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Very nice yaar part 4 likahe kiya?

Sorry guys I had not updated it Fr long. But I was busy. Will update by noon

Originally posted by: karishma.s

Sorry guys I had not updated it Fr long. But I was busy. Will update by noon

yes update soon..warna .. 🤣

Chapter 4
So sorry yaar guys. I was extremely busy. So could not post. Here is chapter 4. Enjoy

Jodha(self talk) : ab hum kya Karein. Agar shehensha ko bhitar nahi aane diya to inke mitr ko humare sambandh ka Satya gyaat ho jayega aur yeh to Mughal sultanate ke liye accha nahi hoga. Hum rani hone ke kartavya se Bhaag nahi sakte. Lekin ab humme unka saamna karne ki ksamta nahi hai.
Surya: babisa jalal bahar reh Gaye hai. Lagta hai kisi se baat Kar rahe honge. Hum unhe bula late hai ( and tends to go)
Jodha ( realising that jalal will refuse) : Ji unse kahiyega ki humne unhe bulaya hai.
Surya ( putting on a naughty expression) : ji babisa. Abhi aate hai hum aapke pati ko leke.
(And surya leaves to get jalal)
Jodha ( self talk): hey kanha kyu kyu humare saath Aisa. Jab hum unhe dekhna tak nahi chahte tab apne Aisa kyun ... Kintu ab hum voh jodha nahi rehe joh unse prem karti thi. Unke liye humare hridaya mein koi bhav nahi hai.
Jalal (self talk) : hum aapke saath nahi a sakte surya. Jodha begum ko zubaan di thi ki hum unke khwaabgah mein nahi jayenge. Tabhi voh Agra mein rahengi. Hum Jaante hai ki voh humme Milna nahi chahte aur agar hum aaye ton voh Agra chod degi. Agar Aisa hua toh hum mar jayenge. Unka Agra mein Renha humare paas Isi ehsaas ne Hume zinda rakha hai. Humme Khud unki ek zhalak nahi Dekhi hai 6 Mahino se unke bimaar hone ki khabar par bhi nahi. Tum khusnaseeb ho surya ki unhone tumhe toh unse Milne diya. Ab hum tumse unki halat ke bare main pooch sakte hai.
Surya( coming out): jalal kaha reh Gaye!! Bahar kya Kar rahe ho? Chalo babisa tume bula rahi hai.
Jalal: ( shocked n elated): kya!! Hume bula rahi hai?
Surya: aur nahi toh kya jalal. Patni hain voh tumhari. Unke kadaachit tumhari upasthiti main humse baar karni hai. Kitna Dhyan Rakhti hai voh maryaada ka.
Jalal ( is lost n happy): chalo surya jaldi.
Surya: haan haan bilkul chalo ( naughty expression)
Jodha is lying on the bed. Really weak n Moti is giving her the medicines. Guard announces the arrival. Jodha stiffens
Jodha( self talk) : itna Samay ho Gaya. Lekin Hume ise koi antar nahi patda. Hum unse yeh saaf keh denge.
Jalal n surya enter the room.
Jalal is just gazing at her. He had been dying for even a glimpse of her since the last six months. Now he just can't take his eyes off. He feels like crying looking at her weak form knowing well that he is reason of it.
jodha on the other hand does not wish to look at him but wishes to see him once after long so looks up at him once then averts her gaze sideways. This does not go unnoticed by jalal. His happiness of seeing her now gets replaced by fear of facing her.
Surya: leejiye a gaye apke Pati. Laughing.
Jodha: Han toh ap apne baare mein kuch bats rahe the.
Surya. Haan hum yeh keh rahe the ki hum jalal ko Bachpan se jaante hai. Aur humne Suna ki Aapne humare jalal ka hridaya Jeet kiya hai aur humare Mitra ko prem karna Sikha diya. Hume toh laga ki jalal kabhi bhi badlega nahi. ( naughty expression looking at jalal )
At surya's remark jodha gets more wounded inside
Jodha( self talk): Sahi kaha Aapne surya ji. Aapke mitr kabhi nahi Badal sakte. Humne hi bhool ki inpe Vishwas karke.
Jalal figures out what she is thinking n thinks that matters are getting worse now. He needs to talk to jo in private.
Jalal : accha surya tum jodha se mile. Ab chalo unhe aaram karne do.
Jodha: surya ji, Hume apse Milke bahut accha laga. Humne suna hai bandiyon se ki aap achi talwaar chala lete hai. Jab hum thik ho jaye toh hum apko ek chunouti avashya denge. Laughs..
Surya: ha bhabisa. Ab hum chalte hai. Aaram kijiye.
Surya goes out of room

Precap: jo n jalal talk

nice update dear...😊i loved the story👏...and it must be so painful for both of them seeing each other lke this...who cant be without one another have lived 6 months away from each other...awww😔😭waiting for the confrontation between jodha and jalal..do update soon😳and pm me please😎

Beautiful...jalal bechara..nd jodha 2..update soon.nd pm me when u update

Awesome update. Please continue and pm if possible

Guys I know people want jo n jalal together. But I want jalal to realise how hurt jo is actually. It will happen but after some time. Till then enjoy the chapters. Will try to update soon

Originally posted by: karishma.s

Guys I know people want jo n jalal together. But I want jalal to realise how hurt jo is actually. It will happen but after some time. Till then enjoy the chapters. Will try to update soon

Awesome blossom
Lovec it
Update nxt part fast