AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3)

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Pals2411
Wow ...This was an amazing chapter PP👏...

Mein bada review likhungi...But let me read once again😉...Mein abhi aayi

am waiting 😳

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
awesome update
their meeting was so so explosive
loved it

am glad you liked it yaar...my hard work paid...🤗

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Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Chapter11 is awesome as usual!
Loved Jalal's concern for Rico urf Salim but Hated it wen he hurted Jo!! 😡
Anyways precap ka matlab?? 😕 u have a holiday tomorrow di?
Love u

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

interesting... continue soon dear...

will wait for the pm

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mdeshpande

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Oh poor Jodha! Amazing actually that she did not succumb to the stress or fainted. She seems to be made of steel !! And Jalal is slowly coming on track !...cud the kidnapper be---- Adham???

updt soon !!

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

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Suspense pe suspense :O Prianka tum CID ke khandaan se belong krti ho kya? :O You write with such thrilling urge that i get hooked to your story and towards its end i just don't want it to end man! I am like keep writing man don't stop!! Jalal ko kab akal aaygi, i don't like the way he treats jodha :/ Par koi naa it will be really amazing to see how he will change :) And you should take a bow for this update! The way you have penned their emotions in this update, wow! Like wow! Expressing jalal's emotions in such a way that it doesn't appear like lust and at the same time remains a bit away from love is brilliancy which you just wrote here. You justifief the title of your writeup in this.
Keep writing, now i can say that update sooonish :)

Edited by surbhimathur - 11 years ago

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

congrats for the new thread

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pari_goyal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

congrats on new thread...

liked d update...

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

PP my heart was in my mouth reading jalal's turbulent emotions 😭... i literally had tears ... gosh ... u r such an awesome writer PP 👏 ... I seriously felt soo bad for jalal ... though it is to be revealed as to why jodha is hating jalal to this extent ... lekin what she dosent know is jalal's actual truth, as to what life he has been living from 4 & half years😲 ... how much he loves her ... 😭 ... why cant she understand ??

And I so so so much loved abdul here ... though abdul didnt had much space in this update ... but i am falling for him ... jalal's reply to him on the phone & he thinking & ignoring jalal's reply ... gawd he soo understanding ... i just love this chap ... ... And And And his reaction on seeing jodha in jalal's chamber ... i was like 🤣🤣 completely ... awwee man , abdul meri jaan tere muh mein paan hi paan 🤣 ...

but i didnt get one thing why jodha hide the fact that rico is jalal's son while telling him about how rico got kidnapped ... & why was she enraged when jalal himself blurted out the fact that rico is his son ... whats wrong in that ... dosent she know that jalal was hunting them & it is very obvious that one day he will come to know about their son ...??

what was she thinking when she made up her mind to come to jalal for help .. why would he help her if rico was somebody else's son ...?? even if he had helped her out ... he would have definitely come to knw about his son ...so hiding the fact from jalal would not make any sense at all ...

Anyways PP ... awesome update ... i just loved it, great writing 👏 !! & plz yaar ho sake toh jodha ka gussa thoda kam karwado ... itna gussa bhi thik nahi hai na ... 🤔

PRECAP - chutti 😕 ... oye heroine tujhe chutti kyon chahiye re ...?? i will not sanction ur leave boss ... cancel kar rahi hoon mein teri chuttii ... chal wapas aaja aur precap de de 🤣 uske saath teaser bhi hoga toh kya baat hai ...😆

Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago