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chapter 1

HUM PHIR MILENGE MAIN WADA KARTA HU

Hey friends as I love stories about rebirth so I have decided to write a story on akdha rebirth

This is my first attempt in writing so plz forgive my mistake in writing

Jodha : A very beautiful and intelligent girl of 22 years who leaves in America with her parents Mr. and Mrs. Sharma. She is single child of her parents

Jalal : A handsome and smart boy of 25 who belives in love at first sight .He is an orphan who leaves in Mumbai with his aunty javeeda ,she is also a care taker of company left by Jalal'father

Flashback

Jalal is at his death bed everyone in the agra palace were shattered. Jodha was in shock she is not able to believe that her life her love is going away.

Jodha: shenshah ap humein yun akele chorr kar nahi ja sakte ap ne humein wada kiya tha ki ap humesha humare sath rahege

Jalal: with much difficulty he said I m not leaving u jodha hum fir milege mein tumse wada krta hu (these are his last word before taking his last breath)

Present

1st January 2014(Mumbai)

New Year celebration is going on everywhere

At Jalal's mansion

Jalal: hey Javs (javeeda jalal's aunt , jalal always called his like dis) good morning

Javeeda: jalal aj tum itne jaldi uth gaye aur vo bhi new year pe kuch khass baat hai kya ya koi new girlfriend se milne ja rahe ho

Jalal: no javs I have decided dat ab se koi girlfriend nahi banouga

And ab main dad ka America wala business sambhalunga

Javeeda was totally shocked she is not able to believe dat Jalal is saying all dis

Javeeda: Jalal are u all right should I take u to doctor she examined him his forehead to check if he had fever

Jalal: Javs I m completely alright and I hv decided that now its correct time to complete my fathers dream

Javeeda was feeling proud after listening all this ,she was feeling that all her values and hard work came up in correct way

But she was worried for him how he will manage there so she said

Jalal why don't u start your work here only whats the need of going there and our company in America is also going at loss so u will have hard time there Jalal interrupted javs dad humesha mujse kehte the ki unka sapna hai ki unki America ki company mein sambhalo isiliye I ave decided that I m going

Javeeda tried her best to stop him but his destiny was calling him , his love jodha was calling him ,so at last she allowed him to go

At jodha's home

It was night time jodha was sleeping after coming home from new year party

Jodha every night see a mystery dream she had never seen dat her dream man really but every night in her dream she hear his voice (jodha hum fir milenge men tumse wada krta hu she ran behind him to stop him see him but all in vain) her dream break and again she was afraid just like she had lost a part of her heart)

Jodha's self talk :pta nahi kyun aj aisa lag raha ki bahut jald kuch badale wala hai ek ajeeb si feeling hai yeh sapna toh maine kayi baar dekha hai par aj kuch alag hai

Chal jodha so ja kal se tere new life start hone wali hai faltu chizee mat soch

Precap: jalal is at American airport

Dar ke vajah se maine is padha nahi so forgive my writing mistake Plz tell me howz it bade bade forum mein choti choti galtiya hoti hai but plz dnt throw eggs on I m completely vegetarian but tomatoes r ok :P

part 2:page 2

part 3:page 4

part 4 : page 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103201366

part 5 : page 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103489467

part6


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Posted: 11 years ago
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antique concept...
nicely written👏
plzz do cont.
darne ki zrurt nhi h
coz dar k aagey jeet h..😆
n dnt worry abt eggs
even m vegetarian
so i cnt throw😆
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really good.. continue soon...😃
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SUPERB SAMY AWESOM WORK DO CONTINUE POSTING DEAR 👏


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Originally posted by: hely

antique concept...
nicely written👏
plzz do cont.
darne ki zrurt nhi h
coz dar k aagey jeet h..😆
n dnt worry abt eggs
even m vegetarian
so i cnt throw😆


thanks i will try my best😊
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Originally posted by: bubblydoll

really good.. continue soon...😃


thank u😃
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its very nice,will they have flashbacks also.
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👏Samy My sweetheart... SURPRISE😃😛😛 Aaj subah subah muje zataka de diya... oh my god my dear... Amazing!!!! What a superb story concept... I am in love with it already... AND you have written so beautifully... U are really very good writer... don't worry U will rock this story... LOVE U SWEETHEART🤗🤗🤗

Now I can't wait to say UPDATE PLZZZ😆

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update soon plz...really lovely story...could u pm me⭐️
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Originally posted by: shahbhavini

👏Samy My sweetheart... SURPRISE😃😛😛 Aaj subah subah muje zataka de diya... oh my god my dear... Amazing!!!! What a superb story concept... I am in love with it already... AND you have written so beautifully... U are really very good writer... don't worry U will rock this story... LOVE U SWEETHEART🤗🤗🤗

Now I can't wait to say UPDATE PLZZZ😆

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