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Originally posted by: aasiya49

seems like intresting !!!! continue soon !! aashee 😉

Originally posted by: msbhattacharya

I LOVED ALL THE THREE CHAPTERS 😛 VERY WELL WRITTEN👏 DO PM ME NEXT TIME YOU WRITE

Originally posted by: ashpat

really nice chapter. they are so attracted towards each other. one thing i found common is they do not believe in god or allah. i wonder if there is particular reason that BOTH of them felt same way. plzz update soon. thx for pm/

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

un Res... 👏

Sammy Yaar superb!!!!⭐️ I loved entire chapter... amazing ... U R chapter are getting better and better than previous one... Koun kehta hai ye chapter boring hai...You have shown Jalal and Jodha's emotion... vow... too good... They both are getting attracted towards each other like magnet... and they both are confuse why? Entire chapter I was mesmerized and pictured every scene... I am in love with story... Can't wait for them to meet again... This story is so different...Punar Janam... this story will have modern and traditional both stuff... I am in love with dialogue... Yaar mere dil ko chu liya...👏👏👏
Aisa kya tha us ladki mein jo mein use bhul nahi pa raha hu woe k hawa ke jhoke ki tarah ayi aur chali gayi pr apne sath jaise mera koi hissa le gayi aur abhi mein apne us hisse ko yaad kar raha hu.

You have mention my name... It is big honor😭😭😭 muje senti kar diya jaan...love you so much😃 You are amazing and superb...going... keep updating long chapter like this one😆 and update soon🤣

Originally posted by: janakipotluri

nice one. update soon thank for the pm and pm me

Chapter 4

Please ignore mistakes

Jis Pyar Ko Dhund Rahe Hai, Barson Se Hamari Zindagi Me,
Wo Dikhai Diya Hai Aap Ki In Sagar Jaise Nili Aankho Me

At Jalal enterprises

Jalal with great confidence and a slight smile on his face addressed his employee, "today another company is coming for deal and merging our company so I want that everyone be attentive and careful I want this deal at any cost. If u all have any quires u can ask from Surya.

With worried and tensed look, "Jalal what will happen if they reject this deal asked Surya

No Surya I am very much confident they can't reject this proposal I know that our company is in crisis but we are loyal and trusted company... In market our company's reputation is very well

Hmm I hope so Jalal, said Surya thinking about past happening about which Jalal is unaware, hope our company past doesn't effect this deal.

What happened? Surya asked Jalal waiving his hand in front of Surya eyes.

Nothing Jalal I want to tell u something important. Jalal with irritated look, No Surya not this time I have lot of work to do I know your important things. But Jalal listen me na, No surya, please jalal. Defeated by please word of his friend said Jalal, "accha batao kya batana hai. Wo Jalal iske pehle bhi ek baar ...

Their talking is interrupted by a peon, Sir they have informed that they will reach within an hour.

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In shock and confused look, what we are going to merge a company but why and ant what's the need asked Jodha.

With smile and love said Bharmal : Yes ,Jodha u heard right we are going to merge a company and its for betterment of our company and have a given words to them so I can't take my step back I hope u will understand.

Little bit sad and tension came on her face.

Hmm, Sounds fine dad as your wish but I would really like to join to meet them for the meeting.

Bharmal with pleasant expression sure why not... I am glad you are taking so much interest in business.

They both started toward Jalal's company. Jodha is very detail in her work... she started to read and research about the company in the car... she read all the documents and made some calls to clarify her doubts... Both of them have discussion about all terms and condition.

Jodha: Dad we should be careful as there company is in loss so... I am sure you know that this company is sinking and this merger will impact on our company too...

Yes you are absolutely right Bharmal said to Jodha... but I have research in detail and based on their current condition I have put my terms and conditions... If they not agree then might backed out... This deal is depending on today's meeting... let's see what happens...

Finally they arrived to company and got down from car

As soon as her she put out her feet out of the car... her body shivers with vibration... A cool breeze touches Jodha's face as if it was informing her about someone his presence around her... aura of his soul was attracting her... and She suddenly evoke her dreams.

She recalls her first meeting at the airport... How she fallen into his arm, his voice. Just the feeling of his presence was giving pleasant feelings... Bharmal close car door stridently which wake her from her dreamy state... A smile came on her face on her stuipidity... Jodha patted her head, pagal hai tu Jodha koi fayda nahi hai vo yahan todi na hoga and started walking...

Maine khud ko de diya hai tujhko
Main tera.. hoon tera
Kaate na kate, leta hai ye karvate
Din mera.. din mera
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Dil dil ko sunaaye batiyaan
Aa tujhme bitaaun ratiyaan
Ho tu mujhme kahin pe bas jaa
Ho... aa...

Jalal and Surya made all arrangement for the meeting... They have also prepared, planned and researched in detail since this was their last way out to save dream of his father...

Just then phone rang and Jalal picked: ya tell me

Receptionist: Sir they have arrived

With happy and relieved face said Jalal: I will be right out... making sure they are comfortable and welcome properly...

