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Hey guys here I'm gonna post all the chapters of my os including the last one..do read.Those who have already read the chapters pls read the last one...
Chapter 1
Jodha was sitting in her room.She was trying the new jewelleries and clothes her husband sent.
Jodha(curiously):Mothi...Am I looking special??????
Mothi:You always look beautiful Jodha
Jodha:But Am I looking extra ordinary today???
Mothi:What can I say Jodha if you'll ask such questionss,you always look beautiful still now you're looking pretty
Jodha:Do you think that...(Jodha hesitates to complete the sentence)
Mothi:That...?What Jodha...?(Mothi smiles).Don't worry I'm sure he'll become mad seeing you.
Jodha:Mothi how can you read my mind???
Mothi:I'm not only your baandhi but also your friend.
Jodha:I know...Mothi...woh...
Mothi:I know Jodha you want shahenshah to see you right?????Then do one thing Ammijaan gave me a box and a letter to give to shahenshah.you go and give him.
Jodha:Hum...?????(she turns back and smiles)No I won't.Why should I?.I don't wanna see him
Mothi:Ok...Jodha,your wish,I'll go and give this.
(Mothi was about to leave,Jodha calls her)
Jodha:Mothi..Hmmm..Ammijaan was asking for you.
Mothi:Ammijaan was asking for me? but why?
Jodha:I don't know,I forgot to tell you.You do one thing,you go and meet her I'll give this to shahenshah.
Mothi:Okk
Jodha takes the box and goes away.Mothi smiles."Jodha atleast don't show this drama to your friend..."
And Mothi also leaves.
Jalal was practicing with his sword.Though he was practicing his mind was filled with Jodha's thoughts.Jodha stands behind him silently.Jalal immediately recognises Jodha's presence as it always pleased him.
Jalal:Yes,Beegum Jodha.Anything special?
Jodha:Ammijaan gave this box and letter.
Jalal turned back.For a while he was out of the world.Was it his Hindu beegum or a goddess?
Jodha:Shahenshah????
Jalal came back to his mind.
Jalal:Ha yes,Jodha beegum... why did you brought this?You could have sent this through any servants.Or you brought this so that you can see me?.Jalal smirks
Jodha:Don't ever think like that.I don't have any interest in seeing your face.Ammijaan wanted me to give this
Jalal:Ok,Jodha beegum keep it there.Thankyou for bringing it here.You can leave now
Jodha:I can leave???Whyy???
Jalal(smirking):Jodha beegum do you have anything to say?.I have a feeling that you wanna say something.
Jodha(angrily):I don't wanna say anything but I feel that you wanna say something.
Jalal:No no Jodha Beegum I don't have anything to say.
Jodha:Seriously???You don't have anything???
Jalal:Yes Jodha beegum I'm damn sure...Are you sure??
Jodha:Yes I'm okay. I'm going
Jalal:You must go
Jodha turns back and walks
Jodha(herself):"He won't ever change.He is a demon...Not a demon but he's very mean...
Jalal:Jodha beegum...
Jodha stops walking
Jodha:Now what is it?
Jalal:You're looking beautiful
Jodha smiles.And she walks away.
Jalal opens the box and reads the letter which his ammijjaan sent.He smiles reading the letter.He looks at the box .
Jalal:Jodha beegum what can I do ?situations makes us face each other again and again.

