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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow
so cute..😳
jab they met...👍🏼
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Originally posted by: samy18

thank u di ur words acts just like a tonic and ya surely i will update longer one love u too😳😳😊😊

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It's a great start and an awesome update. Keep updating more and can you PM me whenever you update your story so that I don't miss any update. Awesome Concept.
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Originally posted by: enchantedMe

It's a great start and an awesome update. Keep updating more and can you PM me whenever you update your story so that I don't miss any update. Awesome Concept.

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thanks dear i will pm u
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wow really superb update its very interesting 👍🏼
pls update soon i cant wait when they met .. pm me pls
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Sorry for late update

Dis chapter is dedicated to my Bhavini di

Chapter 3

Jalal eyes stuck at her ...seeing her in this condition shaken him inside...he is confuse with his own feeling what is happening to him... Why he is so panic...Jalal mind processing lots of strange thoughts...Jalal and Ayesha both with nervous expression together they rushed to the hospital taking care of unconscious Jodha. They reached hospital and called doctor, after examined Jodha doctor informed both of them that she is absolutely alright it's all because of stress no need to worry. Jalal sigh in relief and looked at Jodha, her life and asked to himself why I m worried bothered about her when even I don't know her name, what is happening with to me why she is effecting me so much... she is a complete stranger why my I am so concern for her... oh god save me, interrupting his thoughts Ayesha said thanks to him. Jalal with little smile, It's all right that's my duty... he responded but he sounded low Jalal said it absent mindly... he is continuously looking gazing at Jodha , she is peacefully sleeping on the bed...her innocent face was attracting him... she was wearing his favorite color sari... her sharp feature... curvy sensual figure... soft skin... was attracting him... but he has seen many beautiful girls before but he felt like she is pulling him like magnet... her one look worked like magic... he just wanted to stay with her... Nurse loud voice wake him up from spell and he realize that but suddenly he came out of his thoughts and realized that he was getting late and hurriedly came out got up but something stopped him again... he turned back to see her one more gaze... and walk out of the room and called his friend Suryabhan to pick him. Tell me where are u, I am on my way Jalal...suryabhan replied, he told his address.

Meanwhile Jodha got her conscious back and found herself in hospital, She was feeling something change...her heart is beating fast... what happened...feeling of his touch was so familiar... she asked to Ayeaha who was sitting on stool near her bed keeping her head between her hands.

Ayesha finally with realif gave smile; Kya keh rahi hai tu... chod us baat ko... Chalo finally itne dino ke baad mili hai tu... Aur madam ko hosh chala gya, ajeeb baat hai itni dur se travel karke mein ayi aur behosh tum ho gayi. Jodha was so lost in thought of him... she has not much interest in her Ayesha's talk... She wanted to find about him... Very funny han Ayesha, accha Ayesha ye to bata vo ladka kahan hain, ... mujhe use thanks bolna hai.. oh so u wanted to say thanks to him but vo toh chala gaya. Jodha with little resentment;Kya chala gaya ab me usse thanks kese kahungi... tumhe pata hai usak naam pata... aur koi contact number...

Ayesha... pata nahi wo kuch khoya khoya sa lag raha tha... par tere halat dek ke uske pasine choot gaye the... ajib tha ... ajnabi hone ke baavjood ... yaha tak aaya...UFF kafi good looking tha... pata nahi mera dhayan nahi tha aur wo chala gya... Jodha is thinking...

Na jane mujhe kya ho gya

tu mujhe apna sa lagne laga

and smile at herself... silly me... muje uska naam bhi pata nahi... aur ... she is again lost in his thoughts

Hey Jalal I m here said Surya waving his hand. Hi Surya... he give him hug and ask... to batao kaise ho yar tum toh mujhe bhul gaye na , nahi Jalal it's not like that I will tell u all things but par abhi chalo putting luggage in the car said Surya ,

Jalal sat on passenger seat and both of them started towards Suryabhan's home.

