Originally posted by: shahbhavini
Pallu my love... ⭐️I love this chapter to core... Masterstroke👏👏👏. .I am really glad you have not shown SR...I AM NOT AT ALL DISAPPOINTED😃
THANK GOD...U R NOT DISAPPOINTED..I WAS SO SCARED...LOVE U BABU😳
... It does make sense Jalal will have reaction to her harsh and I would like to say ruthless words... Usually I am use to using this word for Jalal but Jodha was ruthless...She didn't think twice before accusing... but at the same time... She saw and heard everything... but her fault was she didn't gave him opportunity to speak him once... she started to accuse him without even discussing...
U GUESSED IT RIGHT YAAR.,...BUT SOMEONE HAS SAID THAT LOVE IS BLIND...THAT HAPPENED WITH HER ALSO😭
OMG!!! Yaar U have amazing control over language...AND UR URDU IS MASHA ALLAH... SUBHAN ALLAH... each and every word of your chapter sounds like professionally written by expert writer...Every update I am repeating this but I do think your dialogues are mind blowing...⭐️AWW YAAR...THATS SO SWEET OF U...I M FEELING SO HAPPY...😃Jalal... I am crying😭😭😭... I can feel his pain... I am not angry at Jodha but I feel sorry 😕for her... This was more like MU🤪... created by Ruku ... I hate Ruku but she already paid for her deed... You have wrote both of them emotions just perfect...Not too much...Not too less... Jalal reaction... He is not screaming at her or angry at her... He has his cool ... After all he can't see her in pain... He knows she made mistake... he tried to hug her and move on but ... how can anyone forget those ruthless word in few minutes... His reaction I cried for it... Jodha ... I love her reaction too... She knows that why he is upset and what is bothering him... they don't need any communication... I would say this is marriage and it's part of the life... they love each other but still MU and ego comes in between... that's how their relation with grew deeper and deeper... Moti is true friend... she trusted Jalal ... she thought it was misunderstanding... but when you love someone blindly and hear everything in front of your eyes ...U easily misunderstood your love... but I don't think that means Jodha's love is weak... It was a one moment... she was weak...her mind took over her heart... You have written every word touched my heart...Love it to core... I don't know what I am writing... seriously meri chatak li hai
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL ANALYSIS YAAR...U UNDERSTOOD EACH AND EVERY WORD EXACTLY THE WAT I WANTED TO CONVEY...I M MISSING NANCY REVIEWS TERRIBLING AND U HEAL MY PAIN IN HER ABSENSE...LOVE U YAAR...THANKU SO SO SO SO MUCH...CRYING RIGHTNOW...CAN'T SAY MORE😭
... but bottom line is you are Marvelous amazing uper-duper extraordinary superb writer...LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT... 🤗
THANKU YAAR...LOVE U TOO BHAVU🤗🤗🤗🤗
OMG!!!! FINALLY SR... SEDUCTIVE JODHA...CAN'T WAIT... UPDATE GANG TERE PICHE😆