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Chapter 2
Jodha was so happy.
Jodha:Hmm...he's not that much bad...noo he's good... infact too gud(She smiles).
Mothi comes there
Mothi:Kya baat hai Jodha?You're looking happy today?
Jodha:Mothi you know what ?"Unhone kaha ki hum...bahut sunder dikh rahe hai?"
Mothi:Unhone??(Mothi smiles)So finally you got what you wanted rightt???
Jodha:Yes,mothi..I'm so happyy..I wanna tell you something
Mothi:Say it Jodha
Jodha:I lied to you...Ammijaan didn't call you
Mothi:I knew it Jodha...don't feel bad...
Jodha:You're such a gud friend mothi
Mothi:And you're such a beautiful lady Jodha.Shahenshah is so lucky that you're his beegum.
Jodha smiles.She looks outside the window.Suddenly she saw a bird flying.She smiled again.
Mothi:You like birds right?
Jodha:Yes.I just love dem,they are so beautiful and innoscent,Mothi don't you think that something's wrong with that bird?
Mothi:You're right Jodha..Oh my god,Jodha that bird's injured,look I think someone shot it.
Jodha runs out of te room and she picks the bird up who fell on the ground.
Jodha:Poor bird!Mothi let's bandage it
Ruqaiyya comes there.
Ruqaiyya:jodha beegum give me that bird.
Jodh:Why???can't you see?it's injured.
Ruqaiyya:Jodha You have to listen coz I'm Mallika-e-khaas and it's my command.
Ruqaiyya takes the bird.
Jodha:Hold it softly you're hurting the bird
Jalal enters to the scene.
Jalal:What's going on here?
Ruqaiyya:Jalal Jodha beegum wanna take care of this bird.i was trying to make her understand that it's the good luck of this bird that you shot it.And really you shot the bird with much passion and now this bird has to die
Jalal takes the bird from Ruqaiyya
Jalal:Here you go Beegum Jodha go and bandage the bird
Jodha was surprised to see Jalal supporting her before Ruqaiyya
Ruqaiyya:But Jalal???
Jalal:Ruqaiyya Jodha beegum has stopped me from doing a sin why should I kill an innoscent bird?let it fly free.
Jodha turns back she holds the birds softly.
Jodha:Shukriya(Thank you).
Jodha walks away.Jalal also smiles.And he turns back to go but he see's Ruqaiyya's angry face
Jalal:Ruqaiyyaa...leave it it's just a bird.Let Jodha do whatever she likes..
Ruqaiyya:If you don't have any problem then why would I ?
They both leaves.Jodha carefully bandages all the wounds and the bird was now allright.
Jodha:Go and fly high no one will stop you
She comes besides the window and lets the bird fly.She was so happy.She recalls the scene were Jalal supported her.She turned around but suddenly Jalal comes before her leaning before her.She comes back along the wall.
Jodha:Shahenshah?You?Here?
Jalal:I'm your husband Jodha I don't need any one's permission to come here.
Jodha:Ya but...
Jalal comes more closer holding her waist.Jodha's heartbeat was going high.
Jalal:Jodha beegum I allowed you to care the bird so now you should do anything that I say
Jodha:I never asked you to allow me.You gave me the permission yourself.
Jalal:Uff...Jodha beegum just say who won't become tempted seeing such attitude?
Meanwhile Ruqaiyya was having a chess match in the garden with Maham.
Maham:Be careful Ruqaiyya,your king is in danger..in this game also and in reality also
Ruqaiyya moves the knight and she wins the game.
Ruqaiyya:Maham Anga I've told you many times my king was safe,he is and he'll be.I rule his brain.No one can take my place even Jodha beegum can't...
Jalal cups Jodha's cheeks.
Jalal:I want to taste the sweetness of your lips...Can I???
Jodha:You're the shahenshah of Hindusthan you don't have to take anyone's permission.
Jodha smiles and also Jalal.He brings his lips closer and closer
In the garden
Maham see's Jodha and Akbar who were standing at the window
