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bhaag idher se😆
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Wow just read chapter 3 plus teaser what a awesome bonus!!
Oh my god chapter 3 was too funny🤣🤣 , I am a fan of your humour I loved reading it , amazingly entertaining ohh I loved when jodha was saying pure Hindi and how she was asking mirza how to say greatness in Hindi!! LOL!!😆😆 And jalal knew something was up hehe😆 , and teaser was a awesome bonus lol jodha calling him pagaloo!!! LOL! 🤣
Can't wait for the next chapter which obviously will be mind blowing!!⭐️

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Wow just read chapter 3 plus teaser what a awesome bonus!!

U LIKED IT????
Oh my god chapter 3 was too funny🤣🤣 , I am a fan of your humour I loved reading it , amazingly entertaining ohh I loved when jodha was saying pure Hindi and how she was asking mirza how to say greatness in Hindi!! LOL!!😆😆 And jalal knew something was up hehe😆 , and teaser was a awesome bonus lol jodha calling him pagaloo!!! LOL! 🤣
HEHEHEE!!! THAT'S MY JODHA🤣
Can't wait for the next chapter which obviously will be mind blowing!!⭐️
I HOPE IT TOOO (fingers crossed)


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**CHAPTER 4**
"what u want" jalal again asked the same question "jalal voh actually...i thought...matlab maine socha ki...means i didn't thought anything...our school friends arranged a party in a club" "u r not going" said jalal before jodha could complete "per jalal" "no means no" "jalal plzz...jalal..i will be back by 12" said jodha "what?? u mean midnight???never..." said jalal nd left the place while jodha nd mirza luked at each other helplessly...they followed him to his study "jalal itz not fair...i will not talk to u"threatened jodha "perfect!! then u r not going" said jalal nd started examining a file...jodha got irritated by his behaviour while mirza was standing nd watching everything silently "jalal...plz naa" said jodha but jalal didn't said anything...at last jodha snatched his file "give it back to me" said jalal "nhi first allow me" said jodha "ohkk!!!"said jalal to which jodha nd mirza looked at him with wide eyes "of course...u can go...but wait u will not get your pocket money for 1 year...good deal naa" said jalal nd took back his file from jodha's hand nd left the place...mirza came nd stood beside jodha...she was still on her previous decision...suddenly an idea came in her mind which made her smiled evilly...mirza knew it she was upto something "jodha...i m really scared of this smile of yours" said mirza to which jodha said something something in his ear making mirza shock.
"jodha!!! itz impossible...bhai will never allow us" said mirza "i know yrr!!! yeh sab tu mujh pei chod de!!! bass tu ready ho jaa...we r going for shopping" said jodha with a grin on her face "jodha!!! i m telling you if bhai get to know about your plan naa!! he will not leave us nd i m dam sure he will kill me!!" said mirza trying to fill some 'gyan' on her little brain "uff ho!!! mirza!! do u actually like shivani?? because i have a doubt in it!!!...u know if i would be in your place ...i would have been fought with the whole world" said jodha starting her usual drama to which mirza just rolled his eyes "haan haan thiik hai... per shopping..kis liye?" asked mirza to which jodha slapped her hand on her forehead "why we need clothes mirza...obviously not for cooking naa?" asked jodha in frustration "uhh!! jodha...i didnt meant that...means why shopping now?" asked mirza to which jodha punched his stomach hard "aoowww" screamed mirza in pain "gadhe!!!! we should have hot clothes for the party naa vaise bhi the dress code is 'DRESS TO IMPRESS' " said jodha to which mirza nodded his head in agreement "per we need money for buying clothes" said mirza with a fearful smile "uske liye toh we have to go to lion's den" said jodha nd both gulped their saliva knowing what to come. meanwhile jalal was on his phone talking to some client of his "yes...mr khanna...the deal is final, i m just coming there" said jalal nd turned to leave...but to his surprise mirza nd jodha was standing on the door with a sugary smile plastered on their faces "i have already said that u both r not going...so go nd do something useful" said jalal nd was about to go but jodha's voice stopped him"JALAL!!! tum bhi naa...tumne kaha naa that we should not go so we r not going...don't take tension" said jodha to which jalal turned to her with his brows raised"really?" asked jalal "yes bhai" said mirza to which jodha nodded her head"good!!! first time in your life u have done something correct" said jalal nd was about to leave the room but was again stopped by the demons.."ja...jalal voh we r free today...so thought to go for shopping...u know naa i don't have decent clothes to wear...all are too short" said jodha knowing that it will definitely work nd it did "ohk!! come with me...itz on my way to office" said jalal to which jodha nd mirza looked at nervously"bhai!! why r u troubling...we will go bass aap...umm...aap" "give us the money"said jodha knowing mirza will take a year in saying it "i will drop u nd thatz final" said jalal nd left to the car park while mirza nd jodha looked at each other like saying'something is better than nothing' and followed him
