AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 4 - Chap 17(11 Oct)

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Gudiyalovesguru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Fantastic update!!!!
finally truth is out...
jodha deserves happiness...
eagerly waiting to read next update...
continue soon...

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Parijatrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

pp update kar will she accept to marry hope she agrees for rhico as he need his dad, pp after jallu left her and went to delhi what happened how she knows hamida, why she refused to abort and how samjay left her how she landed in kolkata
pp see i cant post much from mobile but i want update soon sunday karde pls pp

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks
pp update kar will she accept to marry hope she agrees for rhico as he need his dad, pp after jallu left her and went to delhi what happened how she knows hamida, why she refused to abort and how samjay left her how she landed in kolkata
pp see i cant post much from mobile but i want update soon sunday karde pls pp

abhi tak likhna shuru nehi kia...kaise update???

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

PP.. I was referring to the humor in other SS which u dumped after one chapter 😆

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Prianka this story is going just mindblowing! I don't see JA anymore but i always get excited whenever i get a pm for this story. I wasn't able to comment for previous updates due to personal reasons but i have loved each and every part of this 13th chapter. The way you penned the last update it was just marvellous. When jodha tried to get away from jalal but unfortunately lost her to him, you wrote it elegantly not a sign of disturbance but jodha's state of mind could be easily understood. The helplessness and her numb state was so naturally shown by you.
Then this update, though what sanjay did was extremely wrong and he deserved punishment but i wish what he said to jalal about how one feels after losing your love gets inside his head as he should know what he did was a sin and there was no way he would have done that thing. Loved the part where jalal felt extremely teary when rico hugged him, an unknown feeling was surfacing inside his heart of a father. You penned rico's state so amazingly...the little boy scared of that insane person and his muttering due to the fear was relatable.
Fabulous likhti ho tum! Zara sa talent yaha bhi pass on kardo yaar, and don't worry tumhari story mei jalal jodha ka kuch ho na ho...abdul ki tumhe fikar krne ki zarurat nhi hai XD
Update sooonish :))

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Akanksha Sinha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

awesome ff...🤗

plz pm me the next ch....

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Parijatrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Pp u are updating na tomo,,, pls pls update if u have not written yet than pls do write now pls pls pp

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks
Pp u are updating na tomo,,, pls pls update if u have not written yet than pls do write now pls pls pp

am still in ofc...kaise likhu😭

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: hemakeerti
PP.. I was referring to the humor in other SS which u dumped after one chapter 😆

are hema uske liye am looking for a writer😃

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ptamom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

This is how much I love this story. As I was making dinner some questions came to my mind. Jodha could have aborted the child and carry on with her life. But she didn't, why? Please don't get me wrong but I am trying to find out if there is a part of her that is attracted to Jalal. I am not trying to minimize what she went through but it is puzzling and it was mentioned by Sanjay and Jalal during their confrontation. That she chose the child and not him. You would think in such an instance the person might not want a constant reminder of that night? Just curious to understand Jodha's perspective. Thanks