AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 1- 6 - Page 105

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

no re...actually thora GM hai usme...jallu's gutter dimag😈

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

its fine...maein padloongi but comment nahin karrongi...

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

accha edit kardiya...nahin sacchi padungi...lekin time lagega...tum jaldi likho pls...

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

thursdy or friday

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

😡 OMG so long wait

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

update bhi long ayega na😆

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

waise update se yaad aya...tere FFs ka kya haal hai

I don't know why PP..but, I just love each and every chapter of desire.. there is something so mystifying and different about your characters... I just can't seem to stop loving them.. God...this is my favourite story of the stories I read in JA forum.. sigh...

I loved this chapter just as much as the previous ones.. though there wasn't a Jo here... but this was to stress on ONE ASPECT of Jalal.. so, it was penned out very well...👏

I picked out all the bits that I loved from chapter 6..

this tall guy was a new world...new outlet...where he could let all his passion, all his dislikes out...which he can't do with his mother. And for Jalal, Rico was a pleasant 'refreshment' which made him forget all his worries...all his troubles.

If it's between 'fast car' and 'fast girl', I always go with the car'. 'Fast girl matlab?'

'Fast girl means...aaa...it means..'

'Like my mother? She is very smart'

sight of blood on this lil one made Jalal absolutely numb, his mind stopped functioning. He have never been in such a situation before...actually he never been with a kid before.

LOVED this.. was giggling here..😆

Jalal held Rico close to his heart and locked him with his arms. Rico settled himself in his new seat and wrapped his arms around Jalal's neck...gave him a broad smile.

Kitna badnaseeb hoga woh baap jo is noor se alag ho gaya'.

Awww😭

'Jalal, we have found her.' This one line was enough to throw Jalal out of his place. He could feel his whole world spinning around...the news he was waiting for...waiting for years...made him dumb in a moment. He couldn't believe he actually heard that. He wanted to ask over and over again. 'What did you say?'

MY Gooddd... you always leave your chapters at such cliffhangers... 😲

He knew how much this girl meant to his friend. He saw him being crazy for her...craving for her...missing her. Abdul knew this is the only remedy that can heel Jalaluddin Mohammad's wounds.

Love it re.. kya line thaa.. I don't know why... but with your story... I don't know ki shuru kab hua.. aur khatam kab... I don't think any other story has this effect on me.. 😳

PP have you replied to my previous posts... if you have, pataa nahin mujhe mil nahi rahe hain.. 😕