**IN THE CAR**
jodha was sitting beside jalal while mirza was in the back seat "do u want me to pick u up or u will come with the driver" asked jalal "driver" both said in union...to which jalal nodded nd called some one "jalal do u like liers" asked jodha "what rubbish...everyone knows i hate liers" said jalal to which jodha nd mirza looked at each other nervously...soon they reached the mall nd noticed that there was no one...only staffs nd four bodyguards...jodha got scared looking them as she had never experienced this before "i think...hum galat jagah aa gye hai" said jodha "no!! we r in the right place...these bodyguards will be with u...your driver will come in few minutes...no one is here except the staff...so there is no danger. nd here is my card" said jalal handling jodha his credit card nd went back to his car...jodha was still in shock "your brother is mad...no one is here...what the hell" said jodha to mirza who was busy asking something to one of the bodyguard "itni mast body kaise banayi...haan?" asked mirza to the bodyguard "aa jaa mai batati hu" said jodha in anger
soon they went inside the mall...no one was there...they firstly reached to girl's quarter"how can i help u ma'am" asked the sales girl but before jodha could say anyhthing mirza spoke up "plz help me" said mirza but soon shut up his mouth on getting a glare from jodha "i want something really hot...u know" said jodha to which the sales girl smiled nd nodded "give her hot chocolate then...i want something hot" mimicked mirza nd got a punch from jodha as a gift...jodha saw all dresses but one dress caught her attention...a black colour short dress
(something like this)
"i want this only" said an excited jodha "le lo...but make sure bhai doesn't see u"said mirza "yrr tu chup ker...your bhai is jealous of me" said jodha scrunching her nose in anger "nd why is it so?" asked mirza paying off the bill by jalal's credit card"because he can't get a figure like me, that is the reason he don't likes me to wear these type of dresses" said jodha thinking of the reason behind his rude behaviour regarding her dressing style...mirza burst out into laughter listening jodha's thinking "are u mad jodha, bhai have a good physique nd why will he desire of a girly figure??... to wear these short dresses!!!...oh god jodha u r really mentally challenged" said mirza making jodha angry "dono bhai pagloo hai" muttered jodha "i heard it!!! u again said that word...u know bhai will kill u if he got to know about this name which u gave him" said mirza "acha jii!! nd what about that day, when he threw my dog out of my own house when u all came to delhi" said jodha remembering that day of her life when she got to know that jalal threw her pet dogs out of her house and no one said anything to him...she cried all day nd night on her b'day "haan toh your dogs licked bhai's face...nd u did it knowingly" asked mirza narrowing his eyes "arre!!! are u my bff or him?" asked jodha to change the topic but before mirza could say anything he got a shock..."jodha!!! your dress is of 2.5 lakhs" said mirza "what r u saying...return it" said jodha knowing jalal will ask him about it "i already paid the bill" said mirza"what r u saying...r u mad!! kaun aisi harket kerta hai" said jodha "koi nii!! letz go home now" said mirza to which jodha nodded nd both left to khan mansion
**IN JODHA-JALAL ROOM**
jodha nd mirza was pacing from one end of the room to the other..the problem was not that it was costly...the trouble was the dress...jalal don't like jodha to wear these types of clothes may he was possessive...don't know? "what happen to both of u" said jalal who was standing by the door from the last 5 minutes nd was seeing them walking here nd there.."b..b..b...bh." stuttered mirza "bhaai" said jodha making both mirza nd jalal shocked "arre...i mean mirza kehna chaha raha tha" said jodha to which jalal nd mirza sigh in relief "so!! shopping over?" asked jalal walking towards his wardrobe "yes!!.."said jodha quickly thinking she is save "but what u both buy of 2.5 lakhs?" asked jalal casually taking out his tracks"tumhe kaise pata chala?" asked jodha in shock "the card was mine so i got a msg in my phone,, idiot!! nd u didn't answered me" asked jalal "umm..uhh...surprise!!!!" said jodha with fake excitement to which jalal shooked his head nd left to washroom "oye yeh kya tha?? konsa surprise?" asked mirza"chod naa!! itz already 9 nd we have only 1 hour left" said jodha to which mirza nodded nd went to accomplish their plan meanwhile jalal entered his room..oh sry their room nd saw jodha was sleeping on the couch "oh idiot...are u sleeping" asked jalal to which jodha continued her acting...not getting any response