FF *Ishqzaade* ~THd-2~ chptr 31 updtd on page 34 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
It was really nyc...i was sooo lost in it .😳...Thanx 4 d PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
superb yaar
so nice loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG.!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
I bow down to you Pallavi 👏 This is one of the BEST SR ❤️ I've ever come across honestly. You nailed it honey ... you killed it ... 👍🏼 Loved it to the bits.!! This is what I longed for actually ... Badly wanted to see WILD SEDUCTRESS JODHA amazingly and exquisitely seducing her Hot and Charming hubby Jalal ☺️ Pallavi I immensely blushed at every scene ... I read this in morning and I'm commenting at evening ... See It took so many hours to overcome ur SR hangover 😆 Brilliant update ... 😳 You're veteran at it, mark my words 👏 👏 👏 Well done and keep it up 😳
Continue soon.!! 😳
Regards,
Neha ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
oops... ☺️. ☺️. ☺️.

m blushing hardly.. ☺️...m vry bad in giving my review on SR chapter...sachiii..

ummm... 😕. 😕. ..kya likhu yr samajh me nhi aa rha...

only one word...it ws OUTSTANDING...ufff so hot☺️.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85


⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Yaar maar dala... pata nahi kitne din nahi soyenge log... Full of Romance👏👏👏👏

Yaar vow... her remembering about their passionate moment ...brought goose bumps in my entire body... I have imagine each and every scene of this chapter ... the way U written with so much in detail I loved it...No words... I am blushing... How thoughtful of Jalal... he is inquiring if she has ate or not... His entry and first look... ufff...poor Jallu aaj gaya kam se... Jo giving him a ravishingly seductive smile ... uska bachna muskil hai... Jodha slowly moved towards Jalal...staring at him...put her hand beneath his chin...and closed his open mouth...all smirking... lol... I laugh out loud...so cute...the way you written Jallu's expression is out of this world... Poor Jallu baby... Itna aasan nahi hai bhulana... ( I agree)

removed the curtains thus inviting the sparkling moonlight to help her in persuading her stubborn lover and husband...the room glowed immensely with the milky white moonlight...in the full moon night (lag raha hai Jalal ki jagah me seduce ho rahi hu) beautifully written... Yaar I have no words... U R MASTER IN WRITING... (MY FAV SONG) PERFECT FOR THE CHAPTER... IS LINE PE ME BHI SAD HO GAYI...

Hans rahi hai chandani
Machal ke ro na du kahi (wiping out a lone tear that had escaped her eyes few moments ago)
Aise koi ruthata nahi(looked at him with a pleading face...)

My Jo will not give up... Amazing U taking step by step... necklace... Can't wait for kurta.. Oh Jo sad... Jo ke Aansoo ka bhi asar nahi... yaar tune to meri curiosity ko badha diya hai... I am writing and adding my comment by each paragraph... Jalllu hay tu mat rula meri jo ko... tuje nind nahi aayegi... couch pe chala gaya... Jodha's heart broke apart into million pieces😭😭😭... tune Jo ke saath me mere dil ke bhi tukde kar diya jallu... her last line...with sad voice... I felt sting in my heart... FINALLY... He pulled her uff ... I love entire paragraph... Her baby like face... and she bust out in guilt... (Dialogue Queen hum tuje aese thodi na bulate hai) Aaj se me dialogue ke saath Emotion bhi add kar diya... Meri Dialoug and Emotion Queen) Their conversation of confession... My eyes filled with tears... I felt Jalal's pain so deeply... he was hurt and he should...Your Jallu is so samjadar... Love this Jallu to core... His love is so pure...👏👏👏 beyond any words... so divine...

are baba itna acha romance chal raha ye kabab me haddi koun hai... KHANA...OHHH😃 Vow romantic moon light dinner... OMG😛!!!! Seductive Jo... my goodness she is so making him crazy😳☺️... she taking over him... she is making him wild... I love this Jodha... Yaar I can write more... but I am blushing heavily...Yaar their hug...kiss and everything beyond any words... me uske bare me nahi likh sakti☺️😆

this is ⭐️MASTER PIECE⭐️... I am completely lost in passion😳😳😳... I have no world left... This the best passionate...romantic... divine... SR chapter... This chapter has so many emotions.. I can't describe in words... YOU HAVE ROCKED IT👏👏👏... Isse behtar SR hohi nahi sakti... LOVE U SO much for this chapter🤗... I pehle se teri fan hu... par iss chapter ke baad tu usse bhi upar... The BEST EVER ...👏👏👏

Yaar kuch jyadi hi lambi comment ho gayi par kaya karu... Ye MASTER PIECE hai...

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
part 29
awesome dear...
Jodha made Jalal forgive her...
cont soon dear...

PS - thanks for the pm and plz keep sending them for all ur stories...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Itne kam likes. .seems the story has lost its charm. .dil toot gaya mera :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Pallu i have no words for this beautiful chapter... Meri comment on page 15
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pallavvi

Itne kam likes. .seems the story has lost its charm. .dil toot gaya mera :(

Yaar tu aesa mat bol... ek hi time pe itni sari update hui hai isliye... abhi time de...

YAAR ISSE ACCHI UPDATE HO HI NAHI SAKTI... THIS IS THE BEST UPDATE I HAVE EVER READ ON SR👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

no taani. .it is on page 11. .mai 10 times dekh chuki hu til the tym i hv updated. .
Ab to tm log ke cmmnts ka h sahara hai. .
I m flng realy very sad rytnw. .
I realy worked hard for dis chappy :(
chalo koi ni. .thanku bhavu, nannu, tani n al my loyal readrs for ur support. .
Thats the nly thng that kept my intrest in writing frward. .
Thanku so much. .
Love u. .GN :)

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