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Posted: 11 years ago
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hlw dear...

m new here nd first thread which i opened ws ds os nd ds z ammmaaazing

now consider me as ur fan bcz ur writing skills r vry impressive...plz pm me whenever u update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ooh well look at commotion now hehe loved it cont.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesomeee cant wait fooor the neext paaart
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Recap :

Jalal was in no mood to listen..He said - Ask your manager to be here immediately..

Receptionist - Ok sir!!

After 10 minutes or so... Ms. Jodha entered their room ,.oblivious to the fact..that the room was occupied by Mr.Jalal and Ms. Ruqaiya..

She was shocked to see them and so were Jalal and Ruqaiya..

Part 3 -

Jalal - You here?

Ruqaiya before analysing anything - How dare you come here? Spoiling our party was not enough for you!!

Jodha was shocked too to see them but she was very professional in her job.

She said with a calm voice - I am the Manager of this hotel. We are really sorry for the inconvenience caused. We regret that. And it wont be repeated.

And she turned to leave, yet in a shock.

Jalal didnt say anything and was in great surprise. This lady is always attached with some or the other problems" He grinned.

Jodha left the room with much amazement and a tear rolled her eyes remembering the slap scene.

*** Jalal-Ruqs in the room***

Ruqaiya in full anger - See Jalal! This Jodha is such a creep! Ye sham se mere piche padi hui hai..Pehle She ruined my dress and our party..And now because of
her careless mistakes.. I got scared.. I dont believe she is the manager of this Hotel.. I cannot tolerate this lady anymore.. Please do something..Otherwise I have my own plans.

Jalal smiling wickedly - Dont worry Jaan! You dont need to take tension! I am there.. I'll see to her better than you.. DOnt worry..

Ruqaiya noticed his wicked smile and smiled. She was assured.

She laid in his arms andd both dozed off...

**Next morning** Jalal's Office

Everyone's working seriously when they realise their Boss entering the Office. (Bg tune - The one which played when Maan Singh Khurana used to enter Khurana constructions in Geet..lol..only if you remember)

Everyone wishes him Good Morning and he gestures them back.

He has a great victorious smile on his face. He entered his office cabin and went to his great BOSS chair. And started his work.

Evryone was surprised at his smile. He rarely smiled.

** Afternoon**

A sudden flow of air started in the office. It felt like calmness and silence before a big thunderstorm.

Jalal could experience the same but he smiled..as if he knew it..as if he was already prepared for it!!


Suddenly the employees noticed, Ms.Jodha barging into their office..they knew..SHe was Mr.Bharmal's daughter..who was the Chief accountant in company.

She did not pay attention to anyone..he straight went BOSS's cabin and thundered in.

She looked at him with angry eyes. He grinned(as if he knew it)..FOr a second..He was again lost in her beauty..
The way she wore those anarkali suits..Suited her the best.Her figure..her curves..all were so appealing..

Jodha - How dare you? How can you? You didnt even give any notice...

Jalal - First of all, I am the BOSS here..Talk with respect..Get that!! Once I put my hands on something, It becomes mine..So ..yeah ..You get that now!! Now that is MY HOTEL..!!
I am the Head of that hotel! I bought it in double price overnight..You should be happy for that! And you barging at me..Haha..

Jodha fumed at him.. She said - Alright! Take over it ! But remember one thing! You will never be happy in your life! I curse you right now!

She said this so loudly that everyone in the office heard that. They were shocked..

Jalal was furious now! He wasnt expecting such harsh words. Jodha left his office with angry eyes.

Jalal looked at all his employees..who immediately went back to their work.

Jalal frowned - How dare she? I will not leave that Jodha! She needs to pay for it! I was taking her lightly till now! But now, she has over-nerved me!
You got to pay Now..MS.JODHA !!

** Jodha's Home **

Jodha sat in the balcony..all lost.and very sad.. Not only did she lose her Hotel to a monster Boss..But also, she lost her job..
She couldnt blame him in any court..For he had given double money to everyone..He had done everything with perfection.."False work with great perfection" Thats what he is!!

SHe cried. She cursed the day before..when she met Him and his fiance.

Suddenly, Bharmal entered the balcony..giving her a smile... She wiped her tears and smiled back at him..

Bharmal - I know Jodha beta! You are upset! But dont worry! I have a good news for you. Sir knowingly bought the hotel because he wanted to gift it to a foreign company.
he had genuine reasons. He apologised to me. And guess what? Here is your Job assurance. He has given you the job of his secretary. From tomorrow you can come to our office.

Jodha was shocked and surprised...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Guys! I hope you like my surprise of early update! This chapter is dedicated to all readers..But specially Radhika (PupCat)... She is my darling! She has given me so many amazing ideas regarding this story.. Thank you Radhika!
I hope you all enjoy this Modern Story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Thanks..U commented before I could pm you..Love you!😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic as usually my dearu Nancy👏🤗 and finally got opportunity to say you as often i am not online so i get a little bit late to get that information about your update!!!!!!😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetystubborn

Fantastic as usually my dearu Nancy👏🤗 and finally got opportunity to say you as often i am not online so i get a little bit late to get that information about your update!!!!!!😛😛

Aww Thank You so much dear🤗 Love u..thanks for appreciating it.. love u so much🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
An awesome episode and to top it an awesome update from you!!!🤗 Loved it...waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
One of my Fav Story updated! Lalalalalalalla.. I'm in AkDha land.. First the epi now ur update! ❤️ beautiful!!!! Let's see what happens.. So excited about the secretary thing! Ruqqu jaiye bhaar Mei!!

P.S I do remember the BGM of Maan 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey!
awesome update dear, loved it
eagerly waiting for next update
please do continue soon
& thanks for the pm

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