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Vincy Anne

@VincyAnne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: onaisa
Zabardasr N jhakaas update
Thanx fr d PM buddy
Update sooon😊

Aww thanks dear ... 🤗 Not a big deal at all ... 🤗 Glad you enjoyed this chapter ... 😃 I will update soon ... 😉

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taaniroyal

@taaniroyal

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Part A.
Awsum chptr 👏
its raining here n story main v raining
luv that mr stranger smirking

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Beautiful update Vincy dear😛 I always wanted to know Jalal's POV, as from the start we only knew what Jo was doing, thinking, dreaming but not what Jalal felt/thought about Jo (except for the idea that he was her boss)😛 Wonderful! So he has taken to Jo, just like Jo has for Jallu😆😉 I think it is kinda love at first sight for both, unknowingly. 😊 Want to know how and what they converse.😉

Teaser --- 4😕 Who is that best friend? Ruqaiya kya😡

Update it fast Vincy. Already interested😊

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sara

@SARA4444

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: VincyAnne
Thank you dear ... 😳
Yes Jodha and her Mr. Stranger ... What a couple ... 🤣
Finally she finds out who he is ... 🥳 😆
OMG really it was good ?! 😲 Thanks a lot dear I was afraid it didn't turn out good ... 😳
Glad u liked this chapter ... 🤗 I'll update soon .. 😉

😃😊

di the "best friend" plz dont let her create distances between akdha 😊

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Beautiful Vincy!! Loved both the chapters..glad you gave us Jalal's POV too!!! 😳

Absolutely loved reading their thoughts...Jo's reaction on realising who MR.Stranger is..Jalal's eyes looking for her the whole while...and their first encounter in office..awesome!!❤️

Thoroughly enjoyed reading the chapters...can't wait for the next one.

Upadte soon!😃

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rpeez

@rpeez

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Nice update! I loved Nisha's reactions. 😆

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Angel-

@Angel-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

That was beautiful, beautiful writing. Loved that the story unfolded slowly, luxuriously, built on a surprise twist. Just lovely!!

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Amazingly written vincy! 👏 Really a very fresh writing and nice portrayal of the characters is the intriguing part of this story!
All the parts were penned beautifully and a smooth writing! Very smooth infact!
I personally loved the story and its starting, a jalal and jodha meeting like a strangers at the bus stop in the rain...it gives you a totally romantic feel..then jodha thinking of jalal and then the revealation about JM corporations headed by jalal was cute!
I loved it 😃
Keep it up and i am waiting for the 4th chapter 😊
Thank you for the pm!

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Superb updates Vincy.. So Jalal is the head... Awsm... Loving this story more and more.. I really liked Jo's behavioural chsnge..after she got to know that hes d head...lovely...

Cont soon Vincy