AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Chapter11 is awesome as usual!

Loved Jalal's concern for Rico urf Salim but Hated it wen he hurted Jo!! 😡

are pyaar se hurt kiya...😆

Anyways precap ka matlab?? 😕 u have a holiday tomorrow di?
precap ka matlab precap ka chhutti hai ...so no precap
Love u

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Fabulous update

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

PP my heart was in my mouth reading jalal's turbulent emotions 😭... i literally had tears ... gosh ... u r such an awesome writer PP 👏 ... I seriously felt soo bad for jalal ... though it is to be revealed as to why jodha is hating jalal to this extent ... lekin what she dosent know is jalal's actual truth, as to what life he has been living from 4 & half years😲 ... how much he loves her ... 😭 ... why cant she understand ??

pyaar toh karta hai...but thora confuse hai...ulta seedha kaam bhi karta hai...

so jodha is right with her stand...but yes...jalal ke liye bura toh lagta hi hai...koyee gal nehi...time will cure all

And I so so so much loved abdul here ... though abdul didnt had much space in this update ... but i am falling for him ... jalal's reply to him on the phone & he thinking & ignoring jalal's reply ... gawd he soo understanding ... i just love this chap ... ... And And And his reaction on seeing jodha in jalal's chamber ... i was like 🤣🤣 completely ... awwee man , abdul meri jaan tere muh mein paan hi paan 🤣 ...

you are falling for ABDUL!!!! 😆

mere FF me jalal se jyada Abdul ke fans hai😆

but i didnt get one thing why jodha hide the fact that rico is jalal's son while telling him about how rico got kidnapped ... & why was she enraged when jalal himself blurted out the fact that rico is his son ... whats wrong in that ... dosent she know that jalal was hunting them & it is very obvious that one day he will come to know about their son ...??

she is aware that Jalal is after her...

but she thinks he dosnt know about Rico...she desnt want him to know about Rico...she fears...he may take him away...ab y she dsnt wana let him know that...yeh toh baad me pata chalega

what was she thinking when she made up her mind to come to jalal for help .. why would he help her if rico was somebody else's son ...?? even if he had helped her out ... he would have definitely come to knw about his son ...so hiding the fact from jalal would not make any sense at all ...

i know...in fact i made it look like childish effort...see...we as a reader know its a foolish thing...but being a mother or a woman of her condition...it was like holding on to the last straw...hope I could made my point clear😃

Anyways PP ... awesome update ... i just loved it, great writing 👏 !! & plz yaar ho sake toh jodha ka gussa thoda kam karwado ... itna gussa bhi thik nahi hai na ... 🤔

PRECAP - chutti 😕 ... oye heroine tujhe chutti kyon chahiye re ...?? i will not sanction ur leave boss ... cancel kar rahi hoon mein teri chuttii ... chal wapas aaja aur precap de de 🤣 uske saath teaser bhi hoga toh kya baat hai ...😆

abhi toh epi diya...and am not fit yet...so not writing

Originally posted by: Pals2411

To tell you this chapter was awesome, is actually understating it😳...So I am not using any adjectives here😳...Honestly PP, I was a bit scared (for Jo) and nervous on how you are going to handle this JaJo mulakat...And I must tell you have tackled it brilliantly, while wording it remarkably well👏👏...

thanks lowee...am glad u liked it...tu jab tariff karti hai...toh bohot achha lagta hai

Jallu's longing, his desire, his restlessness, his anxiety, his eagerness could be clearly felt👏...Jallu surprised me for once...We know his obsessive/possessive, crazy streak for Jodha and how much he loves/desires her😳...His chain of thoughts in the first half (before his actual meeting with her) was simply superb😳...His mind was trying to tell him a lot of things, which were conflicting yet rational...On the one hand he knew he won't be able to control his feelings when he sees Jo after such a long time, at the same time he also started weighing the cons if he did not control himself...He knew he had to go slow...Again his practical dimag is back to thinking ki why she is meeting him all of a sudden after so many years...In short, this teda/monster Jalal was thinking, trying hard to suppress his feelings because he knew that this time one wrong move and he will lose Jo forever (And he will never take a chance like that)⭐️

Jalal ne thora dimag lagaya and bohot sara control kiya...result Jodha ruk gayee...warna bhag jati 😆...jallu and his monstrous desires...jo ko jhalak bhi milti...bhag jati😳

When Jodha entered and she was facing his back and then he ordered the security to lock the door and then when his smirk returned, for a second I was like ab kya'.....but what he saw after that, how he felt after that and how he acted after that was remarkable, very controlled for a man like him😊 and the reaction that Jo was giving was exactly what I thought😃...She despises him the way, he desires her...The feelings for each other are extreme and hence the reactions towards each other are diametrically opposite and strong😃...

Jalal utna budhhu hai nehi jitna dikhta hai😆...pata nehi main in dono ko kaise milayungi...they are sooo apart 🥱

Jo told him everything about Rico's kidnap and Jallu's reaction was his natural self, angry wala barging on his lady love😡...But after that, after seeing Jo's terrible state, her eyes, he felt the pain and withdrew😊...

pyaar jo karta hai...