Jalal was in haste to greet them and welcome... She was bending and he didn't notice her... Jodha got up with file and Jalal was in haste ... They both crashed into each other... Jodha drop her files again... and lost her balance... before she fell...Jalal grab her from waist and hold her hand... there his heart stopped beating again, time stood still he can't believe on his eyes, a divine beauty was resting in her hand. Her mysterious smile like Mona Lisa, her long hair, her mischievous blue eyes (I like blue eyes much u can take green also its on ur wish). Making him go crazy for her ...Jodha completely lost in his eyes with astonish and amazed expression... she didn't even realize he was holding her... They both were looking each other with intense eye lock... their heart suddenly started to beat rapidly... There was a deep silence as if they were only two souls present on this earth who wanted be together. History repeating itself again... In deep silence but their souls were talking meeting again.

Jodha's soul: Jalal ap abhi aye hain humne apka kitna intzaar kiya har pal har ghadi bs ap ko hi yaad krte hai bs apka hi khayal rehta hain

ishq ki dhuni roz jalaaye
Uthta dhuaan toh kaise chhupaaye
Ho akhiyaan kare jee hajoori
Maange hai teri manjoori
Kajra siyaahi, din rang jaaye
Teri kastoori rain jagaaye
Man mast magan, man mast magan
Bas tera naam dohraaye
Man mast magan, man mast magan
Tera naam dohraaye

Jalal's soul: hum bhi Jodha bs apke pass ana chate the hum apse dur jarur the par alag nahi. Aisa ek pal bhi nahi tha jb humne apko yaad na kiya ho

Chaahe bhi toh bhool na paaye
Man mast magan, man mast magan
Bas tera naam dohraaye
Man mast magan, man mast magan
Tera naam.. bas tera naam dohraaye

Odh ke dhaani reet ki chaadar
Aaya tere shehar mein Ranjha tera
Duniya zamaana, jhoota fasaana
Jeene marne ka waada saancha mera
Ho.. sheesh-mehal na mujhko suhaaya

After this beautiful soul meeting, they both came back to reality... and realize they were gazing each other for much longer than normal... Jodha swiftly stand up... they both were surprised with their own behavior and unknown attraction towards each other...

Both were shock and surprised, they have never imagined meeting again tough their heart wanted to meet again.

Both exclaimed: You...

Jalal with a shock and surprised way: You are here suddenly and for what purpose, he bombarded Jodha with lots of question.

Jodha was too lost in watching in him to answer any of his questions

She is my Jodha Sharma, PA MR. Jalal answered Bharmal

Jodha this name directly touched Jalal's heart as this is the most precious and beautiful name of the world.

Yeh sare ehsas naye toh the par anjaane nahi yeh ek naam sirf naam nahi tha. Us gujre hue waqt ki dhundhali taswiri dikhai dene lagi jb pehli baar Jalal ne jodha ka naam suna tha

Jalal head started spinning he can see some blurred images and hear some voices

Flashback

**Shenshah use Registan ka gulaab kehte hai aur vo Amer ki Rajkumari Jodha h**

Jalal covered his ears with his hands and shook his head he don't know what is happening with him

Jalal tum theek toh ho na asked Surya with care and tensd look

Ya I m alright don't worry Surya said Jalal in assuring voice, lets go for meeting come Mr. Sharma.

They proceeded towards meeting room and all this while both Jalal and Jodha were lost in their own world

Meeting started and few presentations are shown both of them agree for few conditions and for few they disagree. And at last they were ready for the deal to sign. Jalal asked Bharmal to sign few papers. MR. Jalal I can't signs these papers as its company's owner right.

With shocking look Jalal asked, but u are the company owner na

No Mr. Jalal I m not company owner, company owner is... before Bharmal can speak further a phone call interrupted them it was Jodha mobile ringing

She picked the call and a sudden anger arises on her face she looked at Jalal with great anger as if she will eat him through eyes after hearing the other side person talk. Ok thanks.

Sir this deal can't be sign Mr. Jalal' company is fraud said Jodha with firm and angry voice.

Jalal was hell shocked after listening to the word fraud. His anger was at its peak how she dare say my company a fraud she is only a PA and she is giving orders. He said almost in shouting voice u cant do dis Mr. Bharmal I hope u remember about your words and company name.

Jodha: dekhiye Mr. Jalal humein apke company ki sachai nahi pta thi isiliye humne haan kr di thi pr ab yeh deal nahi ho skti kisi bhi keemat par nahi Sir lets go and holding her father hand she went out of cabin closing the door with anger.

Jalal eyes become red with anger how dare she do all this she was behaving like as she was company owner and she broke the deal u will have to pay for this Miss. Jodha he hited hardly on desk and this deal will happen any how this is my promise to u . Surya come with me.

Mr. Bharmal was worried and shocked all the things happened so suddenly that he didn't realize what happen why happen.

He asked Jodha almost in scolding way are u mad Jodha what u have done. Why u broke this deal?

Dad calm down I will tell u all the things but trust me what I have done is right. First let's go from here.

Jodha's POV

Why all this happens. Maine socha tha ki sab kuch bahut accha hoga par sach toh kuch aur hi nikla

Jalal's POV

Humesha voh nahi hota jo hum cahte hai vo ladki jaise mere dil aur dimaag ke sath khel rahi hai. I just hate her

Two souls were confused about the happenings abut their feeling and God was smiling on his play.

Precap: more hatred more love more confusion

this was another bakwass update from me thanks for reading and please do like and comment

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