Maham:Ruqaiyya nothing continues in the same state for long time,may it be Jalal's hate for Jodha or your position of Mallika-e-khaas you think that your king is safe right???then look there,your king who is safe but in the custody of someone else.
Ruqaiyya turns back.She was shocked to see that.Was it really her childhood friend Jalal or someone else???
Jalal was about to kiss her and..
"Gustaakhi maaf shahenshah"
Jalal shuts his eyes leaves his hand fron her cheeks
Jalal(angrily):What is it????
Soldier:Shehenshah some important persons have came to meet you.They are waiting for you.
Jalal:You can go.I'll come.
Jalal was so disappointed.He turns back and looks at Jodha who was still blushing.He was about to leave then Jodha calls him.
Jodha :"Aapki intezaar hongi humein"
Jalal smiles.He was relieved.And he walks away happily
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Chapter 3
Jodha was in her room the was about to set...Jalal enters..jodha immediately recognises his
presence and turns back happily
Jodha:you came...finally...I was desperately waiting for you(She smiles)
But Jalal's face was not pleasant.The smile that always remained in his face had disappeared.
jodha:Shahenshah sab teek haina???Aap udaas kyun dikh rahe ho???
Jalal:Jodha beegum humein maaf kar deejiye magar kuch zarroori maamlo se humein kuch din jaana hoga
Jodha's face filled with diappointment but she smiled
Jodha:Shahenshah...bas itni si baat..hum toh darr gaye the aap apni farz pehle poori keejiye
Jalal:Par Jodha...
Jodha:Shahenshah aapko jaana chahiye humari chinta math keejiye
Jalal was now happy he got what he actually wanted.
Jalal:Hum jaldi laut aajaayenge Jodha beegum
Jalal walks away,but when Jalal went Jodha's eyes was filled with tears..
She wipes her tears
Jodha(herself):Jodha tum dukhi math ho woh jaldi waapas aayega...magar...
"Jodha beegum aap dukhi hothi huyi bilkul achhi nahi lagthi "
Jodha was surprised to hear his voice.She turns back.Jalal comes closer
Jalal:Jodha apni jazbaatein chupaana nahi jaanthi toh karthi kyun ho ??
Jodha couldn't control her emotions she cried and hugged him tightly
Jalal:Aap humari Jodha beegum nahi hai kyunki humare Jodha beegum chhotti chhotti baaton pe itni kamzor nah hothe
Jodha wipes her tears.
Jodha:Kisne kaha aapko ki hum isliye ro rahe hai kyun ki aap jaa rahe ho?
Jalal;Kyunki aap iseeliye hi ro rahi hai (Jalal smirks)
Jodha:Nahi humein maasa ki yaad aa rahi thi isliye
Jalal:Teek hai..achha chaltha hu
Jodha:Jee..jaldi aayiyega Ruqaiyya beegum ko achha nahi lagega
Jalal smiles.
Jalal:Oh Ruqaiyya ko achha nahi lagega ??par woh toh yahan nahi hai use patha bhi nahi hai ki hum jaa rahe hai
Jodha:Achha teek hai maanthi hu humein achha nahi lagega jaldi aayiye
Jalal:Ab yeh humare Jodha begum hai.
Both smiles.
It was evening.Jodha just came back after her bath...The sky was full of dark clouds..The atmosphere was scaring.Jodha takes
the sindoor bottle and takes sindoor from it.She was about to put that.Suddenly a huge thunder stroked.The sindoor bottle fell on the ground,Jodha was scared.
Jodha;hey bhagan yeh kya hogaya..Shahenshah...kuch sahi nahi hai
Jodha runs out of the room.Jalal was about to leave
Jodha:Shahenshah rukiye
Everyone looked at her.She came forward.
Jalal:Kya hua Jodha beegum?
Jodha:Shahenshah aap math jaayiye humaara dil keh raha hai ki aap ke saath kuch galath hoga
Jalal:Jodha beegum humne kaha na aapse bas kuch dino ki baat hai hum aajaayenge waapas.
Jodha:Phir bhi shahenshsh humein dar lag raha hai
jalal;Maaf keejiye Jodha beegum magar humaara jaana bahut zaroori hai fikr math keejiye hum jald laut aayenge
Jodha;Teek hai par..
Jalal;Par war kuch nahi...chalthe hai
Jalal turns back and jodha also but she turns back and hugs him tightly from back .Jalal smiles.
Jalal:Jodha beegum...
jodha;Aahhh...
Jodha leaves him.Jalal turns back.
Jalal:Jodha be..
Jodha falls down.Jalal then sees the arrow which was stuck in her waist.
