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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
pls.continue soon
please do pm nxt time
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice dear...
I hope it is shown in the show except abortion... as I want jalal to beg forgiveness from Jodha & she should restrain hrself from him... I want jalal to suffer for cheating on jodha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Jo means Shart 😆 Good one. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Superb chapter dear!!!!!!!! Update it soon!!!!!!!😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3 of the os guys! Thanks for the support
Jalal: kya surya aa raha hai? Yeh tho Bahut achhi Khabar di rukaiya. Unke istaqbal ki tayaariyan ki jaye.
Rukaiya: ji jalal, humnein afsaran ko hukm de diya hain. Aaap fikr mat kijiye. Sab kuch aap ke hisab se hi hoga jashn mein.
Jalal: jaante ho rukaiya, humne surya ko bola tha ki humara ek rajwanshi se nikah hua hai. Kash hum use jodha begum se Milva paate. Khair, jab voh humara chehra nahi dekhna chahti tho humare dost se toh voh kabhi nahi milengi . Aur hum unhe takleef bhi nahi dena chahte. Bahut kuch kar diya hai humne aur hum surya ko bhi Kya kahenge.
Rukaiya: jalal , hum jaante hai ki jodha begum aapke Milna nahi chahti lekin agar hum kahenge ki unke apke dost se na Milne par Mughal sultanat ko sharminda hona hoga toh Hume ya keen hai ki voh zaroor man jayeigi. Hum unhe paigam bhej denge.
Jalal: Thik hai rukaiya.

Jodha gets the message. She writes back to rukaiya that she is sorry and she cannot make it since she is genuinely sick. Rukaiya and jalal confirm with hakim about her condition.
Hakim: ji shehensha, jodha begum Bahut kamzor hai. Chal fir nahi skati, thik se khana bhi nahi khati. Unke Aram karna behat zaroori hai.
Jalal and rukaiya understand and nod.

Surya comes to the palace and embraces jalal.
Jalal: kaise hoh surya, 2 Saale ho Gaye tumhe dekhe.
Surya: haan. Ab samay barbaad mat karo jalal , jaldi se bhaabisa se Milva do.
Jalal and rukaiya look at each other.
Jalal: NAhi surya, voh Bahut Bimar hai. Tum unse mil nahi Paoge.
Surya: woh nahi aa skati toh Kay hua, hum to unse Milne jaa sakte hain na?
Jalal hesitates but agrees.

Surya and jalal reach jodha's room
Maid comes and gives paigam to jodha that shehensha's friend wants to come in to meet her.jodha hesitantly agrees thinking abot the pride of the Mughal sultanat.
Surya: bhaabisa
The use of the word bhaabisa surprises jodha. She was expecting some Mughal. Shehensha ka rajwanshi mitra hai? Wonders jodha.

Surya comes to her bedside and greets her respectfully. She tries taking effort to get up but surya stops her by telling her not to stress herself.
Jodha unable to hold her curiosity: aap ka naam jaan sakte hain hum aur ek rajwanshi hote hue bhi aap shehensha ke mitr hai? Yeh baat asscharyajanak hai?
Surya: jab ek rajwanshi ek Mughal se vivas kar skati hai toh hum dono mitra kyun nahi oh sakte?
Jodha : smiling, looking at his expressions, toh aap shehensha ke dost kab se hain?
Surya: Bachpan se. Kyun jalal?
Turning around surya does not find jalal there.
Surya: are jalal kaha Gaya? Bhi tar kyun nahi aya.
Jodha starts to panic.

Precap: will jalal be allowed to enter the room by jodha ?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just wonderful & awesome chappy...but pls pls PM me from next time!!!!!!!😳 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Nice update
continue soon
Edited by khushiparmar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
awesome part update part 4 fast and plz do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
nice OS...
Jalal should really realize what all words he had used to her in the show...
that was so harsh and she didnt deserve them at all...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
REALLY AWESOME...😊
Plz continue...

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