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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1081

Part 21 was a beauty Lashy😳👏 Aww, I was sleeping in my La La Akdhaland yesterday after the episode. Checked the forum today, saw your PM, read the part thrice and again I am in my La La Akdhaland, daydreaming. Everyday details are so very finely written dear.👏

Jallu and Jo ka dil hi dil mein ishqwala love is now hurting them. Ouch😕 Jallu still looking for Jo and Jo na chahte hu bhi 😉 going for the football match. After all it is not just a crush or a passionate affair😉

While I was reading, one line caught my attention was that of Meera telling Payal (or vice versa) on how they should goal. Mujhe hum forumwasiyo ki yaad aayi. How we all keep on giving suggestions to the director/CVs on how JA should proceed.😆 Bahar baith kar suggestions dena aasan hota hai.

By the way, is it Jallu who has hurt himself or someone else.😉 Jo will coming running and see woppie - yeh to koi aur hai😆 and Jallu will be seeing it all😉 By the way, where is the message wala shaqs. Maybe entry in next part😉 Look, nowadays my mind keeps thinking and making up stories.

Again one big big request (samjhna hai to dhamki bhi chalega) please update soon. Cant wait for 5 long days for another update😕 I know it difficult for you but tumne hi bigada hai to jhelo abhi😉 UPDATE SOON, SOONER, SOONEST PLEASEEE

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Antara123

@Antara123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1082

brilliant dude.please update sooner.cant wait

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1083

Thanks so much Sumeshni and Angel for your continued support all through🤗🤗

Ok now you three are an adorable lot 😆

@ Soumya

THAT WAS AMAZZZINGGG!!! The awesomest chapter I read till now!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thank youuu

The number of times I have told mom it's no point arranging my clothes because it's going to go back to looking just as messy in just a couple of days! 😆

OMG...😆

The whole Ideal Guy description recalled..I knew it!! I knew she had flashes of him and all those situations in mind with every quality she mentioned...chalo, atleast guessed something right, though minuscule..feeling great!🥳

I can see why you're celebrating...seeing how you've got your guesses wrong many times in the past! 😆

Loved the text messages..Makes me love this guy more!😳😳

Jalal on the football court had me drooling, the Jalal-in-football-field description is going to stay with me always!! ☺️

Awww...on with your Jalalaya namaha 😆😳

I was hoping Jo would go to the match..and she did though she was hesitant..yayy! And Jalal's eyes looked for her of their own accord..though he tried his best not to..another yayy!😆

Obviously, who else will he dhoond re...ye jitna bhi Jalal Muhammad Jalal Muhammad kare..woh kitni bhi Jodha Singh Jodha Singh kare...in the end they can't avoid each other 😆

Jo's knowledge about the game..hmm..interesting, she seems to have listened quite attentively to Jalal's talks on the topic...and I love Meera as always!❤️😳

Who's the say the 'i'm not interested in football' madam hasn't done her research...lately, the madam's been saying a lot and doing something else altogether😆

Jo's excitement, cheering and the best when she cheered for Jalal for that goal..I wanted to cheer too!! And then the eyelock..dreamy as always!

Awww

Jalal hurt..nooo...😲😭Jo's reaction made me smile..she cares so much for her 'special interesting friend'..😉😳

LOOOL...bring on the wry humour babe!😆

eed the next part ASAP...Jalal shouldn't be hurting for more than 4 days ok, that's the maximum time I give you..😆

Love you soo much di!!🤗🤗

Love you more sweetie 🤗

Originally posted by: agun
awesome update...you are a fab writer ..👏👏👏
Please dont take too long for the next update...cannot wait to see how the story progresses. I wish the protagonists of the serial are half as mature and straight forward as the ones in your story.
This...along with the '15 year old teenager' comment on the next page...actually took me to writer's paradise! Thanks so much, my dear...🤗 please visit us regularly...we promise to be a fun-loving bunch...

Originally posted by: LizBennett
WOE IS ME...!!!!
Awww, now now... 🤗🤗
Teetering at the edge of a literary cliff, ( imagine deep sigh here with " delicate palm to forehead" posture...jeez , my bestie would have thwacked me about now😆And snorted loudly afterwards..)...waiting...waiting with bated breath to be pulled back by a recalcitrant and fiendishly malevolent author...who, in a sad case of twisted ,pretzelled humanity ... relishes...RELISHES..I tell you...the unbearable agony of anticipation...that her follower wallows in...waiting ..waiting...to be pulled out of an abyss of suspense...
Was THAT melodrama enuff for ya?...😆😆😎
A bit much, maybe... and that too for a football match, out of everything...and one that's finished...😆😆
I seriously LOVED it...kahaani to chod, yahan Bechare ka leg hi twist kar diya! Bahut na insaafi hai..thakurayin...😉
Awww ...Naa in saafi...or the play or fate like Chisti baba keeps saying...😎

Edited by lashy - 11 years ago

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maahi zaidi

@zaidi98

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1084

yuuppiiee update...

amazing update..

jodha finds all her dream man qualities in jalal...

hehhee..

footbal match.. excitemnt suspense..

jalal expect jodha 2 cum...

n she finnaly cums... bt ..

ppoor jala..

s8ng 4 next..

plzz update soon..