Jalal:jodha...
Jalal;jodha beegum aankhein kholiye..jodha..
Jalal lifts her up and he runs fastly
Jalal:Jaldi Hakeem ko bula diya jaaye
Jalal reached his room.He placed her over the bed.He removed the arrow
jalal:Jodha beegum aankhein kholiye
Jodha was still conscious.She says in a feeble voice
Jodha:Ja...ja..Jalal woh...hu..hum
Jalal:Jodha:Jodha aap fikr math keejiye aap jald teek hojaayengi
Jodha holds his hands
Jodha;Jalaal humein aapse kuch kehna tha.hum...aapse prem karthe hai apne aap se bhi zyaaada
Jalal was silent for a minute Jodha continued
Jodha:Hum jaathe hai ki aap bhi wahi mehsoos karthe hai jo hum karthe hai.Aur hum bahut khush hai.Dukh bas itni si baat ka hai
ki abhi toh humne pyaar karna shuru kiya aur abhi se hi humein...kaash hum aapko poori tareeke se jeeth pathe Jalal
kaash hum mugal santhanth ko ek waaris de pathe...magar humaare jaane ka samay ho gaya hai...hum..
She could't complete it and she fells unconscious.Jalal was shocked.He didn't knew what to do.He was broken into thousands of
pieces.Everyone reached there and also the hakeem.Jalal want out of there.He recalls all the moments he spent with her.Her
smile,eyes,talks...he was numb.
Shahenshah...
Jalal:Jee hakeem saab ya hua sab teek haina humaari jodha teek haina?
Hakeem was silent.
Jalal:Aap khaamosh kyun ho?
Hakeem:Humein maaf keejiye huzoor hum poori koshish kar rahe hai par uss theer main khatarnaak zeher jiski wajah se beegum..
Jalal;Humein humaare beegum salaamath waapas chahiye
Hakeem:Hum karthe hai huzoor magar ab sab khuda ke haath main hai...dava nahi dua hi Jodha beegum ko bacha sakthi hai
Jalal didn't knew what to do...It was night.Hameeda comes besides Jalal who was sitting alone
Hameeda;Jalal aap aise kyun baite ho?hum jaanthe hai aap pe kya beet raha hai...khuda par yakeen rakhiye sab teek ho jayega...
Aap royiye aapko thoda raahat milega.Magar aise chup math rahiye humein dar lagtha hai
Jalal:Ammijaan aapko patha hai Jodha beegum ki ek aadath hai hamesha hamaari dhyaan kheenchne main lagi rehthi hai.magar
hum bhi shahenshah hai haar nahi maanenge nahi maanenge unhe baat karna hoga yeh humaara hukum hia..
Hameeda holds his hands.Jalal hugs his mother tightly and he cries.
Jalal;Kyun ammijaan kyun humaare saath hi aisa hotha hai?pehle khuda ne humse humaara waalid chhena hamare aulad chheena'
ab humare mohabbath ko bhi?Aisa bhi humne kya gunah kiya hai ammijaan...hum Jodha ke bina nahi reh paayenge..nahi
reh paayenge...mohabbath karthe hai hum unse...ammijaan nahi rah sakthe
hameeda holds his cheeks and wipes his tears.
Hameeda;Aur unhe kuch nahi hoga Jalal...Jodha beegum ko waapas aana hi hoga...humein poora bharosa hai allah pe woh tume itni
badi saza nahi denge...tu aaraam karo Jalal aur humaara yakeen maano...
Hameeda leaves.Jalal walks up to Jodha.She was blue b coz of the poison.Jalal's eyes was not filled with tears but was filled
with pain
Jalal(himself):Ya allah aaj tak humne apne liye kuch nahi maanga hai magar aaj pehli baar kuch maang raha hu.humare mohabbth
ko humse math chheeeniye...agar Jodha beegum ko kuch ho gaya toh hum kabhi aapse baat nahi karenge...
Days passes.But Jodha remains the same she had recovered from the poison's effect but have not come in conscious mind.It was
another evening.Jalal was sitting besides her.
Jalal;Jodha beegum aap humse baat kyun nahi kar rahi hai?Jhagda kee jiye bahas kee jiye magar chhup math rehiye aise
There was no reply Jalal gets up from the bed he was about to walk then he heard a feeble voice.
jodha;Sh..Shah...Shahenshah...
He turned back.Finally Jodha was back she talked after so many days she looked at him.
Jalal;Jodha...aap..aap.Jalal was very happy
Jodha:Shahenssha bahut dard ho raha hai poora badan mein dard hai.
Jalal:Fikr math keejiye hum haina yahan sab teek ho jaayega.
Everyone comes there.
