~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair ~* Thread 1~Parts 1 - 18 - Page 106

Originally posted by: lashy

@ Pals

Don't like much of drama dear, love the unsaid😉 A dignified approach yet passionate and intense love😛

Yes.. same here... like realistic passion rather than drama-filled passion! 😛

👍🏼

All the boys and girls (both Jallu and Jo's friends), the Tip Tip barsa gang of two, Shantaram Sir and even Rishabh is in my doubt list😆 Baki koi baccha hai kya? I am not trusting anyone, except Jallu and Jo and their family members. Mera jasoosi dimag sab par shaq kar raha hai😉 CID ka asar hai. Daya darwaza tod do😆

I can see how you've thoded all the daya darwaazaas 😆 I don't know if I should say this...but, someone actually even asked me if it was a lesbian stalking her? 😆

😆😆😆 Whoever has suggested this has the most shaqi dimag😆 She will get a direct entry to the CID team without an professional degree😆 Look what you have done Lashy😆

Three days to write, then I am waiting.😛 I am very ruthless😆 No extra time, breather bhi nahi😆 Update jaldi chahiye matlab chahiye😉Lots of love dear🤗

🤗Awww my lil don

🤗Mein hu don, mein hu don, mein hu, mein hu, mein hu CHOTTA don😆🤗

Originally posted by: divyavm

Have always loved following your FF and now finally commenting on it!

Loved the last few parts- the confession and the the after-math.

You are always good at reading Jalal's thoughts on the show and I love how you have made him more introspective in your FF- loved the Jalal shower scene. Are you missing the hamaam scenes 😆

I also love how you go into Jodha's thoughts and turmoil- it was always what was lacking on the show.

Please continue soon ... Hopefully, your leads are a bit quicker on finally admitting their feelings for each other.

How can you write all these different emotions? You were spot on.👏

Like our serial I am dying to read Jodha and Jalal scenes.😭

Shraddha why don't you take writing seriously. ⭐️

Between Sunday is full dull without your update...

I know I am so greedy...but kya karo...

Your updates are so damakadar...yeh dil mange more...

please please update...

Originally posted by: riyasp

How can you write all these different emotions? You were spot on.👏 Like our serial I am dying to read Jodha and Jalal scenes.😭

Shraddha why don't you take writing seriously. ⭐️

Between Sunday is full dull without your update...

I know I am so greedy...but kya karo...Your updates are so damakadar...yeh dil mange more...

please please update...

Lashy amazing Superb👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️!!! U are awesome in showing all emotions... I loved this chapter because the way both are reacting it feels very natural ...it is very close to reality... I am sure many people go through this emotion in real life.

As soon as I saw title my eyes widen..shower... Jalal in Shower..I pictured right away Rajat in Shower... GM activated...lol ... Lashy vow what a hot description...achy gym muscles..and warm shower... I am so hurt..poor Jalal he is really feeling scratchy... feeling of rejection is really painful when U really like the person... I guess Jodha also gave him hint of liking him too and backout... She answered so politically I find you attractive but I am not attracted to you... He was never rejected in the past so it's really tuff and hurtful... AWWW no one else he shared his pain... he need a shoulder to cry... Slapped the shower wall in frustration...Oh god...he is feeling really itchy...

Jodha is missing him terribly... inside of her heart she knows turning him down was a mistake but her little brain is thinking practically... lets see how far her brain wins and avoid accepting her rising feeling for Jalal... Checking her constantly waiting for message? She wants him badly... Jalal has kept his words... vow... he has stopped canteen lunch..library and kept only official relation for her project...heads off ... but his ego hurt so was able to do that...omg she tried to consul him about this issue... obviously he is going to avoid... he don't want to be embarrassed more...Jodha is so confuse with her own emotions... it clearly shows this incident impact so muhc..she didn't even use her new nailpolish..awww...

before dropping me off - he proposed...I said no ... uske baad he decided it was wise to maintain a civil distance...nothing more. OMG WHY SHE MENTION THIS TO ANYONE..COULDN'T KEEP HER MOUTH SHUT...

Oh who is this new guy... aww...Rishabh... I like his name...Jo's ideal is Jalal.. I love that entire part...

I am glad Jalal has not tell anyone about their story... He is so decent... Jo stupid girl... don't hurt my Jallu...

ANOTHER MESSAGE... YEH KOUN HAI...

LASHY I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH...CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE... U know reading story on IF is so much fun U can share your view your opinion ...so much fun to read this way then reading book...