OS - Teri Deewani - Page 10

Originally posted by: lovergirlalina

dont get fainted dear
u r an awesome writer ⭐️
uh deserve 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 👏⭐️👏⭐️👏👏👏👏⭐️👏
got ur PM to give review bt i m soo touched with dis lovely OS so i skipped my comment. 😆😳 (hope u got my review) 😉😉
Really u r incredible 🤗 🤗
Hatz off 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛😛😛😲😲😲😃😃😃

She has given him such a shock... sting... ruthless behavior... she took off her chunni😡 and offered him... that was the intensity of her hate😡... but she was lonely😭... broken😭... and horrible freezing cold night confusion killed her😕... I don't know should i get mad at her or feel sorry for her

One thing I can tell... Silence talks more than words... His silence killed me and touched to my heart... he loves her... what a romantic scene... the way he was looking at her that freezing cold night... he loved her from bottom of his heart... he even doesn't know why he cares about her so much... Just for her safety he suffered...he kept his patience... silence... I can imagine how hurtful for him to see her in immense pain and confusion... and he had no answer for it... He had no proof to prove his innocence... He wanted her to trust him...

This OS is full of pain😭... intense emotion😊...

FINALLY AFTER A WEEK OF TORCHUR😡 she comes to know that he is so pure😃... he is completely innocent😃... he has done this for her safety😃... he had not touch her that night😳... Entire night he took care of her😳😳😳...OMG... At the end ... I had happy tears😭😭😭... (My favorite ride of roller coaster)

She ran...with tears in her eyes... he has no idea that she know he is innocent... You know I feel I can write more and more about this chapter but it's not enough...She hugged him with love... he was not expecting this ... he got use to with her ruthless behavior... I have imagine entire OS😊...how happy enormous feeling both had... OMG...THIS IS A MASTERPIECE...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

EVERY TIME I READ YOUR CHAPTER FF, SS, TS ANYTHING... I AM AMUSE WITH SURPRISE... WHAT A PROFICIENT WRITER YOU ARE... just beyond any words... After reading this I will say that you are the bestest writer I have ever know... I just use this words for AZ's chapters... But this has blown me off to the sky...

U R MY ROCKSTAR ROCKERZ...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. LOVE U SO MUCH

DIVINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING!!! VOW!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I am completely speechless...!!!! Itna likhne ke baad me speechless...lol😆😆😆

simply beautiful..❤️...awesome⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️ keep writing such beautiful os😃...and plz pm me

Originally posted by: mouroz

simply beautiful..❤️...awesome⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️ keep writing such beautiful os😃...and plz pm me

Thank You darling !!😳 Your compliment touched me..😃

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛😛😛😲😲😲😃😃😃

My heart is crying 😭😭😭with mixed feeling...with Jodha's and Jalal's both are in immense pain and finally they both are completely lost in love... Seriously this is way beyond my imagination😳... I don't know but I have a feeling I have read this OS... But I can read this story again and again😃😃😃 ... You are Mind-blowing writer⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️... How beautifully you have started this os...

She has given him such a shock... sting... ruthless behavior... she took off her chunni😡 and offered him... that was the intensity of her hate😡... but she was lonely😭... broken😭... and horrible freezing cold night confusion killed her😕... I don't know should i get mad at her or feel sorry for her

I am still feeling her pain😭😭😭... she was depressed😔, shocked and didn't know the truth... but she accused him to extreme... she has given him so much sting with her words and behavior... I am hating her and loving her at the same time...👏👏👏

One thing I can tell... Silence talks more than words... His silence killed me and touched to my heart... he loves her... what a romantic scene... the way he was looking at her that freezing cold night... he loved her from bottom of his heart... he even doesn't know why he cares about her so much... Just for her safety he suffered...he kept his patience... silence... I can imagine how hurtful for him to see her in immense pain and confusion... and he had no answer for it... He had no proof to prove his innocence... He wanted her to trust him...

This OS is full of pain😭... intense emotion😊...

FINALLY AFTER A WEEK OF TORCHUR😡 she comes to know that he is so pure😃... he is completely innocent😃... he has done this for her safety😃... he had not touch her that night😳... Entire night he took care of her😳😳😳...OMG... At the end ... I had happy tears😭😭😭... (My favorite ride of roller coaster)

She ran...with tears in her eyes... he has no idea that she know he is innocent... You know I feel I can write more and more about this chapter but it's not enough...She hugged him with love... he was not expecting this ... he got use to with her ruthless behavior... I have imagine entire OS😊...how happy enormous feeling both had... OMG...THIS IS A MASTERPIECE...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

EVERY TIME I READ YOUR CHAPTER FF, SS, TS ANYTHING... I AM AMUSE WITH SURPRISE... WHAT A PROFICIENT WRITER YOU ARE... just beyond any words... After reading this I will say that you are the bestest writer I have ever know... I just use this words for AZ's chapters... But this has blown me off to the sky...

YOU BOTH ARE AMAZING TALENT...WE ARE BLESSED TO HAVE YOU ON JA FORUM👏👏👏

U R MY ROCKSTAR ROCKERZ...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. LOVE U SO MUCH

DIVINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING!!! VOW!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I am completely speechless...!!!! Itna likhne ke baad me speechless...lol😆😆😆

Thank you a ton Bhavi di my love ❤️ Alina my angel..❤️ and Deepa dear!