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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1071

Updated girls 🤗

Originally posted by: minnie2308
Thank god I could post before the thread exceeds 150 pages...
What a lovely update. Jalal trying to get over his feelings...And Jo will in sometime realise HER real feelings! And then...
And then?😳

Hmm... I wish they did not have tell their friends! But I guess with their close knot group it was impossible.
Obviously... even if they said nothing..it'd only become too obvious later on😕

Rishabh looks like Suryabhan?
😛

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SUMESHNI

@SUMESHNI

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1072

Awesome amazing update

Jodha does have feelings for Jalal

Plz plz continue soon

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1073

THAT WAS AMAZZZINGGG!!! The awesomest chapter I read till now!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

The start...well I can totally identify with Jo, the number of times I have told mom it's no point arranging my clothes because it's going to go back to looking just as messy in just a couple of days! 😆

And the rishta wali baat..again irritating!🥱

The whole Ideal Guy description recalled..I knew it!! I knew she had flashes of him and all those situations in mind with every quality she mentioned...chalo, atleast guessed something right, though minuscule..feeling great!🥳

Loved the text messages..every one of them..especially the one where he asked her to smile..simple,sweet, funny and can really cheer a person! Makes me love this guy more!😳😳

Jalal on the football court had me drooling, the Jalal-in-football-field description is going to stay with me always!! ☺️

I was hoping Jo would go to the match..and she did though she was hesitant..yayy! And Jalal's eyes looked for her of their own accord..though he tried his best not to..another yayy!😆

Jo's knowledge about the game..hmm..interesting, she seems to have listened quite attentively to Jalal's talks on the topic...and I love Meera as always!❤️😳

Jo's excitement, cheering and the best when she cheered for Jalal for that goal..I wanted to cheer too!! And then the eyelock..dreamy as always!

Try as may, these two cannot avoid each other..if not in front of each other, they occupy each others minds! 😳❤️

Jalal hurt..nooo...😲😭Jo's reaction made me smile..she cares so much for her 'special interesting friend'..😉😳

Need the next part ASAP...Jalal shouldn't be hurting for more than 4 days ok, that's the maximum time I give you..😆

Love you soo much di!!🤗🤗

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Angel-

@Angel-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1074

Totally amazing n Fabulous...

Beautifully written..

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agun

@agun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1075

awesome update...you are a fab writer ..👏👏👏

Please dont take too long for the next update...cannot wait to see how the story progresses. I wish the protagonists of the serial are half as mature and straight forward as the ones in your story.

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Elizabeth FitzWilliam Darcy

@LizBennett

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#1076

WOE IS ME...!!!! Teetering at the edge of a literary cliff, ( imagine deep sigh here with " delicate palm to forehead" posture...jeez , my bestie would have thwacked me about now😆And snorted loudly afterwards..)...waiting...waiting with bated breath to be pulled back by a recalcitrant and fiendishly malevolent author...who, in a sad case of twisted ,pretzelled humanity ... relishes...RELISHES..I tell you...the unbearable agony of anticipation...that her follower wallows in...waiting ..waiting...to be pulled out of an abyss of suspense...

Was THAT melodrama enuff for ya?...😆😆😎

I seriously LOVED it...kahaani to chod, yahan Bechare ka leg hi twist kar diya! Bahut na insaafi hai..thakurayin...😉

Edited by LizBennett - 11 years ago

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Elizabeth FitzWilliam Darcy

@LizBennett

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#1077

Originally posted by: baubles

Need the next part ASAP...Jalal shouldn't be hurting for more than 4 days ok, that's the maximum time I give you..😆
Love you soo much di!!🤗

You are a lot more patient than I am , young lass..I have given her till tomorrow ...else the stalking shall begin😡...

Also, my affection is conditional 'pon the rapidity and length of the update...Sniff! Hmph!

From,

Her Royal Highness of Pemberley,

😳

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agun

@agun

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#1078

Originally posted by: LizBennett

You are a lot more patient than I am , young lass..I have given her till tomorrow ...else the stalking shall begin😡...
Also, my affection is conditional 'pon the rapidity and length of the update...Sniff! Hmph!
From,
Her Royal Highness of Pemberley,
😳

Yes..please leave all that you have to do and update the story...HEHEHE. I have seriously become this "15 year old teenager" who cannot think about anything else.

Edited by agun - 11 years ago

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#1079

Lashy... It is a great chapter. I like the texts especially sun rise and smile one. It was very nice and tealistic too see that when she thought about the qualities, it matched jalal or should i say jalal fit the bill. I knew jodha would come to c the match but now she can use the excuse of payals treat. Awww poor jalal could not concentrate, i was worried about that and hope he is alright soon. Thx for giving this amazing chapter. Pleaseee update soon. Thx for pm.

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1080

Originally posted by: agun

Yes..please leave all that you have to do and update the story...HEHEHE. I have seriously become this "15 year old teenager" who cannot think about anything else.

Trust me, I'm no better than either of you! Left to me, I would demand an update right away! 😆😆

But I don't suppose any amount of stalking or threatening is going to work with her, so decided that it would be better to not keep my hopes high about getting an update so soon🥱

But since you both have started this morcha and stalking business, I'm going to join in too...happily!!😎

C'mon di...buck up now and give us the next chapter lest you wanna be facing some dire consequences(in multiple places😆)!! 😈