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SIVARANJANI

@pranavvikas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1091

Thanks for this pm will read out and comment

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riyasp

@riyasp

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1092

Lashy dear,

Got up at 5:00 am, picked up the mobile to check whether you have updated, Voila, our shradda is lady of words as always

U too Brutus stopped at this point. Will you update soon ...Can u try please please

U know ur Jalal and Jodha, I like more than our serial characters.

I feel they are like real life people whom I know. That's way u described each and everything in your fiction.⭐️

No words to describe your writing style. 👏 MUAH ...that too 1000's

Take care dear

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Delphi

@Delphi-03

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#1093

Hum aapse ghrina karte hain!!!!!!!!!😡
Just Kidding! 😆

But seriously Di, u should not end the chapter at such a cliffhanger!!!😔🥺 Jallu's hurt, and it was Shareef's fault!! Then again, who else would it be...🤔

Atleast now Jo would realize that she does have a special place in her heart for Jalal...Or so I hope!😳

Wow... I'm beginning to feel that I like your Jalal and Jodha more than the ones on the show...😉

And of course... Great Chapter (like always!)!!!👍🏼👏

Edited by akdha-fan - 11 years ago

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petrichorr

@petrichorr

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#1094

Very nice development! I clubbed reading last few updates together and like the direction, pace and ofcourse the story telling! Don't know how far u've thought ahead but overall I like the way you are taking the story forward.

I could totally relate to Jodha when she was honest enuf to tell him he is attractive but she is not attracted to him... And then slowly his thoughts and positives coming to haunt her slowly...

Look forward to the next update. Tease you are! Leaving it hanging for us to wonder ...what next!

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1095

Originally posted by: indudolai
sorry di i have exams so dats y i did'nt review your story😆
soon i will di...waise bhi u r an
awesome writer who knws how to make her readers stick to d story😉...and u knw how much i love dis story🤗

Thank you my dearest...😳 Will wait for your reviews...all the best for your exams😳

Originally posted by: Pals2411

loool... Jalal only got hurt.. kisi aur ke liye Jodha ka blood wood thodi na drain hoga😆

TV serial dekh dekh kar aaj kal jaldi bharosa nahi hota😆 Kya pata koi naya twist ho😆 Was looking for it here too😆😉 Forgot for a second, that the writer cum director is LASHY😛
Thank you...😳

By the way, where is the message wala shaqs. Maybe entry in next part😉 Look, nowadays my mind keeps thinking and making up stories.

Message waalaa shaqs.. woh ab thodi naa saamne aayega/aayegi 😛

Suspense Ahh😉 Its a wait and watch game now

Yup! 😃

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
Awesome chapter di.. It was so so good!!!😳
Thanks da😳
I just LOVED how Jo chahte hue bhi/naa chahte hue bhi related all the qualities to Jalal... Aww!!!😳 The messages in the inbox were loool..😆 The match was AHAN! SO he was concentrating in the match till SHE arrived.. Aankhon hi aankhon mei ishaara ho gaya..😳 😆 Loved the chap!.. God! Ja is hurt.. Jo worried! 😲 Interesting!😉
Thanksss...So, you liked it...and the msgs ...which was your favourite one da? 😛
JUST CANNOT WAIT for next update!!!!!😳
Love you di!🤗
Love you tooo!🤗

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#1096

Originally posted by: lashy

Awww. I did not know that u really noticed when i did not reply to all chapters. Last second chapter i could not reply bec it reminded me of few things and could not bring myself to type much.

But, let me tell u, i am getting hooked on to this story now. I have read the chapter where jalal and his gang es to her house first time 5 times, then movie chapter 3 times and dance chapter 3 times and last one 2 times too. I just love ur ff but the best thing about u is ur styke of writing. The way u write dailgues and play with words is just amazing. It is like u want to savor each word by repeating again, i actually do that with some of ur sentences or dualogues. I read it few times and just enjoy reading it as if i am eating yummy ben and jerrys chocolate ice cream.

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Gayuraj

@Gayuraj

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1097

super story
loved it
awesome
pls pm me wen u update

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Az3003

@Az3003

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#1098

Shraddha Di!! I'm going to be reading this story and commenting on each chapter!!! YOU ARE SUCH A BRILLIANT WRITER THAT EACH CHAPTER DESERVES PRAISE ON IT'S OWN👏👏👏I'll leave reviews on your second thread as I read😛😛😛