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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Okay nancy ... though the story is is very well written ...i cant lie , i hated the ending ... 😭 ... i cant see jo & ja apart & U killed my jodha 😭

Gosh !!! i cant bear this pain 😭...

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onaisa

@onaisa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Omg it was emotional a little bit bt very nice update

Thanx fr d PM buddy

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chyetta

@chyetta

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

nice write up, but it seems u love stories with tragedy. u killed jodha 😭

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Rutuja Deo

@Rutuja...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

abbe Tragedy queen 😆😆😆

Its really awesome... 👏👏

actually i really want to they live after that Happily together instead of Jo left them

But Its okk u might have already decide end like So ...😳

m not disappointed😳 Sab Writers ki apni apni thinking hoti hai yaar😊

Longonko pasand aaye ye IMP hai😉😛

But Jo bhi ho Story Amazing thee boss😉😉 😳😳

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
EVERLASTING LOVE... VOW... WHAT A TITLE...I will update comment soon... love U Jaan... and congratulation my Cutie pie Sizzler Nanu. unres
I just read first chapter... Vow.. yaar me your writing is wonderful and U know that I love it...😃 I felt Jalal's pain in my heart...He was in serch for Jodha like crazy... majnu deewana... poor Jallu baby... Omg... Jallu got in to accident...How divine he felt her presence... Jo is delivering baby girl... Yaar tere dimag me aesi stories aati kaha se hai... UR little creative mind is amazing... Jo ko kya ho gaya... tune muje dara diya hai... me next chapter pe ja rahi hu... Hope Jo survive kare... Again U R amazing write Up... Yaar ... Dead love ko kab update karegi... teri nayi story ko kab update karegi...Please update soon... I want to see Jodha and Jalal... Happy... I am tired with serial... ab tera hi bharosa hai... Jaldi update de de baba...

My cutie pie Rockstar Sizzling Sizzler⭐️
My cutie pie Rockstar Sizzling Sizzler⭐️
My cutie pie Rockstar Sizzling Sizzler⭐️

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

OMG!!! I can't write this comment at this time... tune muje sach me rulaya hai... Yaar how could you do that... Jallu tu kyu har baar fault me aa jata hai... I can't bear this pain at this time... Love it... superb Marvelous... I will update this comment soon... I can't write ... I am too senti at this time... 😭

Nanu the best... I would not dare to write this... I bow down to you for this fabulous ending... I am really touched... It was obviously heart wrenching but touched my soul... My heart cried for little girl and Jalal😭... Life is a circle... and death is reality of the life... it is hard to accept... accident do happens... but it was very painful because the way you write... no one can write... You have nailed it... I salute to you... this is one of your bestest out of your best write ups... Loved it to core... Yaar I have no words for this emotional heart wrenching update... I love you for writing something different... Might be some people wont like it... but really this what writer does... and I love different... variety... Which I always find in your writing👏

Sorry for late😕 ... I am not that much active lately on IF...I have bad allergies... and One day is good and next day gets worst...

Nanu the best out of all bestest... U Rock my superstar⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Nanu the best out of all bestest... U Rock my superstar⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Nanu the best out of all bestest... U Rock my superstar⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Nancyy!! Maar diya yar tumne toh!! Humko bhi aur jodha ko bhi :D
An excellent writing! I loved the dialogues and the portrayal of AkDha. Glad that you penned this one from your imagination, its good to let out! Loved it throughout!
Feeling bad for jalal but :/ bura ho gaya uske saath..
Par pari hai naa! I so loved the namee ^____^ Very cutee! ;)

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

It was really nice to c jodha and jalal singing in order to convey their feelings and then reaction that Jalal had in morning- i did not expect it at all. I thought jodha would freak out but it was other way around. I cannot believe u let jodha die at the end but i guess as writer u had a right to end the way u want it. But one postive thing was u let pari be the sunshine in jalal's life which would give strenght to move him forward. Now, PLZZ update memoirs, dead love and akdha in jungle