Suryabhan: So Jalal, how was journey and Javeeda aunty kaisi hai ,

Jalal responded in tiring voice; yaar long journey but was not bad acchi thi and Javs bhi theek hai aur tumhe bahot yaad karti hai... said jalal he had no interest in talking much...hewho was lost in his world of thoughts, continuously in his thought Jodha her innocent face was running, She is so beautiful, I have not see any one like her... kahi muje usse pehli nazar me...pyaar... kisi ko bhi use pyaar ho jaye he hit his head, R u mad why u are thinking so much about her pushing away his thoughts with smile...

he asked to surya how is our company doing, Javs told me that our company is running at loss is it true?(though he trust Javeeda completely but he asked this as maybe it is small loss) but answer he got was not in his favor . Jalal our company is in big crisis and it is at the stage of closing there is no way to cope up said Surya sadily. Jalal was in shock his Father's dream is at its end he can't let it happen, he will definitely find a way , Surya hum pehle office chalege

Mujhe aaj hi kuch decision lene hai.

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Jodha and Ayesha reached to sharma's place, Mrs. Sharama welcomed Ayesha. Hello aunty kaisi hai aap aur Uncle ghar pe nahi hai?kaha hai ,beta vo office gaye hai said Mrs. Sharma . Ayesha u have lots of time to talk first go and get fresh and take rest we will go out together in evening ordered Jodha.

Jo hukum Jodha u will never change I m going to get fresh. Jodha was standing near window of her remembering her his dream voice and her dream boy, kaun tha vo aur uski awaj kitni jani pehchani thi aisi jaisi mein humesha se use janti hu kash mein use uska naam puch pati...

Rang dhal jaate hai

Din badal jaate hai

Raatein so jaati hai

Pyaar khotaa nahi

Pyaar sotaa nahi

Pyar dhaltaa nahi

Haan! badaltaa nahi

Her thoughts are interrupted by a phone call, "hello, what happened Dad any problem. Mr. Sharma said , " yes Jodha, I need your help can u join our company from tomorrow". Jodha almost jumping, seriously Dad I can join office from tomorrow wow thank u thank u so much Dad. Mr. Sharma in a confused way asked her but Jodha I don't understand why u want to join our company as small employee when u are now owner of company. Jodha said while smiling, Dad that's why I want to join my company as employee so that I can learn all things and I will be close to my employees. Mr. Sharma with proud, okay Jodha mujhe samjh aa gaya I will talk to u later.

At Jalal's office

There was great rush in office as Jalal was arriving, everyone is eager to see him first time but afraid and nervous also. There Jalal comes, all the people where in amazed to see him, finding him so handsome and charming perfect to be called as Prince. Jalal asked surya to arrange meeting of directors ASAP.

Though this was his first meeting but he was confident enough.

Jalal with confident voice addressed his employees, though we are running in loss and maybe it's our company's end but where when there is a hope, there is a way

So I have decided I will merge my company with another company, I know u all is in shock with this decision but this is last option, they together discussed on several points and take various decision. Surya said in slightly tired voice in Jalal's ear, "hey please lets go home I don't know about u but I m really tired so end it fast". I know surya all your tricks u will never change, u r saying this so that I will go home, said Jalal keeping smile on his face. Surya in funny mood, yeh toh vahi baat hui ulta chor kotwal ko daate tub hi kaha change hua aj bhi ziddi hai. After meeting is over both of them started traveling towards home meanwhile they have some friendly talk about their childhood.

Jalal do u remember hum dono barish mein kaise vo small frogs ko pakadte the and fir unhone ghar late the toh kitni data padati thi. Han Surya I remember everything and I missed u so much.

At Surya's home

A sweet lady opened the door. Hii Shivani, welcome my Friend Jalal and Jalal she is my wife Shivani. Hello Shivani I have heard a lot about u from Surya said Jalal. Keeping a big smile on her face said Shivani, "me too and now u both either will come inside or gate par se vapas jana hai

Hum jahaan aaye hai

Meharbaan saaye hai

Hum yahaan khwaabon ke

Kaarwa laaye hai

Dhadkane hai jawaa

Gaa raha hai samaa

Pighli pighli se hai

Mehaki tanhayiyan

Though Jodha and Jalal were far away from each other but their soul are connected as they are soul mates and they will be soon together.

