AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 4 - Chap 17(11 Oct) - Page 87

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Lovely lovely lovey chapter PP😳😛...I am loving the way you weave and tell your story in every chapter...Great punches in dialogues make the chapters all the more interesting...

chal jhuti...kitni fekti hai😡

I loved Jalal-Rico shopping experience...But he doesn't know to deal with a child😆...If Rico had not mentioned Jodha's name, Jalal would not have calmed down😉...Want Rico to make Jalal's life a bit difficult ...I want Jodha entering their scene now😳

aila Jodha toh kolkata me hai...how will she enter😲

waise she is coming to MUM very soon😉

I am slowly liking this Jalal

haw...yeh maine kya pad liya😲😲...firse kaho kya yeh sach hai😭...galat likha hai tumne...am I right

(not for his crime😡😡😡 --- he needs to be taught a good lesson by Jodha and I am waiting for that)...because he is in command most of the time, especially around MA and Ruku which I so wish to see in JA but don't😡...Again here, the way Jalal dealt with MA and the indirect 'dhamki' he gave to her and all regarding the way Rico's mother should be treated makes it endearing...

awww...toh yeh chakkar hai😆

I hope you are writing😡...Inspiration SR se lena😳😆...I am not leaving you...😛...Jaldi jaldi haath chala...

SR ne itna inspire kar dia ke...likhna bhul gaye😈

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Awesome Priyanka... sorry yaar... Not commenting in detail... I am so badly stuck at work...plus so much to catch up...

I can understand dear...apna haal bhi kuch aisa hi hai😭

waise u dont take tension...main bhi slow update kar rahi...so that tujhe padne ka jyada pressure na ho😆

I am just loving every chapter...I read last two chapters... mind blowing.. still one to go... Soon they will be together... but Jalal is pampering this kid buying so much... I don't blame him... He also wants to share his love ... I love their shopping trip and many more...

aisa baap kaha sabko milte hai😆

I love Ricco... so sweet boy ...he is fully trained under Jodha.. so sweet...

haan...Major Jodha😛

Game is other side now... before Jodha was hiding who is Ricco's father and Now... hiding Ricco's mother...heheh loved your imagination...

ab isme kya imagine kia maine😲

ONCE AGAIN... U R AWESOME...MIND BLOWING WRITER... LOVE U... If i got chance i will comment in detail.

koyee gal nehi yaar...comment ka tension mat le...bas pad lena...love u re🤗