jalal got shocked as she always curses him before sleeping nd wait she is sleeping on couch...something was weird in her behaviour...jalal also slept nd turned off the light as it was a tiring day for him too...after half n hour...jodha noticed that he was asleep nd grinned at her victory...she put some pillow on the couch nd covered it with blanket nd grinned widely at her first victory...then she tip-toed nd went to washroom...she got change in her dress...nd done smoky eye make-up nd a loreal riche lipstick in fairest nude lip colour (my personal favourite 😆)...nd yea...the cute jodha was looking sexy now...she checked herself one more time nd winked herself looking at mirror...nd again silently moved out side the room where mirza was waiting for her...mirza can't believe her eyes..."u look different" said mirza in surprise "beta different nhi hot" said jodha lifting her invisible collar to which mirza rolled his eyes "chal?" said jodha "bhaai" asked mirza still in fear "kuch nhi hoga tu chal" said jodha nd dragged him to the car.
**CLUB**
they reached their nd said the driver to go... "wow!!! itz too good...i haven't attended these types of parties in my whole life" said jodha entering the night club which was dark nd blue nd pink lights were giving the 'cool effect' to it...the DJ was playing a mix of songs...all were dancing crazily nd the BARS which attracted jodha's attention...she have only saw these things in movies "kya hua...chal naa" said mirza bringing her out of her thoughts...they both started walking to find their friends nd there they spotted sunaina...mirza smiled at jodha nd ran towards her ..."hi sunaina!! whatz up?"asked mirza who was holding jodha's hand protectively as she was his responsibility now and can't leave her in such a crowd "hi!! mirza!! can't u see how i m looking?" asked sunaina who was wearing a transparent dress...flaunting off her body "woah!! u r looking hot babez" said mirza drooling her from top to bottom "oh really!! but i think i have put on some wait" said sunaina "oh really!! btw do u know kissing burns 5 calories a minute, so how about a workout?" said mirza flirtily "not a bad idea" said sunaina while jodha was luking dumbly at both of them "haaaww!! what do u mean by workout ?" asked jodha understanding the meaning but in bit nd pieces "don't stress your pea-sized brain" said mirza to which jodha pouted...after some time mirza saw a girl sitting at the bar who was looking damn hot...he told jodha to wait there to which she nodded.
meanwhile mirza reached the girl "hey!! can u please step away the bar? u r melting all the ice!!" said mirza leaning slightly on him "sry" said the girl nd turned the other side.."attitude..huh!" muttered mirza under his breadth nd again tapped her shoulder..the girl turned and raised her brows like asking 'now what?' "is your dad an art thief?" asked mirza "huh??" said the girl in disbelieve "because u are a master piece" said mirza to which the girl smiled "i have a boyfriend" said the girl to threaten mirza "i have a gold fish" said mirza "what?" asked the girl "I thought we were talking about things that didn't matter." said mirza to which the girl was fully impressed by now..."soo!! wanna have a drink?" asked the girl "noo...u have it"said mirza "why r u scared to drink?" asked the girl hitting his ego..he was denying for jodha but now it came to ego...he gulped the whole glass in one go nd was going on nd on forgetting jodha...on the other hand...jodha was getting bored but soon she noticed shivani drinking something continuously nd was looking at one direction...jodha followed her gaze nd saw mirza flirting with a a girl...jodha smirked nd went to her "hi shivani"said jodha "hellow?" said shivani in a drowsy way obviously she was drunk "what r u drinking" asked jodha "arre itz too good ...a cocktail nothing else" said shivani to which jodha agreed nd drunk it...firstly she wasn't liking it but soon she loved it..."ohk i m going...yello u drink this too" said shivani nd went to her car while jodha was drinking it continuously...mirza came to jodha "what r u drinking?" asked mirza trying to stand straight "arre aa jaa aajaa..have it" said jodha nd both continue with their drinking session nd they don't know themselves when it turned to a competition not knowing a storm is coming soon to them
AT JA-JO ROOM
jalal was not able to sleep or we can say he was missing jodha's cribbing nd curses...he went to the couch...he firstly thought to wake her but then thought to pick her up...he was about to pick her up when all the pillows fell on the floor...he was shocked then slowly everything was coming in his mind..jodha's changed behaviour nd sweet smiles"surprise??huh...u r so gone jodha" said jalal with gritted teeth nd went to mirza's room and he was right he was not their too...he called up their driver nd was again correct...they were in the club...he too went in his tracks not even change his dress...nd ordered the driver to take him in the same club.
