OS : JODHA BANI MEERA: PART 4 Page 25 updated Feb 10th - Page 12

bhavi di...cheers for u.

HIP HIP HURRAY...
HIP HIP HURRAY...
HIP HIP HURRAY...
HIP HIP HURRAY...
HIP HIP HURRAY...

u knw tdy CVs showed what u wrote in ds ss...he requested to his awaam dt plz pray for my jodha begam. nd he saw a dream whr jodha ws gng bt he stopped her nd in reality she got concious.

at that scene i wanted to scream nd say arre bhavi di ne bhi exactly aisa hi likha tha...hyeee i ws missing u while watching tdy epi..sachiii..

My dear Bhavini,

Now that Jalal actually sought dua for Jodha Begum from the awaam, you can rightfully pat yourself on the back for having beaten the CVs to that idea!

Shyamala Aunty

QUOTE=sashashyam]My dear Bhavini,

In terms of both the writing style and the content, this part is superior to the last one.

Jalal's asking the awaam, Hindus and Muslims alike, to pray for Jodha's survival was very well thought out. As was Jodha's moving farewell to Jalal, just before he effectively pulls her back from the gates of death.

What I did not like was your making Jodha go down the same old path, and being distant and chilly towards Jalal. I do hope the screen Jodha does not behave the same way. I am pretty sure she will not; she will be so happy about her having been able to save him, and limp with relief at the lifting of the unbearable tensions of the last few week, that she will never think of slighting Jalal and punishing him. At least I hope so.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thanks...amazing..brilliant...please update sooon

Thanks for your comment!! I am so happy you like part also😃

Originally posted by: priyavishu18

Excellent One Yaar... Each and Every Line was very catching...

Thanks!!! I am glad you line entire part😃

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Superb and awesome update,Bhavini di...
Brought tears in my eyes...
Poor Jalal but he deserves it...
He wronged Jodha...
Finally,my sleeping beauty came back to senses...
I was really worried...
Continue sooonish,Bhavini di...
Thanks for the pm... :)

Vow sweety...!!!!!!!!!! Such a sweet comment... Brought tears... I am glad you like... I will update soon!😃

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

loved it... but too much pain for my Jo... poor girl..

Diksha dear muje Jalal mil jaye ... me koi bhi pain le lugh😆 I glad you loved it...😃

Originally posted by: pranavvikas

Wow it was amazing
Jalal needed that ignorance from jodha
thanks a lot for this superb update dear

I am glad you like this part also... Jalal ignore ... no way... mera dil... ro raha hai jalal ke liye...

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

106 likes!! ❤️
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TANI ... UNREST KAR...JALDI SE...

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

I am feeling bad as well preeti... but Jalal has done many things which is hard to forgive... Jodha will understand him soon... 😃