HAmeeda:Humein patha tha ki khuda humare baat zaroor sunenge..kaisi ho beta?
Jodha;Dard toh hai ammijaan magar apne paas hai toh ek sukh hai.
Hameeda:Tumhe toh teek hona hi tha..tumhare bina Jalal toh adhoora hai
Jodha and Jalal looks each other
Hameeda;humne aaj tak Jalal ki aankhon mein kisi k liye itni fikr nahi dekhi hai..tumne toh badal hi daali Jodha isseee
Jodha amiles.
Hameeda;Achha ab aap aaram kee jiye hm sab chalthe hai.
everyone laves.Jalal and Jodha was alone.
Jalal;Chaliye sone chlathe hai
Jodha:kya ek hi bistar pe????/
Jalal:Jodha beegum nikkah ke baad itni waqth tak aapko humne nahi chhua hai kal ki patha nahi magar aaj toh zaroor hum aapko
nahi chhuenge
jodha:Darr humein iss baat ka nahi hai ki aap humein choone ki koshish karengi ya nai darr iss baat ki hai ki kahi humare pathi ko
apni itni kareeb hothe dekh humaara dil kaaboo mein rahenge ya nahi...
Both smiles
Jalal:Ya allah aap ke muh se yeh sunne ke baad ki aapko humse chhaahat huyi hai humein moth bhi manzoor hai...
They once again smiles.And both sleeps.days passes.One day.Jalal was about to feed her brew
Jodha;Humein kaada nahi peena hai.
Jalal;jodha beegum aapko humaari baat maan na hi hoga..aapki sehath k liye hai
Jodha;Kaada piyenge toh humein ulti aayenge
jalal;Jodha beegum agar aap kaada piyenge tab aapko ulti aayenge aur agar nahi piyenge tab bhi
jodha;Woh kaise?
Jalal:Ab agar aapko humse chaahat huyi hai toh kuch waqth baad toh apko khud hi ulti aajaayegi
Jodha;Chhe...yeh kya keh rahe ho aap?
jalal:Achha Jodha beegum aap humare aankhon mein aankhein daalye kya dikhtha hai aapko
Jodha:Bewakoofi
Jalal:khuda ka shukr maaniye ki aap bimaar hai warna aapko iss gustaakhi k liye saza milthe.Hum hindusthan k shahenshah hai
Jalal feeds the brew she immediately drinks it and says
Jodha;Aap hindisthan ke nahi bewakoofisthan k shahenshah hai.Aap ka naam na Jalaaludhheen muhammded bewakoof hona
chahiye tha
Jalal again feeds her and she drinks it.
Jalal:Achha aapko aisa kyun lagtha hai ki hum bewakoof hai
Jodha was going on drinking the brew and answering his questions
Jodha;hUmein lagtha nahi hai sathy yahi hai.Waise aapko kya lagtha hai ki hum bewakoof hai?
Jalal:Arey nahi nah Jodha beegum..aap toh shaathir ho
Jodha:Phir aapko yeh kaise laga ki aap humein kaaada pilaathe jaayenge aur humein patha nahi chalega??
Both smiles..
Jodha;Shaenshah hum dhak gaye hai kuch karo na humaare liye achha shayari sunaa deejiye
Jalal:Ummm Shayari chaliye teek hai
Arz kiya hai
Jodha;Irshad
Jalal;JIs ada pe hum fida hai jis ada pe hum fida hai masha allah woh to Jodha hai
Jodha:Yeh kaisi shayari hai???bahut buri hai
Jalal:Teek hai ek gaana sunaaun
Jodha;Haan
Jalal:Hmmm ek ladki ko ekha toh aisa laga jaise
khiltha gulaab jaise shaayar ka khwaab jaise ujli kiran jaise
ban mein hiran jaise chaandini raat jaise mandir main ho ek jaltha diya..ohh..ek ladi ko dekha toh aisa laga
jodha:Waah kya baat hai...Badshah jalaaludhheen muhammed bewakoof ko gaana toh aatha hai...
jalal:Tareef k liye shukriya Jodha beegum,waise aap humein shahenshah kyun bulaathi ho jalal bulaayiyena achha lagtha hai
Jodha:Nayi nayi ya toh hum shahenshah bulaayenge ya phir bewakoof
Jalal:Teek hai aap bewakoof hi bulayiye shahenshah se behether hai..jab aap shehenshah bulathi ho toh aisa lagtha hai jaise
koi gulaam bula raha ho
Jodha:Nahi nahi Hum Jalal bulaathe hai..aur kitna jhukenge aap humaare saamne?Aap toh shahenshah-e-hind hi teek hai.
Jodha smiles
Jalal;Jodha beegum ek baat kahein?
Jodha:Humein patha hai yahi na ki humari hasi bahut sundar hai
Jalal;Nahi
Jodha;Toh kya sundar nahi hai?
Jalal;Jaanlewaa hai...haaye aapke hasi ke saamne toh shahenshah bhi haar jaaye
Jodha;Shahenshah aapne muh me shakkar daal a hai kya?
Jalal:Nahi kyun?
Jodha:pehli baar itni meethe meethe baatein kar rahe ho aap
Jalal smiles and Jodha also