**IN THE CLUB**
jalal reached the club "i m not going to leave them...how dare them to come here when i had already said a NO" murmured jalal nd entered the club...he saw every where but couldn't find them...he was tensed nd was about to go to the manager but then he saw a girl nd a boy having a competition in drinking wine...he shooked his head in disapproval nd was about to leave the place but wait they were looking like!!!!!! "what the f*ck!!!! jodha nd mirza!!!!!!"said jalal nd rushed to the bar ...but wait!!! jodha was wearing a short black colour one piece...for one moment jalal was drowned in her beauty but came back noticing some boys were also drooling him which made him more angry...jodha saw him coming towards them"mirza bhaag jallad aa gaya" said jodha nd both mirza nd jodha was about to run but jalal caught their arms "u both are drunk??" asked jalal in anger + disbelief "nhi toh bhai" said mirza who was moving right to left "yeah!!! thatz why u can't stand properly nd u!! jodha...i said" "paglooo!!! just shut up" said jodha cutting jalal in between "what did u said" asked jalal not able to digest this kind of weird name "PAGLOOO!! PAGLOO!! PAGLOO!!"screamed jodha while jalal was irritated with that word "JUST SHUT UP nd follow me" shouted jalal to which both jodha nd mirza kept their fingers on their lips...he was going towards the door but sensed that jodha was not following him nd he was right..mirza was walking in a zig zag manner but jodha was not at all moving...their frnds were shocked to see the most desirable man in their party nd too talking to mirza nd jodha...he went to jodha nd shaked her "come on?" said jalal but jodha was not saying anything...he tried many times but she kept mum nd carried jodha in his arms...all gasped looking at them nd started their murmuring session...jodha was on his arms nd he was scolding mirza after every minute to walk "carry me too" said mirza to which jalal glared him, but mirza sat on the floor...at last jalal called one of his bodyguard nd ordered him to carry mirza while mirza was wriggling in his hold "bhai u carry me"whined mirza like a kid...while jalal rolled his eyes...finally they reached the car...jalal settled jodha at one end and mirza on the other end...nd himself in the middle...he signalled the driver to drive the car..."how u came here?" asked jodha"udd ker" said jalal in frustration "wow!! bhai u r a hero...aap ud jer aaye" asked mirza in excitement but before jalal could punch him jodha interrupted "dekha hai tujhko jabse haaye mai toh fisal gya, lagta hai mere seene se dil nikal gya " said jodha turning jalal's face towards her holding his chin but soon mirza too turned his face towards him "Mummy se kya Daddy se bhi milaaunga tujhe, arey jo bhi main kahun tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat" "palat." said jodha nd again turned his face ."Tera dhyan kidhar hai Ye tera hero idhar hai Tera dhyan kidhar hai Ye tera hero idhar hai"said jodha "toh palat" said jodha nd mirza at the same time nd was trying to turn jalal's face to their side meanwhile jalal was getting frustrated by each passing second "SHUT UP!! JUST SHUT UP nd i m not a doll to which u r playing with" said jalal to which both stopped nd pouted;...soon they reached home...again jodha was in jalal's arm nd mirza in bodyguard's...jalal took jodha in his room nd tugged her in blanket "wait till tomorrow jodha singh" said jalal under his breadth "jodha singh nhi jodha khan pagloo"said jodha "u again said that word" said jalal "mera muh mai kuch bhi kahu" said jodha to which jalal glared her ...jodha hid herself under the blanket...jalal too went to his side nd slept...around 1 am jalal sleep broke coz of sobbing sound nd realised jodha was crying "oh no!!! kya hua jodha?" asked jalal with an irritated voice but jodha didn't stopped at last jalal snatched the blanket nd saw jodha with his phone...he took his phone from jodha "what r u doing with my phone nd why the hell u r crying?" asked jalal"tumhara phone khul nhi raha tha naa isliye mjhe rona aa gya" said jodha cleaning her nose with the blanket...jalal was looking her with a 'yuks face' "nd why do u want my phone? nd what the hell means khul nhi raha tha...obviously .it can't without the password " said jalal "vo mjhe mera fb account check kerna hai" said jodha "nd i want a new phone" said jodha nd was cribbing continuously not letting