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@Zayn_1Dholic

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

And i am ur sweetheart aishu???then ur JAAN dhadakta hain only because of me...after all i am ur sweet sa dil...sweetheart!!!!how old r u aishu??i m just 14..🤣🤣 LOVE U.LOVE U.LOVE U.LOVE U.

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swetha

@sw123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

awesome update dear 👏

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

First of all CONGRATS for the new thread 👏 Now... to the update nice one as usual

Romantic first part ... You descibed the ambience so well... outside the room and inside as well... So sweet 😆 Jealous Jodha unknotting jala's tie he he ... So she wants keep an eye on natasha and jalal 😉 really excited see how her interview goes

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

super-duper update dear... hope so u r not going to create MU b/w JJ.. continue soon & do pm

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gauriS

@gauriS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

congrats for the new thread dear🥳

update was really hot dekh abhi bhi dhuaan nikal raha hai☺️

the morning was pretty too😉

but didnt like this girl natasha. kitna chipakti hai Ja se. jaldi se use dafa karo😆

update soon...

Edited by gauriS - 10 years ago

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jhansi_chowdary

@jhansi_chowdary

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

replies to aise de rhi ho jaise UL ke baare me pehli baar sun rhi ho anyways waiting for feelings nd after that UL nd thanxs for pm

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yurimehta11

@yurimehta11

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Whole chapter is awesome aisha 👏 👏
aur tere efforts clearly dikh rahe hai
very nice chapter
it has everything
love passion jealousy
Whole SR part 😳
What a SR intense passionate
👏
song selection is also good
At first I feel natasha was okay but later her interview about Jalal
I feel something fishy
I hope she doesnt create a rift between joja unknowingly
Jo jealousy is looking dangerous to me

Edited by yurimehta11 - 10 years ago

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Arisha

@MesmerizinArish

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Congos for new thread...waiting for next update...update soon!

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Krina

@cuty1997

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

finally you give the update aysha.😊 it's awesome update.👏 update soon

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...jaskaran...

@...jaskaran...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Awesome updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏👏Both the updates are marvellous... and the SR😳😳😳... is too cute and romantic... itni sadgi se pesh karne ki kya zarurat thi😆😆😆... and thank god u made the mind to continue the updates after their marriage.. it will be a new twist.. and like a new story to read.. with such a writer😛😛😛😛... i know i have not commented on the last chappy.. but i always read them.. sorry for that one... and thank god im not much late... in this one... and congratulations for ur new thread...😊😊 ... hmm...liked the new jealousy track.. dont know if its a long or short one.. but i always like jealousy.. especially if it ends in a romantic way😉😉😉...update soon..and love uuu