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Originally posted by: samy18

hehehe i m also suprised ki maine likha all credit goes to u di i will update soon

Hema di I have tried my best keeping ur suggestion in my mind and bhavini di all credit goes to u but sorry this is small one I will update long one in next update

It was a pleasant morning everything seems silent and beautiful.

For Jodha and Jalal it was a start of new journey towards there dream ,toward their love.

At Jodha's home

Jodha ,Jodha wake up fast or else u will be late beta utho your friend must be arriving at airport ,a very loving voice was trying to wake her up "Oh ! Mom please let me sleep just 10 minutes more please" Jodha said this by covering her ears through pillows.

Jodha have u forgotten Ayesha is coming from India last time I m saying agar tum nahi uthi ab toh mujhe koi aur tarika apnana padega . kya mom Ayesha is coming , so why u haven't reminded me earlier I have to get ready fast otherwise I have to face Ayesha in her angry bird mood saying this Jodha hurriedly got up from bed and ran towards washroom to get ready. She was wearing green color saree her favorite color, looking like a princess

Her beautiful smile was adding more to her beauty.

Good morning dad said jodha to her father who was busy reading newspaper, howz I m looking dad Mr. Sharma was in shock to see her daughter in saree, Are u alright Jodha u r wearing saree?

Yes dad I m absolutely alright actually Ayesha is coming from India so I thought to welcome Miss India in Indian dress.

Oh good beta toh jaldi jao vrna der ho jayegi and car dhyan se drive karna ,strict instruction to careless Jodha by her dad

Han dad mein dhyan rakhungi . okay mom and dad I m going

Take care, Jodha ,ya mom I will.

Jodha started her driving towards airport her all time favorite song was playing in car

It's been about a month and twenty days...
And were going round and round playing silly games...

Now your saying, slow it down, not right now...

Then you wink at me and walk away...

YEh kya kiya mein betaab hogaaya
Hold on, don't go...
Tere bina mujhse nahi jeena
Kya yehi pyaar hai

[Chorus:]
(Ride it) Ban jao tum
(Ride it) Mere sanam
(Ride it, ride it) Kaise Hua
(Ride it, ride it) Dil kho gaya

(Ride it) Ban jao tum
(Ride it) Mere sanam
(Ride it, ride it) Kaise Hua
(Ride it, ride it) Dil kho gaya

At airport

Flight has just arrived for Jalal this place was very new full of unknown person as soon as he landed there he had goose bumps in nervousness and excitement He was feeling differently a new sort of feeling but pushing away all thoughts he started walking towards exit and here Jodha was almost running after parking her car as she was late and bang! She collided with someone she closed her eyes; she was scared Are you ok? A voice stricken to her ears, she is familiar to this voice, it was her dream voice suddenly in her mind some blurred images started flashing on as if she knows him, she belongs to him only thousands of thought started running in her, she was not able to bear this strain and fainted. By the time Ayesha saw her and came running to her friend. Jalal lifted unconscious Jodha in her arm as if she meant a lot to him, as if his life has stopped he don't know why? All he wanted this time to see her alright cahe uske liye use jo bhi karna pade

he was almost lost in her beauty this time she was looking like a sleeping beauty

God was also smiling seeing these love birds together ,weather was also eager to be part of their love ,love of two soul mates

Plz forgive my mistakes and this is very chotu update bcoz I wanted this

Update completely dedicated to akdha first meet

I will update longer one on thursday

Ready for all tomatoes vaise bhi ajkal vegetables bahut costly hai😆

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

awww so sweet...!!!! Vow... Superb!!! Jalal is her dream boy... story is getting interested... Can't wait for more... Just hearing his voice...sounds like purva janam... vow really fresh concept... next wala long update dena... LOVE U JAAN... KEEP IT UP... 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: samy18

Hema di I have tried my best keeping ur suggestion in my mind and bhavini di all credit goes to u but sorry this is small one I will update long one in next update

It was a pleasant morning everything seems silent and beautiful.

For Jodha and Jalal it was a start of new journey towards there dream ,toward their love.

At Jodha's home

Jodha ,Jodha wake up fast or else u will be late beta utho your friend must be arriving at airport ,a very loving voice was trying to wake her up "Oh ! Mom please let me sleep just 10 minutes more please" Jodha said this by covering her ears through pillows.

Jodha have u forgotten Ayesha is coming from India last time I m saying agar tum nahi uthi ab toh mujhe koi aur tarika apnana padega . kya mom Ayesha is coming , so why u haven't reminded me earlier I have to get ready fast otherwise I have to face Ayesha in her angry bird mood saying this Jodha hurriedly got up from bed and ran towards washroom to get ready. She was wearing green color saree her favorite color, looking like a princess

Her beautiful smile was adding more to her beauty.

Good morning dad said jodha to her father who was busy reading newspaper, howz I m looking dad Mr. Sharma was in shock to see her daughter in saree, Are u alright Jodha u r wearing saree?

Yes dad I m absolutely alright actually Ayesha is coming from India so I thought to welcome Miss India in Indian dress.

Oh good beta toh jaldi jao vrna der ho jayegi and car dhyan se drive karna ,strict instruction to careless Jodha by her dad

Han dad mein dhyan rakhungi . okay mom and dad I m going

Take care, Jodha ,ya mom I will.

Jodha started her driving towards airport her all time favorite song was playing in car

It's been about a month and twenty days...
And were going round and round playing silly games...

Now your saying, slow it down, not right now...

Then you wink at me and walk away...

YEh kya kiya mein betaab hogaaya
Hold on, don't go...
Tere bina mujhse nahi jeena
Kya yehi pyaar hai

[Chorus:]
(Ride it) Ban jao tum
(Ride it) Mere sanam
(Ride it, ride it) Kaise Hua
(Ride it, ride it) Dil kho gaya

(Ride it) Ban jao tum
(Ride it) Mere sanam
(Ride it, ride it) Kaise Hua
(Ride it, ride it) Dil kho gaya

At airport

Flight has just arrived for Jalal this place was very new full of unknown person as soon as he landed there he had goose bumps in nervousness and excitement He was feeling differently a new sort of feeling but pushing away all thoughts he started walking towards exit and here Jodha was almost running after parking her car as she was late and bang! She collided with someone she closed her eyes; she was scared Are you ok? A voice stricken to her ears, she is familiar to this voice, it was her dream voice suddenly in her mind some blurred images started flashing on as if she knows him, she belongs to him only thousands of thought started running in her, she was not able to bear this strain and fainted. By the time Ayesha saw her and came running to her friend. Jalal lifted unconscious Jodha in her arm as if she meant a lot to him, as if his life has stopped he don't know why? All he wanted this time to see her alright cahe uske liye use jo bhi karna pade

he was almost lost in her beauty this time she was looking like a sleeping beauty

God was also smiling seeing these love birds together ,weather was also eager to be part of their love ,love of two soul mates

Plz forgive my mistakes and this is very chotu update bcoz I wanted this

Update completely dedicated to akdha first meet

I will update longer one on thursday

Ready for all tomatoes vaise bhi ajkal vegetables bahut costly hai😆