats on the new thread Aisha!!🥳🥳
Secondly, thanks for the birthday wish. It means ALOT.😳

And thirdly, I wanna tell you about the story.😃

The first part of your update was very romantic with Jalal and Jodha.😆😊 Very cutee.

And then moving onto the next morning, yeh Rishika bhi na..😡 Akdha ko tease karti rehti hai.😆

and BOOM! Then comes Natasha's entry.🤣 Three Hugs!!😲 and Jodha is jealous.😆 After all, she is Jallu's wife.😳 But Natasha seems like pretty nice to me.😆

and Jodha's thinking is right, when husband doesn't agree then ask Father-in-Law. He will surely help.😆 and yes! Father in law agreed!🥳

And now this part about Jodha is so cute, how she searches Google for Natsha, Jalal, and Veer's interviews. Wait a moment, Veer.. and Natasha..😉 LOL, I am thinking too much.😆

Now, am excited to see what Jodha and Jalal do in his company and what kind of troubles Jodha faces.

Please update soon..!!😛


Love,
Pookhi ;)</font>