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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry jaan..I'll update this tmrw..Promise..!!!😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please update it as soon as possible!!! When you have introduced Ruqaiya with Akbar I thought it will be be Jodhaa when you have written "stunning beauty" and when you finally reveled Ruqaiya Sultan i was like WHAT THE 😆😆😆 Anyways update update tomorrow for sure PAKA hum???😡😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2 :
The party neared its end. And finally everyone bid adieu their Boss.
EVeryone decipated to their respective homes.
Mr.Jalal and Ms. Ruqaiya just entered their new Hotel with a kind of angry expressions.
On one side, Ruqaiya continuosly cursed Ms.Jodha for her extremely low-class behaviour ..whereas on other hand..
Mr. Jalal grinned at the mere thought of her. He was touched by that "unique and different" lady Ms. Jodha.
As they entered the Hotel, they checked in for their room and made their way to room.
Ruqaiya straight went to the bed, removed the classy light transparent shawl that she wore over her gown and laid on the bed.

She looked at Jalal, who stood near the window..lost in his thoughts.
She said - What happened darling? You thinking the same...that I am thinking??
Jalal didnt answer..He didnt even hear what she said.
Ruqaiya's temperature was already high..She said in a loud and rough tone - Jalal!! Where are you??
Jalal heard this.. He was surprised.. he said - Nothing darling.. You rest here..I'll just come in a minute..
Ruqaiya was utterly shocked at this statement.
She immediately got up from the bed..Came in his way and hugged him..
Jalal was surprised.
Ruqaiya - Please darling! I am already pissed off today and you are going out..leaving me all alone..
Please..I need you right now.!!
Now her tone changed to that of wicked one - You know Jalal..I will not leave that..that lady..who spoiled whole party..
Believe me..I will make her life hell..
Her words stung Jalal..
he thought - whats happening to me? Why Ruqaiya's words are unacceptable..although she is absolutely right!!
He said - Dont worry Ruqs! You dont need to do anything! I will see to it that you are satisfied with my action..
I myself will take your revenge..And please dont give so much importance to ordinary ladies.. He tried to pacify her..
He left the room giving false assurance to her.
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He moved in the Hotel lobby wondering about the "unparalleled" beauty he had seen today.
He just couldnt control his mind from thinking about Jodha...
As he continued to move further..the light went off..And there was darkness everywhere..
He heard a scream of RUqaiya..And immediately went back to his room..struggling hard against the omnipresent darkness.
As soon as he entered the room..The light came back.. Ruqaiya out of fear..Hugged him..
Jalal - Ruqs! Are you alright..I was so scared..
Ruqs - What kind of Hotel is this? Who the hell is the manager of this Hotel? I was so terrified..You know na..I fear darkness..
Jalal caressed her head and calmed her down..
His eyes raged with anger..He immediately called to the reception..asking for the Hotel Manager to come to his room immediately..
After sometime, The receptionist entered their room and said - We are very sorry for the inconvenience sir...The fuse had gown down..The mistake will never be repeated.
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Jalal was in no mood to listen..He said - Ask your manager to be here immediately..
Receptionist - Ok sir!!
After 10 minutes or so... Ms. Jodha entered their room ,.oblivious to the fact..that the room was occupied by Mr.Jalal and Ms. Ruqaiya..
She was shocked to see them and so were Jalal and Ruqaiya..
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Thats all for now!! The update is specially dedicated to Tahni, Aanchal and Radhika!!
They were really desperate for this story! Love you guys!
I am so sorry for utter non-sense short chapter!! I have exams coming up but after exams..
I'll provide you with more sensible and long updates!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Nice one Nancy... gud update ... continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Nancy Babes pehle ek hug 🤗 🤗 🤗
Humare liye update! Thank u sooo much Yaar! Love u so much! ❤️ this Ruqqu!

Jodha is the manger?? Yippe!!! Now let's see what happens!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WWOOOWWW...TOOO GOOD... NICEEE...AS ALWAYS DEAR...
LOVING IT DEAR...
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

CONTINUE SOON PLZZ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haye..Thank u all..tahni..shrestha di..aanchal..indhu..everyone..i m touched yar..thanks😊😊😊😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrincessNany

Haye..Thank u all..tahni..shrestha di..aanchal..indhu..everyone..i m touched yar..thanks😭


U R MOST WELCOME DEAR...😃😃
LUV U...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HEY!
awesome update dear
please try to update soon
& thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Nancy again an awesome update !!!
Love it ...
Can't wait for the next chapter !!!
Keep up the good work ...

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