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arpita1226

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Posted: 10 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: najma123

No, Arpita. Wait. Patience. I assure thee you will like that more than this. In return, I give you an offer. I will write another OS barring the one I will write for Kal, today. This one will be a modern one. How is this offer?😉

Okay but see if you can update it as fast as you can chalo bye going for studies

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arpita1226

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Posted: 10 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: najma123

No, Arpita. Wait. Patience. I assure thee you will like that more than this. In return, I give you an offer. I will write another OS barring the one I will write for Kal, today. This one will be a modern one. How is this offer?😉

Okay but see if you can update this as fast as possible chalo bye going for studies

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Antara123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: arpita1226

Okay but see if you can update this as fast as possible chalo bye going for studies

Fair enough. Go study well, my child!😆

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Antara123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#594

Kal! The OS you asked for:

OS: The Silence Said It All

On a side not, Arpita, who is the new dude in your dp?😆

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--a.ishu--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#595

Najma najma najma!!! I cant wait for two weeks for another update!! How am i supposed to wait so long!! Update soon pleej!! Or else.. I il keep on crying!! *sob* *sob* mhhmhhmmmhhmm *sob* *sob*

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Antara123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: dharshu
Najma najma najma!!! I cant wait for two weeks for another update!! How am i supposed to wait so long!! Update soon pleej!! Or else.. I il keep on crying!! *sob* *sob* mhhmhhmmmhhmm *sob* *sob*

What about the OS I just wrote?😵

Please do not cry. I am writing another OS now, it will be up by night... So, that ought to compensate enough right? Like two OSes in a day?😉

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Rashmi81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#597

Amazing Najma.

I just don't have right words to tell you know how much I liked it,

First of all Drunk Jodha was a great idea.

But what I liked about her was that though drunk still somehow she was in control.

Mostly we see these drunk scenes in Bollywood where a person when drunk, is so irritating and those scenes seem so OTT .

But here you kept that balance perfectly,

Jodha was drunk but yet she had her manners intact ,she wasn't screaming or doing things which would demean her position as a queen .

And somehow like Jalal ,I was happy that because of her this situation ,she could finally speak up everything she wanted to.Else I don't know how would her these feelings channelize.

And Jalal could see a new Jodha different from the royal ,intelligent and multi talented queen which he always see,He came to know that somewhere hidden inside this queen,there is a young girl with her dreams ,her insecurities.

And he was so caring ,so supportive and how tactfully he made her blurt her feelings.

I read this many times.I just loved it .

Najma you are extremely talented and a gifted writer.

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--a.ishu--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#598

Originally posted by: najma123

What about the OS I just wrote?😵

Please do not cry. I am writing another OS now, it will be up by night... So, that ought to compensate enough right? Like two OSes in a day?😉

arre najju!! I didn ask u to update today na!! But.. Dec 12?? Thats soo long!! I thought we wud be getting the next update by a week's time!! But its ok!! As ur compensation is just as cute as this ff!! So i il wait!! And i kno dat the next update will be worth all the wait!!! 😃

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Antara123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#599

Originally posted by: Rashmi81
Amazing Najma.
I just don't have right words to tell you know how much I liked it,
First of all Drunk Jodha was a great idea.
But what I liked about her was that though drunk still somehow she was in control.
Mostly we see these drunk scenes in Bollywood where a person when drunk, is so irritating and those scenes seem so OTT .
But here you kept that balance perfectly,
Jodha was drunk but yet she had her manners intact ,she wasn't screaming or doing things which would demean her position as a queen .
And somehow like Jalal ,I was happy that because of her this situation ,she could finally speak up everything she wanted to.Else I don't know how would her these feelings channelize.
And Jalal could see a new Jodha different from the royal ,intelligent and multi talented queen which he always see,He came to know that somewhere hidden inside this queen,there is a young girl with her dreams ,her insecurities.
And he was so caring ,so supportive and how tactfully he made her blurt her feelings.
I read this many times.I just loved it .
Najma you are extremely talented and a gifted writer.

Hey Rashmi, thanks a lot for the wonderful comment. You guys just have to assume that her speaking was not really clear and well, she was drunk. It is really annoying to keep putting in dots, showing, her speech is not particularly coherent, so I avoided those. I hope you guys could imagine it drunk. 😆

Yes. That is exactly what I wanted to bring out. Jalal must know that Jodha was human indeed but Jodha should not know that Jalal knows. Was I clear?😆