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Final Chapter

Hey guys I'm writing the final part of my OS.Hope everyone like it..sorry for mistakes do post your

Reviews only after that I can write more...And ya I've added a song also..only the lines.First the scene will be there and the line following

It was a month since Jodha was injured...She was fine but was unable to stand or walk..During these time Jodha remained in Jalal's khema as he wanted her to be fine soon...It was a pleasant morning..Jalal reluctantly opened his eyes and stretched his arms.He was shocked to see that Jodha was not beside him.He became furious...

"Jodha beegum...kaha gayi hogi??woh toh chal bhi nahi sakthi. kahi..."

Before he completed he saw Jodha coming out of the washroom holding her wet hair.He was out of the world for a moment...he smiled unknowingly..

"Shahenshah...".He came back to his mind

"Jodha beegum aap...chal sakthi ho??"

"Aapki aankhon ko koyi samasya hai?aapko dikh nahi rahi hai ki hum khade hai?"

Jalal smirks.

"Jodha beegum aapki ada bhi ajeeb he..abhi abhi aapki tabiyat teek hogayi hai magar ghamand uski abhi tak kuch nahi huyi hai"

"Tareef k liye dhanyavaad shahenshah"

"Jodha sab kuch aapki kheme main rakh chuke hain".Mothi enters the khema

Jalal was surprised to hear that.

"aap kahi jaa rahi ho?"

"haan apni kheme main".By saying this she sits infront of the mirror and starts wearing her jewelleries.

par kyun aap apne kheme main kyun jaa rahi ho"

"hum teek hain ab...yahan rehne ki koi avashyakatha nahi hai hume".

Jalal gets out of the bed and comes near jodha...She shaked her hair.The water droplets fell on his face.

"Jodha beegum aap kya cheez ho..aap ke paas aane se bina khushboo ki yeh paani ka boond bhi khushboodaar hotha hai...jalal smirks.Jodha looks at him once and turns back she fills her maang with sindoor.

"kya hua aapke dimaag itna garam kyun hai??Aap kahein toh ise tanda kar doon".He comes more closer to her and blows lightly on her face.

"door rahiye humse"she removed his hand over her..

"Iss berookhi ki koyi wajah??"

"wajah hai...hum ek aise vyakthi ko apne aap aapko chhoone nahi denge jo khulke apne jazbaaton ka izhaar nahi kar sakthe...ab tak aapne apni hriday ki baat nahi bataaya hai"

"Izhaar karne k liye hai hi kya...aap jaanthi ho ki hum aap keliye kya mahsoos karthe hai hum bhi jaanthe hai ki aap kya mahsoos karthi ho...izhaar karne k liye kuch hai hi nahi"

"galthi humse huyi hai jo hum aapse baat karne aaye...hum jaa rahe hai aur haa...aap tab tak humare saamne math aana jab tak apni jazbaateon ka izhaar nahi karthe...Jodha leaves the room angrily.Jalal smiles...

