AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 1- 6 - Page 106

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

I replied all of posts dear...

bohot pehle hai...may be isliye nehi mil raha...

now in ofc...will reply to your comment later

Originally posted by: lashy

I don't know why PP..but, I just love each and every chapter of desire.. there is something so mystifying and different about your characters... I just can't seem to stop loving them.. God...this is my favourite story of the stories I read in JA forum.. sigh...

lashy..you know ... you have the power to make me go weak on my knees😳😳...well with your tariff offcourse...😆😆I feel like J K Rowling praising my writing...😳😳...am all BLUSH😊...when you say you love my characters...am like...GONE😳

I loved this chapter just as much as the previous ones.. though there wasn't a Jo here... but this was to stress on ONE ASPECT of Jalal.. so, it was penned out very well...👏

itni tariff😭😭😭...mere ansu ruk nehi rahe hai

I picked out all the bits that I loved from chapter 6..

this tall guy was a new world...new outlet...where he could let all his passion, all his dislikes out...which he can't do with his mother. And for Jalal, Rico was a pleasant 'refreshment' which made him forget all his worries...all his troubles.

If it's between 'fast car' and 'fast girl', I always go with the car'. 'Fast girl matlab?'

'Fast girl means...aaa...it means..'

'Like my mother? She is very smart'

sight of blood on this lil one made Jalal absolutely numb, his mind stopped functioning. He have never been in such a situation before...actually he never been with a kid before.

LOVED this.. was giggling here..😆

Jalal held Rico close to his heart and locked him with his arms. Rico settled himself in his new seat and wrapped his arms around Jalal's neck...gave him a broad smile.

Kitna badnaseeb hoga woh baap jo is noor se alag ho gaya'.

Awww😭

'Jalal, we have found her.' This one line was enough to throw Jalal out of his place. He could feel his whole world spinning around...the news he was waiting for...waiting for years...made him dumb in a moment. He couldn't believe he actually heard that. He wanted to ask over and over again. 'What did you say?'

MY Gooddd... you always leave your chapters at such cliffhangers... 😲

kaha...achhe khase...cool point pe toh chora😆...waise intezzar ka bhi alag maza hota hai...😳😳

He knew how much this girl meant to his friend. He saw him being crazy for her...craving for her...missing her. Abdul knew this is the only remedy that can heel Jalaluddin Mohammad's wounds.

Love it re.. kya line thaa.. I don't know why... but with your story... I don't know ki shuru kab hua.. aur khatam kab... I don't think any other story has this effect on me.. 😳

ohhh...GOD!!!! yeh maine kya sunliya...😲😲😲...ab next time main likhne baithungi toh yeh line mere dimag me ghumta rahega

PP have you replied to my previous posts... if you have, pataa nahin mujhe mil nahi rahe hain.. 😕

already replied...lijiye biscuit fekiye our reply pariye

😆 Biscuit kyun phenkoon.. biscuit khaate khaate pad rahi hoon

update plzzz... kitne saal bit gaye... ab kab jalal Jodha se milega...hum sab intezar me budhe ho gaye to ... 5 saal ka wait kiya...ab kitna kare... update de do...jaldi se

🤣Bhavya U also update plzzz

I'm gonna HIT both my GM Partners... i.e PP and PJR

Originally posted by: PupCat

I'm gonna HIT both my GM Partners... i.e PP and PJR

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

60% likh dala tha...then deleted all...writing afresh...time lagega...sorry guys

Why u deleted it? 😭 .
U promised u will post on thursday 😭 😭 😭