OS - Teri Deewani - Page 9

Originally posted by: --Rashmi--

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Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Thanksss Janeman 🤗

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

This was beautifully written!
Loved the sole concept of it, then the detailing of jodha's miseries which included the flashbacks were very nicely penned. Loved it!
Then the song towards the end reflecting jodha's emotions were super sweet.
Ending was nice too!
Please do pm me whenever you write on AkDha :)

Heyy my princess what a BeautifuL & lovely update filled with full ov emotionz .⭐️⭐️ ⭐️👏👏 I loved it & d title with d song selection was bang on ... 👏👏👏👏👏👏 th peRrfeEccttt sonnggg foh dis beautiful update. Loved each & every bit. M so much In love with dis update dat I actually skiped my comment . 😉😉😉 ( Sorry jaan) 😳 😳I loved d section where jodha came to know abt jalal dat he has not done anything & how she feelz guilty for her rude arrogant behavior towards her loving husband jalal & specially I loved dis part where Jodha held his hand.. and looked at him with tearful and "seeking forgiveness" eyes..⭐️ And jodha hugged him with utmost passion & most lovely he hugged her back too with same passion... ☺️ 🥳HaaAyYYeEe kya scene hai I can imagine der utmost & passionate HUG' with full of love & Emotionz. ❤️ ❤️ I simply loved it to the core nAmy. ⭐️🤗 Hatz off to U my RockEr. 👏👏👏👏👏 U simply RaWkzz 👍🏼⭐️👏

Wish CV'z shud get der brainz to show something like dis instead of crappy scenez. 🤪😡 Bt 2 xpct something good 4rm d dumb CV'z is such a waste ov tym.. 😳😳🥱

{U knw what naMy I wonder if U wud have der 😎 😎 in place of CV'z & der cheap writers toh aj show ki TRP No. 1 hit hota ow sablog bawr-bawr repeat episd'z b dkhtey trust me.} 😃😃😃

And ya dnt yew eva dare to say dat it's a Faltu OS 🤢😲 ... First Edit it 😕.. it's not faltu it's beyond any words.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️ I Simply loved it. 🥳En pLeEeAaASssHhh update ur nxt part ov dis OS 😳 as I told U last nyt too , to update m waiting for it . !! 😛😛😊

PerfEcccttt soNggg for dis lovely update. 👍🏼 👍🏼 U Rawk my RoCkStAr .. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Keep RawK!ng & keep Writ!nG .. !!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Originally posted by: lovergirlalina

I simplY
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Do update ur nxt part sooon jaana 😳😳😳😊