jalal to speak "OHK...U WILL GET IT...but plz shut up" said jalal "pakka..promise?" "HAAN" "pinky promise?""haan thiik hai" said jalal angrily to which jodha started jumping in happiness while jalal slapped his forehead nd wanted to kill her at that very moment "mjhe pizza khana hai" said jodha making jalal shock "are u out of your mind...at 1 am u want to eat pizza...no u will not get it" said jalal nd that was it jodha started crying loudly "ohk just shut your big mouth" said jalal angrily nd asked a servant for a pizza "i don't have a big mouth pagloo" said jodha "don't call me by that or u will not get the pizza" said jalal"sorrryyy" said jodha holding her ears which made jalal smile a bit nd at the very moment jodha got up from the bed nd walked towards jalal nd pointed to his lips "u smiled...omg u smiled" said jodha nd started jumping before jalal could say anything jodha's pizza came...she ate it fully...while jalal was looking at her who was cherishing her pizza nd at last she put the last bite in her mouth nd saw jalal was looking at her with wide eyes "u want it?" asked jodha nd was about to take out the pizza bite from her mouth when jalal stopped her "NO NO!! eat it" said jalal to which jodha nodded her head nd cleaned her hands with the blanket which jalal was not liking...he was only waiting for tomorrow
**NEXT MORNING**
jodha wake up with a pain in her head "oh god!! my head" said jodha nd at the same time there was knock on the door...she asked to come in ...nd there was a servant with a glass "ma'am jalal sir had send this for u nd told u too drink it now" said the servant to which jodha nodded nd drank it...it was really working she was feeling good!! when the servant was sure that she had drank it then as per jalal's order he told her one more thing ma'am jalal sir is waiting for u in the garden...he said that he wants u in 2 mins" told the servant nd went from there...while jodha was having flashbacks of last night nd soon she came to know all her tantrums nd gulped her saliva...she ran to the garden not realising that she hadn't changed her dress nd was still in that one piece...she came to garden nd saw mirza was already standing there with his head down nd jalal was sitting on his chair looking at pigeons "oh jodha u came...50 seconds earlier haan...not bad" said jalal coming towards her while jodha keep looking here nd there nervously "ohh!! wow!nice dress..huh?" said jalal in a threatening voice"arre yeh dress itni chotti kaise ho gyi?" said jodha trying to pull her skirt down "ohk...so what u think...what i should do?" asked jalal "no outings for a month" said mirza "no mobiles..no games nothing" "pocket money cancelled for 6 months" "80 above marks" said jodha nd mirza thinking the punishment he will give nd was going on nd on"NAAA NAA!! not at all...these are really small for u both...today i will give u a thing u both will never forget...nd your first task is...oh sry first of all i have to fulfil my promise as mughals never break their promises" said jalal nd handed jodha a brand new phone which made jodha excited but not for long time "ohk so you both can see these pigeons??isn't they cute?" said jalal looking at the 20 pigeons on his garden while jodha nd mirza nodded their head "as i liked them...i want them all in that cage...nd u both will do that vo bhi in umm..1 hour" said jalal making them shock "but jalal" "50 minutes" "bhai" "40 minutes" said jalal this time both were quite "good!! i want them in 40 minutes" said jalal nd left while mirza was glaring jodha
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sry if any mistakes..haven't read it!!
i hope u liked it nd if so then plz at least like it!!
bbye going to sleep
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Kya hope??? I know it will be AMAZINGly FUNNY🤣
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Originally posted by: aniya879

Kya hope??? I know it will be AMAZINGly FUNNY🤣

aisa he ho🤣
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aisa he ho🤣
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Okay okay I cant request you to update!! Tho tik hai Then you have to accept MY request!!🤣
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Okay okay I cant request you to update!! Tho tik hai Then you have to accept MY request!!🤣

haan iska update toh dena he hai😆

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