It was afternoon...and Jalal was walking in his garden with atga saheb...jodha and Mothi was feeding the birds...Jalal stops when he see Jodha..and he smiles...Jodha was filling the pot with water and she saw Jalal in the water...She turns back

"Mothi...chalo..humein yahan nahi rahna hai"

"par Jodha tumne abhi abhi kaha ki tum poore din yahan baitna chahthi ho"

"humne kaha na chalo"

"Jaayiye Mothi...warna aapki Jodha ki gussa ki shikaar ban jaayegi aap...jaise hum hai".Jalal smirks

"ohh..toh yeh baat hai..Mothi said to herself.

"teek hai chaliye Jodha".Jodha stares at Jalal...And they walks away.

"Masha allah kya ada hai..kon iss ada pe fida nahi honge..Jalal also walks...

The whole day Jodha kept avoiding him..she was so much disappointed with him.Each time he tried to talk she walked away.It was night.The sky was full of dark clouds..Jalal was sitting in the balcony.The wind blew hardly over Agra.

"Jalal tum andhar chalo..yahan baitoge toh tabiyat kharaab ho jaayenge".Hameeda entered

"Nahi ammijaan bahut sukoon mil raha hai yahan bait ke..."

"teek hai lekin baarish shuru ho gayi toh andhar aana"

"Ammijaan hum abhi bhi chotte bachhe nahi hai"

"Tum kitne bhi bade hojao Jalal humare liye humaara humara bachha hi ho".Hameeda leaves.

It started raining suddenly..Jalal stood up and was about to leave but he stopped for a minute he turned back..Jodha was standing in the garden.She stretched out her hands..closed her eyes as if she was hugging the rain drops.Mothi kept calling her.

"Jodha andhar aayiye..agar kisine aapko dekha toh samasya aajayegi..aur toh aur aap bimaar padogi"

"Nahi mothi itne samay baad yeh baarish ho rahi hai..humein iski aanand leni hai"

Jalal was lost in her beauty.The water drops rolled over her face and her lips.He wanted her.It was that moment he realises.

"Nahi rahi paayenge aapke bina Jodha..Ab yeh doori humein manzzor nahi..hum aa rahe hai.."

Mothi came out and she took Jodha away from the rain.After sometime

Jodha was in her room.She was drying her hair..She sat infornt of the mirror.Suddenly she saw Jalal in the mirror.She turned back.

"humne kaha tha na aapse.." 'Shhh..."Jalal placed his fingers over her lips.He made her sit on the chair.Sat on his knees.He removed his pagdi and kept his sword away.He held her hands and lowered his heads.

"humein maaf kar deejiye Jodha beegum..humne aapko bahut takleef di hai...har bar aapko sataaya hai,rulaaya hai...humein maaf keejiye.Jodha raises his head.

"Jalal aap kya kar rahe ho?Sir jhukaana ek shahenshah ko shobha nahi detha.Aap sir uthaakar hi achhe lagthe ho.Aap kyun kshama maangoge..woh hum the jisne yeh saara ghrina ki shuruwad kiya.Har baar aapke khilaaf bola..kabhi aap ka maan nahi rakha..kshama toh humein maangni chahiye."

"Nahi Jodha beegum...aaj hum hindusthan ke shahenshah aapse sir jhukaakar maafi maangthe hai"

"aap maafi maangne ki badle who kyun nahi keh dethe jiski humein intezaar hai..."

"Jodha beegum Hum aapse Mohabbth karthe hain..beintehaan...jis din se dekha tha usee din se humari dil main bas gayi thi aap..aap humari chaahath ho humari jannat ho...'

Jodha was so happy.Her happiness knew no bounds.She heard those words for which she was waiting for a long time.She hugged him tightly.

"Hum bhi aapse bahut prem karthe hai Jalal...apne aap se bhi zyaada.aapke bina hum adhoore hain"

Jalal holds her cheeks and he smiles.

"hum bhi aapke bina adhhore hai".They both sits on the bed.Jodha stands up.

