OS: You are my strenght - Page 5

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Beautifully written!
The concept was emotionally based and you justified it by describing it amazingly.
Jalal crying and cursing himself but jodha acting calmly and composing both of them.
Superb!
Write more 😊

Originally posted by: Effinelf

Nice

Originally posted by: The.Patthaaka.

komaliiieee

Res!

Edit.

God I never replied to your post.😛

Komaliya! Oh womaniya! SUnn rahi ho? I want to give you one tight waala jhappi! 😭🤗

Why you stopped greeting me like this Dtv?😭

THIS was SO beautiful! All the emotions which we've been craving her,you gave to us in the right proportions at the right time.

Jalal's pain at seeing her in pain,Jodha's pain of seeing him in pain. Both of them trying hard not to breakdown,because that would result in the other's breakdown.

Thank you dear, well you know Jalal is for Jodha and vice versa.

This was so heart-touching! What I ALSO liked was how u handled Ruqaiya here. This is how I believe Ruqaiya must have been like

Ruq should have been handled this way in the show as well.

The attention you gave to those tiny details about how their tears is something I adored in your writing!

Thank you!☺️😆

Please do write more often!

This will definitely be one among my most favourites!

I am glad to know that dear.😃

Originally posted by: princess_saumya

OMG😊😭 O MY GOD...

!!!!!!!!!!!!

YAAR IT WAS SO TOUCHING..😭

LITERALLY IT WAS TOOO EMOTIONAL ...

I LOVED EACH AND EVERY SENTENCE OF IT..

I CANT DESCRIBE IT IN WORDDS...

Loved it

U r a star...😲⭐️

👏

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