FF : ll~Her First Love ~ll Thread 1 [CLOSED] ; PM lists in pg 24 - Page 30

hey vincy

whr r u...😕

plz update this ff itz almost 3 month n no update from u...😕
plz itz humble request to u...plz update dear...

waiting 4 ur update
n plz pm me

amazing story
jodha n her mr. stranger
pls continue soon...
pls do pm me whenever u update...

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Beautiful update Vincy dear😛 I always wanted to know Jalal's POV, as from the start we only knew what Jo was doing, thinking, dreaming but not what Jalal felt/thought about Jo (except for the idea that he was her boss)😛 Wonderful! So he has taken to Jo, just like Jo has for Jallu😆😉 I think it is kinda love at first sight for both, unknowingly. 😊 Want to know how and what they converse.😉

Teaser --- 4😕 Who is that best friend? Ruqaiya kya😡

Update it fast Vincy. Already interested😊

Originally posted by: SARA4444

😃😊

di the "best friend" plz dont let her create distances between akdha 😊

Originally posted by: baubles

Beautiful Vincy!! Loved both the chapters..glad you gave us Jalal's POV too!!! 😳

Absolutely loved reading their thoughts...Jo's reaction on realising who MR.Stranger is..Jalal's eyes looking for her the whole while...and their first encounter in office..awesome!!❤️

Thoroughly enjoyed reading the chapters...can't wait for the next one.

Upadte soon!😃

Originally posted by: rpeez

Nice update! I loved Nisha's reactions. 😆

Originally posted by: ...janu...

nice one update soon

Originally posted by: Angel-

That was beautiful, beautiful writing. Loved that the story unfolded slowly, luxuriously, built on a surprise twist. Just lovely!!

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Amazingly written vincy! 👏 Really a very fresh writing and nice portrayal of the characters is the intriguing part of this story!
All the parts were penned beautifully and a smooth writing! Very smooth infact!
I personally loved the story and its starting, a jalal and jodha meeting like a strangers at the bus stop in the rain...it gives you a totally romantic feel..then jodha thinking of jalal and then the revealation about JM corporations headed by jalal was cute!
I loved it 😃
Keep it up and i am waiting for the 4th chapter 😊
Thank you for the pm!

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

Superb updates Vincy.. So Jalal is the head... Awsm... Loving this story more and more.. I really liked Jo's behavioural chsnge..after she got to know that hes d head...lovely...

Cont soon Vincy