AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Brishti22

OFFO.thank god PP atlast you have updated my dear...I was just eagerly waiting for it😃😃

fever ki wajah se...

...Love you.

love you too...

awsome chapter as usual👏👏.but issbar update jaldi dena .samjhi...😡😡

nehi deti ja 😡

Originally posted by: marshi

Awesome i like this jalal as i always wanted to see a possesive one and loved the chapter theres a request plz show that joodha is near to his best friend a boy and due to him jallu gets jealous and pm me when u update

Originally posted by: SARA4444

👏di amazing update👏

loved it a loot 😃

thanks lowee 🤗

rico ko waapas lao

ayega ayega ... have patience my dear

precap? chutti? you are updating next in 1 week k? 😆

update soon 😆

bapre!!! update ki bhukhi...😆

Originally posted by: chandgothia

Its amazing...u r an amzing writer...plz write more and soon...i love ur story...

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

nautanki kyun be 😡

aaj sham se kandhe pe dard...main marne wali hoon lagta hai😭

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

Originally posted by: lashy

Awww 😳

Four and a half year...without her. Long days...longer nights...and a never ending wait. Jalal didn't want to get back to THIS life of his. He didn't want to return to a life of endless 'longing'. He wanted to taste the pleasure, even a commoner is blessed with. And for that he needed HIS Jodha in his life. Jalal knew his one mere mistake will turn his long wait to ashes. And he surely didn't want that. 'I can't afford it this time...I can't afford to loose her again. I can't afford to live my life without her anymore...I...I must control my feelings...I must be...very...careful with her this time.' Jalal was trying hard to get hold over his inner turmoil to make things easier for both of them. He knew he had to do this...any how...that too very soon.

I loved the lines below - the way you've worded them... very well-worded and touch on the right nerve.. 😳

thanks lashy...its always nice to have good words from you😳

There they were. Under the same roof. Breathing in same air. Alone in a suit. Two life...two set of thoughts...two set of feelings...but one destination - they both needed to talk to each other. They both needed to tell each other what they were carrying in their hearts. The only difference was...one relishing the proximity of his beloved...another detesting the presence of the man she curses every moment of her life.

..Speak out damnit!!!' ASR! 😛

love him

He was nearly becoming nice here.. 😉

'Her pain is no less than mine.' it took almost no time for Jalal to realise the truth he was ignorant of. He realised she was in agony of loosing her son as much as he was. It was no less a sting for her. He released Jodha. 'A...am sorry...I was just out of my mind...I promise I won't touch you again.' with this Jalal receded back from Jodha, increasing the gap between them...but all the while he had his eyes on her. 'Ok...now calm down and tell me what exactly happened?'

But something inside her told her mind to omit the first line of the caller.

'Are you looking for Jalaluddin Mohammad's son?'

It was nothing but a desperate attempt of Jodha to keep her son away from that devil's clutch. She thought this omission by her will keep Jalal away from the TRUTH. Only if she could have known...how far he has already gone in pursuit of THAT truth!!!

Loved this! ❤️

When emotions speak louder, words take a back seat. Such was the situation with these two souls. For one...hatred was so strong that she couldn't even imagine spending words on him...for another...desire was so intense that he couldn't take risk of staring at her or be in her proximity for long. It was a challenge for Jalal to be in her presence yet not touching her.

I liked these bits about this villain oops hero! 😳

'world's never a safe place for Jalaluddin Mohammad's son. You should have been much more careful with him.'

Jalal rubbed his hand on the prickly stubble that has grown overnight.

Jalal brushed his nose on her earlobe and whispered, 'ab kare bhi toh kya kare jaan...it's a truth even God himself can't alter.'

After this, Jalal goes back to his old tareekas! He disappointed me... 😕

woh toh hai hi aisa 😆

'Jalaluddin...Mohammad. The chairman of IMPERIAL...the kind hearted MUGHAL king...most influential human being on earth...the man of many women's dream...is actually a RAPIST. Kaisa ho agar yeh kal kisi newspaper ka headline ho toh...' kidnappers words raked every inch of Jalal's body, rushing a fire through his veins. He yelled at the top of his voice, 'you bast**d'.

This is really intriguing.. let's see who it is who knows so much about them.. 😲

hmm...lets see...am still searching😆

Lovely chapter PP.. really really on the edge-of-your-seat types!

chal jhuti😆

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Main tera Good nite ka intezaar kar rahi thi, aur tu as usual gussa ho😡😭...Kandhe ka dard kyu, kaun tere kandhe pe chada tha😆😆...Isliye bola take care of your health, take medicines par tu mere lines padti kaha hai...bas gussa kar🥱...Mein chali aaj ke liye...Dhyan rakh apna...BYE..GN...TC...😳😳😳

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

Lovely chapter PP.. really really on the edge-of-your-seat types!

chal jhuti😆