TS : Everlasting Love *Completed* - Page 6

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Wow Princess😃 That was really beautiful...Jallu searching his beloved Jo like a true deewana😉...Is hit by a vehicle and reaches the same hospital where Jo is delivering a baby😃...

Thanks so much!😳😃

Thankfully, you did not leave the chapter at Jallu feeling a whiff of air showing Jo's presence but actually ended the chapter at their meet😳...Lovely dear, I really loved it...Now Princess update soon and I mean really soon😃

Awww... thanks... glad you loved it..😳

PS: I am saying update soon because, there are many updates from different OS/SS/FF still pending and I/we are waiting, waiting, waiting...Humlog track rakte rakte bhul na jaye😡😭...Khayal rakho hamara😭😭

Lol awww... will update other stories soon di...

And I really mean, update the next/last chapter soon...because I loved it and I know the next chapter will be emotional and a really good one😉😃😳...HAPPY ENDING😉

I doubt that... I know you loved this piece... And I have broken your heart... have accepted what you sent... I m sorry from the bottom of my heart... will never dare to write such things again...

Originally posted by: onaisa

It was really awwwsum nyc update

Thanx a ton fr PM plz ipdate mean continue

Writing N plz PM me

Originally posted by: justlovetv

Namy, it was beautiful!!🤗🤗🤗

Thanks Samy! 🤗

Jalal is really in love with her! He could sense her presence in that hospital even without seeing her for a second!

The entire scene in the maternity ward was priceless! From Jodha's delivery to Jalal finally getting to see her and his priceless expression when he saw his daughter! Just too priceless!😳. I just don't have words to describe it. It was priceless beyond all imagination. The scene almost made me cry!

Omg!! Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! You made my day priceless Samy 🤗

Jodha has shut her eyes! Oh no! Now what will happen?😭. I hope she is fine though. Their family has just begun and I can't see her go away!

Please update soon!😊 Can't wait to see how this turns out!😳

Oh no! You'll be mad at me for this update... ANyways... LOVE YOU! Thanks for this beautiful review...❤️

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

wow!!

i love ua works!!

Thanks Gayatri!😃

lemme comment properly after part 2! coz ryt now am utter curious! 😉

all sorts of questions peeping in! and really anxious!

Aww...😛 Part 2 is up!😳

its beautifully written! ❤️ and i could clearly visualise every scene!

Thanks a ton!😳

Originally posted by: SARA4444

another amazing story 👏⭐️

continue sooon 😃

Originally posted by: hely

awesm luvly,superb👏

Originally posted by: rock&roll

Very nice one Nancy..beautifully written...looking fwd to part 2 😳😳

Originally posted by: Bamonforever

Very good update.

Originally posted by: ms.dhingra

superb yr...bt yr again jallu wrong😭. u promised me dt in ur next os jallu vl do right.
Lol! Chal ek aur OS likh dungi... usmei Jalllu will be 100% right!😛😳

bt nvr mind...os mili itna hi bhut h...omg wt hpnd dt time???? m dying to know. plz updt soon ds time.
Aww... swat 🤗 updated part 2... padhke bata kaisa hai!😛

bhut sari os ss pending h...bhul gyi sab ko...cvs tum se aage nikal gye. ab jaldi se sari stories updt kr.

loool...okok...will updt soon!😆