AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 4 - Chap 17(11 Oct) - Page 16

Originally posted by: abhi786

PP another wonderful chapter... So it's sanjay who kidnapped the boy & also beat him ... Poor Richo, how can he be so cruel to the little kid.. JO was right how can she marry him ? Did Sanjay ask her he will accept Richo as his son ? Or He just wanted only JO not the baby ? I am sure JO will agree to marry him if he really accepted Richo as his kid, but he didn't..

yap...selfish banda!!! 😡

I just liked the way Jalaal consoled his son & also curious about what he knows about his father ?

jalal is being all out daddy these days😆

I am waiting to see how Jalaal will make JO agree for the marriage, as only marriage is the solution as now she may not have any feelings towards Jalaal as he is a rapist, but after marriage he will be her husband & father to his son, how much she may deny it, but her wife feelings will come out, espeically seeing a pati like Jalaal 😆

do u really think a passnt lover can be a good pati???😕

Jallu will surely going to waiting to show his family his lover & his son back in his life to the WHOLE WORLD..

yap...😃

Originally posted by: Pals2411

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN CHAPTER PP😛...YOU KNOW TO HANDLE DIFFERENT KINDS OF EMOTIONS QUITE WELL IN YOUR WRITING😛

chal jhuti kuch bhi 😡

JALLU-RICO DIALOGUES AND NEW FEELINGS WERE SUPERB...IT SHOWED THE EMOTIONAL FATHER-SON BOND BETWEEN THEM...JALLU CAN SEE THE CHANGING EMOTIONS WITHIN HIM WHEN RICO IS AROUND AND IS DEALING WITH HIM WITH UTMOST CARE (SOMETHING THAT HE IS NOT MUCH USED TOO)

yap...see he is changing...i hope jodha notices the same u noticed😆

I LOVED SANJAY-JALLU FACE-OFF...WE ACTUALLY GOT A TEDA JALAL HERE😉 (JA MEIN TILL NOW I ONLY HAVE SEEN A LIMP IN THE FORM OF TEDA)...A MAN WHO IS SO PRONE TO ANGER AND FOR WHOM GETTING SOMEONE KILLED IS NO BIG DEAL😡 (HERE IT WAS HIS SON'S CASE)...HE WAS QUITE IN CONTROL HERE😆...ACTUALLY I ENJOYED IT A LOT ...THE AAR-PAAR DIALOGUES, JALLU'S SMIRKS AND SMILES ON SEEING SANJAY LOSE SLOWLY AND THE FINAL PUNISHMENT WAS ALL SUPERBLY WRITTEN...

dats my TEDA version of jalal...😎

NOW WAITING FOR 'MARRY ME"😉...LIKHNA SHURU KAR JALDI...

mehi likhti...😡

PS: HEMA, PREET AND ANUSHKA'S FFS ARE ON MY LIST...🥱...

KITNA SAARA PADNA HAI MUJHE AUR🥱🥱...BUT I WILL DO SO SOON...

tu toh hai hi aisi dhakkan😡

waise tera FF kitna door hai...😳

Originally posted by: niveasree

Awesome chapter

thanks for pm😊

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Did I forget to comment on the previous chapter?😲

pata nehi...kia tha shayad

Love this Jalal. He is a total shaitan😆

😲

that sanjay😡 did he actually think that Jodha would still love him even after knowing that he was about to kill her son?😆 dream on.

mungerilal😆

Wish Jalal was crazy about Jodha in the show just like this.Hope Salim gets to know about his father..

yap..pata toh chalna hi hai 😆

Precap*faints*

😆

Originally posted by: --Sush116--

PP di...Awesome chappy...Just loved it...really loved Rico-Jalal scenes!!!! So touching!!!! 😳 😳

I am very happy that now our little Rico will go to his MAMMA!!!!!

yap...me too very happy for him...lil boy deserves happiness

Bengali mein kya kehete hain usko---hmm...shayed..."Durdharsho".means Awsesome blossom!!!!!😳 😳

awee...u know bengali...😆

Originally posted by: ashwini.bhr

Awesom update,precap is too good.
Cannot wait for the next update.

Originally posted by: RKholic

Congrats for the new thread 😳
Superb chappy loved the precap 👏

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

PP.. Let us discuss about this Sanjay first!! This guy who proclaims as an eternal lover of Jodha, why didn't he stand for her support during her tough times? If I rightly understand he's ready to support her if she aborted the baby. Ok, Jodha being an orphan she can't think of killing an unborn baby, be whatever the circumstance is!! Being her lover, he'd have understood her; I admit it is not easy for a man to accept the baby of his lover, but it is neither impossible if he loved her really.. ok.. fine he need not marry her immediately, but should have stood by her, persuaded and convinced her later for marriage.. with time all the wounds get healed, right?? Had he been close to them, who knows, he too might have started liking Rico.. But what did he do for his Jodha? Left her all alone and after 4 and half years kidnap and kill her son?? What he'd have achieved by this? Jodha? Revenge? Mental peace? Poor chap, see now he had become a slave of Jalal..

jodha ki kismat hi kharab hai...pehle jallu then sanjay...no love luck for her...

waise I still hope jallu will fill her life with happiness

Jalal.. He once again proved how dangerous he can be to his enemies.. He made Sanjay a slave, instead of killing him.. Hmm!! There is a famous dialog in one of Ram gopal Varma's telugu movie, where the heroine says to hero after a terrific fight with villains, "Mujhe un logon se jyada, tumhe dekhe darr lag raha hain". I think Jodha's dialog would be the same if she comes to know of this punishment 😆

waise she is already much scared of him...our kitna daregi...😆

Rico.. oh poor little boy!! You had to suffer because of your parents!! But good, now you have your pappa with you.. I'm just waiting to see this boy's reaction when he knows Jalal is his father..

am also very eager to write it...kal raat bohot socha is bare me...finally got some points😎

Abdul.. what can I say.. I love this man.. without him Jalal is incomplete 😉

yap...MAN abdul 😆

And love u loads PP for your writing.. you are a devilish writer.. you bring up emotions so well, be it pain or humor or romance.. Mwahh!! ❤️

yeh humour kaha mila tujhe???😲