I loved the line 'When emotions speak louder, words take a back seat'...Says it all😊

my fab one dear...

When Jo told him about Rico's kidnap, deliberately withholding Jalal's name as the father, I was like it is futile now Jo but I could very well understand her attempt in doing so😭...But the best dialogue of this chapter was undoubtedly when he calmly disclosed something, that she was hiding so preciously.. 'world's never a safe place for Jalaluddin Mohammad's son. You should have been much more careful with him.'⭐️...Wonderful PP👏...The timing was perfect😳

thanks dear...mujhe idea nehi tha yeh tumhe itna achha lagega😳

After the above, I saw Jalal trying to figure it out all in a composed manner...When Abdul came his reaction on Jodha was like SHOCK LAGA, SHOCK LAGA' but Jallu-Abdul convo made absolute sense😊...Jodha hearing it all and questioning Jalal was natural,...because she never thought that they had been caught...not only caught but also her truth (about Rico) had got revealed😭...AFTER THAT IT WAS JALLU BACK TO WHAT HE WAS/WANTED TO DO, BUT RESTRAINED TILL THAT POINT...STILL HE WAS CAREFUL😳...I loved it😳, the line 'Ab kare bhi to kya kare Jaan' still rings in my ear... but still I didn't like...But I loved it😉

tu toh jallu se bhi jyada confuse hai...didnt like it or loved it 😆 waise jallu hai...kitna der control karega bechara 😳😆

Now who is the kidnapper??????? Naturally someone who knows the truth (not only about Rico but also about the violent abuse) and someone who needs money?????? ...By the way, I want to know more about the man that hugged Jodha, her BF I think, during flashback (he is one more suspect on my list now)😕...Adham/Shariff still on my list😕...

pals I hate you 😡

DEKH KITNA BADA REVIEW LIKHA😳...AB LAG RAHA HAI KYU LIKHA...YEH SAB TO TUJKO BHI PATA HAI🤢🥱

love you pals...i always love reading ur comments...they are my horlicks (I drink a lot)...hope i can keep up to ur expectations in future😃

CHANGE THE PRECAP PP😡...KAISI CHUTTI😡 ...BAHUT HO GAYI CHUTTI TERI😡

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Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Pri first congrats for the new thread. 🥳 😊 . And I love the banner. Especially RT's pic. That's one of my fav and the perfect choice for this character. He is looking devilishly handsome.and his eyes r dark and intense.

It was a mindblowing update Pri. I love it.

thanks tabi...bohot mehnat se banaya...actually this is first tym I have made something on photoshop...😳

Honestly I was little scared thinking what will Jalal do with Jo after meeting her. But love the first few paras. "My life is returning back" love this line. And he truly loves Jo. He tried to control himself inspite of his longing. And its really hard for him.

hmm...chalo koyee toh hai...jo mere jallu ko samajhta hai 😆😳

When both of them were in the same room even I could feel the tension. And Pri u r a brilliant writer. U made me relate to both Jo and Ja's emotions. Jalal loves her a lot. Can't see her in pain. He wants to touch her, love her. And I can completely understand Jo's disgust. Its not easy to forgive the man who forced u. But hope someday Jo understands Jalal's love for her. And Jalal realize his mistake and understand how much pain he has caused her.

is realisation se pehle ek dusre ko maar dalenge...jo aapne gusse se...and Ja aapne ajeeb desire se...😆

Jo was so naive. Even seeing Ja's reaction she didn't get it. I guess she didn't even wanted to think about this that's why didn't get Ja's reactions.

haan yaar...she dsnt even want to thnk about ja and his emotns...

Love the outbrust. When Ja said "Ab kare bhi to kya kare Jaan" I was like ye nahi sudhrega 😆 . Honestly me chahti bhi nahi ki ye SUDHRE 😆. But that line was sexy 😉 😆 . I love all the lines about Mughals especially the one, "Mere liye mera Beta utna hi Jaroori hai jitna Uski Ma" .

tujhe toh jalal ke sare gande dialogue pasand aye...waise main bhi nehi chahti jalal badle...love him like that😳

I was praying that all of this is Ja's plan. But now I m scared knowing its not. Now Rico is in danger and Jalal's reputation is too. Yes I know Jalal did this horrible mistake but I want this to be between Ja and Jo. Jo can punish him for this but this should be only between them.

wait wait wait...and keep reading

But who is the Kiddnapper. Who knows not only about rico but also about that night other than Ja, Jo, Abdul and Ammijan. Is it Adham, Sarif, or Jo's old bf.

our koyee bacha nehi hai!!!!

chahe toh Rico pe bhi shaq karle...

And Precap ka kya matlab? What chutti? U have already enjoyed chutti. Updating after two weeks. I don't care I want update in one week.

are am still not doing well...

Btw u r reading about THE NIGHT for a long time. When will we know about the details of that NIGHT ???????

pratikhsha karo priyee...

love you tabi for ur sweet comment...its always a treat reading ur passnt reviews

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

interesting... continue soon dear...

will wait for the pm