OS: You are my strenght - Page 2

Lovely amazing and brilliant OS.!!! Well done dear :)

Originally posted by: ashpat

Wow. This was very touching to c their emotional side . Plzzz write often. When u do, Plzzz pm me. Thx for gr8 update.

i am speechless...spell bounded...i never akdha cn be so magical 👏👏 👏👏 👏👏 👏

awesome and a touching os dear

Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91

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Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91

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God Komal this was sotouching.. you made me emotional😭😭 they lost their baby why does this happen with akdha but they are together.. sharing pain with each other.. conforting each other.. 😊

this is a beautiful piece dear..😳

please take break more often and please continue this story and make it FF😳

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!!!!!
What else can I say dear..perfectly captured emotions, perfect length - not too long, not too short!

I understand if you can't continue with FFs...but please do write OSes...
I don't know if you're able to write an OS when Jodha finally confesses her feelings to a desperate-to-know-Jalal

I loved reading it...Mashallah!
what command of the language too!!!

just like me, you prefer writing it wholly in English ...I guess that's why I can enjoy reading it more!


By the way, a teeny weeny request...next time when you're writing a Ja-Jo scene can you make her call him Shehenshah instead of Jalal cos she couldn't/wouldn't have called him by name...would just make the piece that much more realistic!
beautiful once again!

OMG this was so beautiful, and also emotional, made me cry. You're so talented to write something so profoundly, I really LOVED it, please write more if you get time, thank you so much!!!