"Kabse yahi ek pal ki intezaar thi humein...bahut kuch kehna chahthe hai."

"Toh kahiyena Jodha beegum"

"patha nahi par kuch kah nahi paa rahi hu..shaayad kuch zyyada hi khush hai hum.."Both smiles.

She walks to the window.She sings.

(NOTE: Pls click on the above link and then read the rest.It's the link to the song I used.It'll be more pleasing if you read it with the song but if you don't want then it's ok.First is the scene and following the scenes the lyrics that comes in that part is written.Read in that format...first scene then the lyrics/part of song )

http://k003.kiwi6.com/hotlink/u33csqdxxk/chahoon_bhi.mp3

"Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon?

Saari jo baatein dil kehtha hai"

She turns back.

"Leher sapnon ki kaise ginu?

Dariya behtha hi rehtha hai"...She turns around and sits besides him...

"Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahu sari jo baatein dil kehtha hai".He holds her cheeks

"leher sapnon ki kaise ginoon dariya behtha hi rehtha hai".

She comes behind him and kisses on his both sides of the cheeks.

"Keh rahi hai kya yeh suno meri khaamoshiyan raat se hai lambi kahin dil ki yeh daastaan...

She tightly hugs him from back.

"Kaise kahun..."

She was leaning on the wall.He opens the doori of her necklace with his mouth and removes it.She turns against him and he kisses her neck.

"Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahun saari jo baatein dil kehtha hai lehar sapnon ki kaise ginoon dariya behtha hi rehtha hai"

He nuzzles all over her neck and shoulder she couldn't bear the pleasure she felt.She turned back and pulled him towards her.

"Keh rahi hai kya yeh suno meri khamoshiyan raat se hai lambi kahi dil ki yeh daastan kaise kahun..kaise kahun...

He lifts her up and moves towards the bed.He places her on the bed.He removes her dupatta.She turns back he kisses her back...

She gets up and looks at him.

"tumse mujhe yeh kehna tha ...ohh kehna tha humdum..."

"ho saamne toh kya kahu kya keh na tha humdum"...and she hugs him...

He sucks her cheeks...it was a painful pleasure for her...

"kaisi yeh jazbaat hain...iss dil main tu din raat hai..."

Both gets up of the bed and face each other.he cupped her cheeks.

"Hotton pe kyun aane se yeh sharmaathe hai...aankhon main kyun yeh har ghadi aajaathe hai"

"chaahoon bhi toh main kaise kahun saari jo baatein dil kehtha hai.leher sapnon ki kaise ginoon dariya behtha hi rehtha hai..."

Scene shifted...they were wrapped in a blanket...he was nuzzling over her neck from back .she couldn't bear it she hugged him tightly...and he sings...

"Hum kyun kahein jo unkahi ek baat hai jaanam dhadkan kahein dhadkan sune woh raat hai jaanam"

They both leans over the bed.

"Dil bole bin hai bolthe sab raaz hai yeh kholthe"

They roll over the bed..

"jab khwaab hai jazbaat hai ehsaas hai..toh kehna kyat oh sunna kya hum paas hai...'

They kisses each other passionately...

"chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahun saari jo bbatein dil kehtha hai leher sapnon ki kaise ginoon dariya behtha hi rehtha hai"

They both smiles at each other...he sings

"Raat se hai lambi kahi dil ki yeh daastaan".

He covers them with the blanket..

"kaise kahun..."

The candle which was burning on the table blew in the breeze...All the dark clouds had gone and the moon was visible..the sky was clear so do Jalal's and Jodha's life

Thank youhh for reading.Sorry for grammatical mistakes..plz hit the likes😃

Edited by indhulakshmi - 11 years ago
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great os but pls update with english translations for hindi lines iam tamilian and i don't know hindi tooo much so plsss
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Originally posted by: ayanarappa

great os but pls update with english translations for hindi lines iam tamilian and i don't know hindi tooo much so plsss

sryyy but I'll translate...I'll pm the translation😉
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Thanks buddy keep reading😃
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Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply amazing
loved it;.

Thanks for the compliment😃😃😃

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