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1085

Originally posted by: ashpat
Lashy... It is a great chapter. I like the texts especially sun rise and smile one.
Ayesha... honestly... I really miss your replies when you don't post here... thanks so much for this one🤗
It was very nice and tealistic too see that when she thought about the qualities, it matched jalal or should i say jalal fit the bill.
Hawww..true 😳
I knew jodha would come to c the match but now she can use the excuse of payals treat.
Yes, she can... but this Jo is stubborn.. I don'tthink she would have come had it not been for Payal's treat... but, the say na fate has its way! 😃
Awww poor jalal could not concentrate, i was worried about that and hope he is alright soon. Thx for giving this amazing chapter. Pleaseee update soon. Thx for pm
So, you liked the match and Jodha's inner wars with her developing feelings..thanks yaar..
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Originally posted by: Pals2411
Part 21 was a beauty Lashy😳👏 Aww, I was sleeping in my La La Akdhaland yesterday after the episode. Checked the forum today, saw your PM, read the part thrice and again I am in my La La Akdhaland, daydreaming. Everyday details are so very finely written dear.👏
You read it thrice? OMG.. lashy in 7th heaven now!

Jallu and Jo ka dil hi dil mein ishqwala love is now hurting them. Ouch😕 Jallu still looking for Jo and Jo na chahte hu bhi 😉 going for the football match. After all it is not just a crush or a passionate affair😉
Hee hee... 😆

While I was reading, one line caught my attention was that of Meera telling Payal (or vice versa) on how they should goal. Mujhe hum forumwasiyo ki yaad aayi. How we all keep on giving suggestions to the director/CVs on how JA should proceed.😆 Bahar baith kar suggestions dena aasan hota hai. I know... 😆

By the way, is it Jallu who has hurt himself or someone else.😉 Jo will coming running and see woppie - yeh to koi aur hai😆 and Jallu will be seeing it all😉
loool... Jalal only got hurt.. kisi aur ke liye Jodha ka blood wood thodi na drain hoga😆

By the way, where is the message wala shaqs. Maybe entry in next part😉 Look, nowadays my mind keeps thinking and making up stories.

Message waalaa shaqs.. woh ab thodi naa saamne aayega/aayegi 😛

Again one big big request (samjhna hai to dhamki bhi chalega) please update soon. Cant wait for 5 long days for another update😕 I know it difficult for you but tumne hi bigada hai to jhelo abhi😉 UPDATE SOON, SOONER, SOONEST PLEASEEE
🤣 u r so cute my lil don

Originally posted by: zaidi98
yuuppiiee update...
amazing update..jodha finds all her dream man qualities in jalal...hehhee..footbal match.. excitemnt suspense..
jalal expect jodha 2 cum...n she finnaly cums... bt ..
ppoor jala..s8ng 4 next..
plzz update soon..

Thanks yaar

and Thanks Najma for the support 🤗

Edited by lashy - 11 years ago

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INDU

@GOTforever

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#1086

sorry di i have exams so dats y i did'nt review your story😆

soon i will di...waise bhi u r an

awesome writer who knws how to make her readers stick to d story😉...and u knw how much i love dis story🤗

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1087

Originally posted by: lashy

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1088

Awesome chapter di.. It was so so good!!!😳 I just LOVED how Jo chahte hue bhi/naa chahte hue bhi related all the qualities to Jalal... Aww!!!😳 The messages in the inbox were loool..😆 The match was AHAN! SO he was concentrating in the match till SHE arrived.. Aankhon hi aankhon mei ishaara ho gaya..😳 😆 Loved the chap!.. God! Ja is hurt.. Jo worried! 😲 Interesting!😉

JUST CANNOT WAIT for next update!!!!!😳

UPDATE!

Update!
UPDATE!

Update!

Love you di!🤗

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Tahniat Ahmad

@Sexylicious.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1089

❤️first of all congratulations! ur thread has completed 150 pages🥳

now unres for all the parts i have missed

So here it goes:

THE BEST FF TITLE GOES TO ITS JUST NOT A PASSIONATE AFFAIR..🥳

Seriously di,

for me this is the best one and I am saying this from the bottom of my heart. Each and every part was written so well. I felt as if I were reading a novel. You are that good in writing. Where did you get the skills from di?? The New Year's Eve was The AkDha moments stole my heart away. Credits goes to Sharriffuddin! I was left in surprise after the dark room part and i think i was blushng☺️ Jodha meeting Jalal's mother part was cute. I liked it. I JUST WANT TO HOLD ROBBIE! GOD! HE MUST BE A CUTE DOG!!

Pardon me Di... Im an animal lover.. The proposing was nice! Poor Jalal got rejected.But its a very normal thing to do. Their status and most importantly THEIR RELIGION. The society would never agree to the fact that they are in love. Jodha might take time. I also get Jalal's point of view. He has to stay away from Jodha in order to erase Jodha from his mind.HE HAS THE HUGEST CRUSH ON HER!To tell you the truth I felt bad for Jalal. ❤️

Okay now coming to Rishabh... Is this new entry going to spice up the story?? I think yes! Will we get to see jealous Jalal?? Im so excited for the next part...

THE FOOTBALL MATCH❤️ Jodha came! This definently brought a smile over my face... Jodha's ideal man's list: in short Jalal... Jalal is the one! Jodha he is ur man! u must be thinking i have lost it😆

I loved it...my favorite FF..Thankx for writing it🤗