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Indhu

@Indhulovesparii

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Sofia13
Brilliant Os👏👏
last part was really romantic😳
lOved it...!!

Keep it up ur good work👍🏼

Sure...thanks for the lovely comments Sofia😉

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SShreShthA

@SShreShthA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

superb... fabulous... romantic...and beautiful update dear...

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

thanx for posting all chapter in single thread... luved reading it from starting in one go...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

U wrote it really beautifully with nice dialogues... keep it up...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

will be waiting for more writing pieces of urs...continue soon dear...

😃😃😃😃😃😃

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@ChaiTeaWali

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

lovely 👍🏼, I enjoyed reading it 😳

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arshiar8

@arshiar8

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

wow indhuu dis was fantastic ,.. the last update was juss wow .. and chahoon bhi my fav song ... dis song suits dem v much ... u wrote scenes apt for the songgg ...

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arshiar8

@arshiar8

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

when u added the song, last part bcme more interstinggg

atlast akhda bcme one .. hope they 'll show such a scene in the serial too .. waiting for dat moment

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arshiar8

@arshiar8

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

you are an amaizng writer dear .. u shouldnt stop writing .. u should keep writing ... ley ur talents grow ... u have a bright future .. plzz next time write a ff .. it will b so good to read ur stories for a long time 😳

amazing os .. keep it up 👏

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Indhu

@Indhulovesparii

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: SShreShthA
superb... fabulous... romantic...and beautiful update dear...
👏
⭐️

thanx for posting all chapter in single thread... luved reading it from starting in one go...❤️

U wrote it really beautifully with nice dialogues... keep it up...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
will be waiting for more writing pieces of urs...continue soon dear...
😃

thanks my cutie sweetie pie for the lovely comment...your too good shreshta😃..luv you🤗

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Indhu

@Indhulovesparii

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: arshiar8
wow indhuu dis was fantastic ,.. the last update was juss wow .. and chahoon bhi my fav song ... dis song suits dem v much ... u wrote scenes apt for the songgg ...

thanks arch...loved your comments

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Indhu

@Indhulovesparii

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: arshiar8
you are an amaizng writer dear .. u shouldnt stop writing .. u should keep writing ... ley ur talents grow ... u have a bright future .. plzz next time write a ff .. it will b so good to read ur stories for a long time 😳
amazing os .. keep it up 👏

pwodeiii😆😆

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Indhu

@Indhulovesparii

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: arshiar8
when u added the song, last part bcme more interstinggg
atlast akhda bcme one .. hope they 'll show such a scene in the serial too .. waiting for dat moment

yup...mrs..sss😆😆😆