Both of them were thinking about each other

Jalal's POV

Aisa kya tha us ladki mein jo mein use bhul nahi pa raha hu woe k hawa ke jhoke ki tarah ayi aur chali gayi pr apne sath jaise mera koi hissa le gayi aur abhi mein apne us hisse ko yaad kar raha hu. Use dekhne pe aisa laga jaise mein use barsu sadiyo se janta hu.

Jodha's POV

Wo awaj wo cehra sb jana pehchana tha aur vo dhundhali taswire jo mujhe dikhai di vo kya thi. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha kya karu ajeeb se bechaini hai. Jodha, Jodha yeh tujhe muje kya ho rha hai. Mom kehti hain ki humari life mein sb kuch us bhagwan ki marzi se hota hai par na toh mein bhagwan ko manti hu aur na hi yeh ki humari life pe uska zor hai.

Do Pal Ruka Khwabon Ka Karvan

Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahan Hum Kahaan

Do Pal Ki Thi Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan

Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan ... (2)

Tum The Ke Thi Koi Ujli Kiran

Tum The Yaa Koi Kali Muskayi Thi

Tum The Yaa Sapnon Kaa Thaa Saavan

Tum The Ke Khushiyon Ki Ghataa Chaayehe Thi

Tum The Ke Thaa Koi Phool Khilaa

Tum The Yaa Milaa Thaa Mujhe Nayaa Jahaan

Do Pal Rukaa Khwabon Kaa Kaarvaan

Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan

Do Pal Ki Thi Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan

Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan ... (2)

At Sharma enterprises

Every employee were busy in there assigned work as today their company is going to merge another company and it was a big day for their company as their company's owner is also going to come but they hardily know that their hope to see her is of no use.

Jodha reached to company office she was quite nervous and happy also. So Dad, who is my boss? It's all your wish Jodha u have to decice your boss said Bharmal in Friendly manner while smiling.

Ok so from today I m your PA dad if u dnt have any problem. No problem beta anything for u come o lets go today we have some very important meeting.

Wait dad first u go and then I will come, I don't want ki kisi ko bhi pta chale ki mein kaun ho.

Thik hai Jodha but come fast.

Here Jalal was also ready for office along with Surya. Before going to office he messaged Javeeda and asked her to take care. Jalal come lets pray to Allah for our company said Surya in worried manner. Surya tujhe pta hai na ki mujhe Allah par believe nahi hai agar tujhe krna hai toh kar and saying these Jalal started walking towards car.

Both Jodha and Jalal were busy in their work and their dreams but they hardily know that their destination is same.

A cool breeze blew when Jodha enterned in office no one was able to move his eyes. A murmering voice can be clearly heard hey kya yahi humari company ki owner hai , han yar yahi hogi and all Jodha slightly smiled and moved toward reception and said to receptionist , hello I m Jodha Sharma Mr. Bharmal's new PA .

Everyone standing there was in shock, she is PA not owner.

Precap: A new start towards little hate and much attraction

So frnds I know dis is too boring chapter but it is needed and what will happen next in our opinion

and plz post your comment and feel free if to tell if u dnt like ready for all sade tamatar but no ande 😆😆

plz hit like and comment😛

Edited by samy18 - 11 years ago
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un Res... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Sammy Yaar superb!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I loved entire chapter... amazing ... U R chapter are getting better and better than previous one... Koun kehta hai ye chapter boring hai...You have shown Jalal and Jodha's emotion... vow... too good... They both are getting attracted towards each other like magnet... and they both are confuse why? Entire chapter I was mesmerized and pictured every scene... I am in love with story... Can't wait for them to meet again... This story is so different...Punar Janam... this story will have modern and traditional both stuff... I am in love with dialogue... Yaar mere dil ko chu liya...👏👏👏
Aisa kya tha us ladki mein jo mein use bhul nahi pa raha hu woe k hawa ke jhoke ki tarah ayi aur chali gayi pr apne sath jaise mera koi hissa le gayi aur abhi mein apne us hisse ko yaad kar raha hu.

You have mention my name... It is big honor😭😭😭 muje senti kar diya jaan...love you so much😃 You are amazing and superb...going... keep updating long chapter like this one😆 and update soon🤣
Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update
Plz plz plz continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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seems like intresting !!!! continue soon !! aashee 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Amazing update

Plz plz plz continue soon


thank u😃😃😃

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