OS: You are my strenght

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TheIronLady

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
beautiful os...emotional...

Thank you..😊

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TheIronLady

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: AriyaBestLover
beautiful piece of writing

Thank You..😊

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TheIronLady

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: AkDha_Fanatic
Lovely amazing and brilliant OS.!!! Well done dear :)

Thank You dear.😊

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TheIronLady

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: darshika121
i am speechless...spell bounded...i never akdha cn be so magical 👏👏 👏👏 👏👏 👏

Aww...Thank you dear...😳

Edited by TheIronLady - 11 years ago

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TheIronLady

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: pallavi003
wow..lovely,:-)

Thank you Pallu..🤗

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Soumya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

This is simply amazing Komal...so touching! You've captured every emotion so perfectly, it touched my heart.❤️

Have loved all your previous OSes too..I really wish to read more from you, do keep writing whenever you get time! 😳

I just gotta edit my noms again now, dunno how I missed this!😊

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sashashyam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

My dear Komal,

I see that you are now trying your hand at high emotion, and I must say it has come off very well.

There are 2 points in it that appealed to me particularly.

One, Jodha saying " You love me for who I am and I love you for who you are". This is exactly what is missing now, and far more on her side than on his.

Two, that Ruqaiya is shown as what she must have been in real life, Jalal's best friend, and thus caring towards the woman he loves as well.

Shyamala Aunty

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disha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

komaliiieee

Res!

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Komaliya! Oh womaniya! SUnn rahi ho? I want to give you one tight waala jhappi! 😭🤗

THIS was SO beautiful! All the emotions which we've been craving her,you gave to us in the right proportions at the right time.

Jalal's pain at seeing her in pain,Jodha's pain of seeing him in pain. Both of them trying hard not to breakdown,because that would result in the other's breakdown.

This was so heart-touching! What I ALSO liked was how u handled Ruqaiya here. This is how I believe Ruqaiya must have been like

The attention you gave to those tiny details about how their tears is something I adored in your writing!

Please do write more often!

This will definitely be one among my most favourites!

Edited by disha15 - 11 years ago