AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 4 - Chap 17(11 Oct) - Page 14

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

Awesom update,precap is too good.
Cannot wait for the next update.

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

this time am with u hema...

waise where is ur comment😡

thodi hi der mein.. 😊

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

me too😡

bas yeh varsha hi hopeless hai😆

Wah wah.. wah wah.. kya bola PP.. she is really hopeless 😆

Congrats for the new thread 😳
Superb chappy loved the precap 👏

PP.. Let us discuss about this Sanjay first!! This guy who proclaims as an eternal lover of Jodha, why didn't he stand for her support during her tough times? If I rightly understand he's ready to support her if she aborted the baby. Ok, Jodha being an orphan she can't think of killing an unborn baby, be whatever the circumstance is!! Being her lover, he'd have understood her; I admit it is not easy for a man to accept the baby of his lover, but it is neither impossible if he loved her really.. ok.. fine he need not marry her immediately, but should have stood by her, persuaded and convinced her later for marriage.. with time all the wounds get healed, right?? Had he been close to them, who knows, he too might have started liking Rico.. But what did he do for his Jodha? Left her all alone and after 4 and half years kidnap and kill her son?? What he'd have achieved by this? Jodha? Revenge? Mental peace? Poor chap, see now he had become a slave of Jalal..

Jalal.. He once again proved how dangerous he can be to his enemies.. He made Sanjay a slave, instead of killing him.. Hmm!! There is a famous dialog in one of Ram gopal Varma's telugu movie, where the heroine says to hero after a terrific fight with villains, "Mujhe un logon se jyada, tumhe dekhe darr lag raha hain". I think Jodha's dialog would be the same if she comes to know of this punishment 😆

Rico.. oh poor little boy!! You had to suffer because of your parents!! But good, now you have your pappa with you.. I'm just waiting to see this boy's reaction when he knows Jalal is his father..

Abdul.. what can I say.. I love this man.. without him Jalal is incomplete 😉

And love u loads PP for your writing.. you are a devilish writer.. you bring up emotions so well, be it pain or humor or romance.. Mwahh!! ❤️

Originally posted by: Rasika29

Awesome update...😊

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Sanjay you bloody 🤬 ... kidnapping i can understand your pain & frustration ... BUT BEATING AN INNOCENT CHILD & BRUISING HIM 😡 IS JUST UNACCEPTABLE 😡 ... he could have beaten jalal instead ... taken out his anger ... what so ever ... but why on a child 😡

bhale hi rico is a child of a rapist !!! but baccha is a baccha ... its innocent ... nobody has the right to cause the child so much pain where he is not at all responsible !!!!😡

i can understand...Jalal ka beta hai...tere liye toh khud ke bete se bhi badkar...😆

jalal should have stabbed that 🤬 why did he spare him 😡 ... stupid jalal 😡

he gave worse punishment dear

Originally posted by: PupCat

Chapter 13

AWESOME!

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Impatient jalal cursing the roads while driving the car 😆 ... gosh I could feel his anxiety to meet his little one 😭 ... how terrible he must be feeling ... seeing his son beaten so badly 😭 ... but salim was a brave boy indeed ... aakhir mughal jo hai 👍🏼 !!!

itni tariif toh jalal ne abhi tak salim ki nehi ki 😆

Uff the way jalal embraced salim ... & consoled him blissful !!! u have written it so beautifully PPip ⭐️

thanku dear😳