First of all, Welcome to "Naam bade aur Darshan Chote" kind of One-Shot !! Cuz...I suck at giving titles to my work.. Sometimes it is possible..that titles r not at all related to the story that I write...lol...Sorry for that... ok Anyways.. I named it that way..cuz this JA story is of modern 21st century..!! 😛😛
For now, its a One - Shot..But I'll definitely try to update it !!
Before you read it, lemme give u a short Intro !! This idea struck my mind last night,,as I was watching a Hollywood moive... The story may be horrible..But I couldn't stop myself from writing !!
Criticism welcomed with stretched arms!! Hope u like it.. And if you don't...please do comment that you don't want more of it!!
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The party decorations dazzled on the night of the grandest celebration, that was about to take place.
The big party hall, looked none less than a King's Ultimate Palace.
The golden walls, the glittery curtains, the flowery decorations, the crystal balls..everything looked grand and unparalled.
The front entrance of the Party hall was the heart of the Party.
It formed the crux of the whole celebration, that was about to begin in the honour of super successful Business Tycoon, Mr.Jalal.
All the dignitories and the important people of his Company had already gathered on the Venue.
Suddenly, The grand Lambhorgini stopped on the Red Carpet.
EVeryone's eyes turned to see them..The Grand Couple..
The tall, handsome Mr. Jalal stepped out of the Car. He looked so charming..A woooshh could be heard from all the girls in the party.
The well developed body, wrapped up in Black Suit of perfect material..made him look out of the world.
Came next to him, was the most stunning beauty. She looked so gorgeous in the mermaid shaped Red sizzling gown.
Her fair complexion and sheer beauty killed everyone.
She was none other than Would be Mrs.Jalal..That is, she was Ms. Ruqaiyya Sultan.
Both Mr. Jalal and Ms.Ruqaiya walked off the Red Carpet together. They looked so good together.
Some ladies gossiped about Ruqaiya's luck and beauty. They were jealous of her.
Finally, the Boss had arrived and the managers were ready to initiate the celebrations.
The champaign was blowed.
Jalal continued to drool over his charming beauty Ruqaiya.
He didnt know whether he loved her or not, but he was sure that He was very obsessed with her.
Anyways, the party started. Everyone..ranking fron the peons..to clerks,,to average positions..to Higher authorities.. were invited to the party. All respected Mr.Jalal a lot..for he had been amazing in running the Business.
They were so impressed by his work. It had been only 1 month in Mumbai and he had set up the perfect Business empire.
He didnt himself know so much about Mumbai..But his knowledge of Perfect business and his leadership qualities made him reach to No.1 position within a month.
He and Ruqaiyya were staying in a 7-star hotel, for he still had to look for a Perfect house in Mumbai.
But, unfortunately, From today onwards..They were going to shift to a new Hotel as the previous Hotel got raided due to some problems.
Anyways...The Dinner time arrived. Ruqaiya felt on the top of the world with Jalal.
She felt like Queen. She was much proudy and rude in her behaviour.
But Jalal didnt mind that, for he was already obsessed with her and her personality.
As Ruqaiya moved with her plate, A lady accidentally striked with her, resulting in a grave scene.
All the food in the plate fell on Ruqaiya's dress and Her anger was already above her head.
Her temperature neared to 1000 degrees Celsius.
Everyone's eyes turned towards the Ruqaiya and the lady.
Before they could realise what happened, and what will happen..They were mesmerised by the Lady's ethereal beauty.
She wore a beautiful White and peach pink colored Anarkali Suit, a total contrast to the dress code of the Party.
Gentlemen were asked to wear Royal Suits and Women, Royal gowns or any other modern attire..
But this Lady..Looking ever so mesmerising..was different from anyone.
Her eyes like that of a peacock, her face full of pride and self-esteem. Even Jalal's heartbeat skipped for a moment.
He looked at her with such mesmerisation..He didnt even realised what just happened.
Then all of a sudden, everyone came back to the reality..when they heard a BIG SLAP Sound...
Ruqaiya slapped the lady..her eyes were frowning..
The lady's father came ahead and said out of worry - Jodha !! Are you alright??
Before..He could further say anything.. Jodha said out of anger - I am fine Dad ! What else can be expected from Rich- spoilers?
She looked straight into the eyes of Ruqaiya and said with much pride - Mam..It was your mistake..You came in my way...And the slap you just handed me..
Dont worry..I wont retort back..Otherwise,, there wont be any difference between you and me!!
As she turned to go from there..Jalal held her hand and said - How dare you talk to my Fiance like that? And By the way, She is almost the Boss of my company...Do you have any idea..that you can be thrown out of the Company right now..Ask for forgiveness right now ...NOW..!!!
Jodha jerked his hand with full power and said in a little higher tone - Excuse me Sir !! First of all, I dont work in your company..Please get yours facts corrected.
My father works here as your chief Accountant..His dedication to his work is unparalled..And secondly..WHy should I apologise? It was your fiance's mistake. She came in my way.
and her dress got spoiled. And didnt u see ..Your Fiance slapped me hard.. Instead of making her realise her mistake..You are asking me to seek apology...
SHe paused and laughed with a grin.. I cant believe Spolied rich brats can be spolied to this extent..
And she left the Venue with anger and some tears.
It was too much for Jalal and Ruqaiya.
Jalal shouted on Jodha's father, Mr. Bharmal - What is this? Your daughter has not got any manners I see!! SHould I give the reward of her actions to you??
Mr. Bharmal - I am really very sorry sir..Sorry Mam.. I apologise on her behalf..Please dont ruin your celebrations because of her! I promise she wont repeat this agin.
Please carry on your party..I'll just take leave now ! Sorry again..
Jalal calmed a bit, but still his ego was hurt. He had never seen such a gorgeous beauty before. For one second he thought " Ruqaiya stands nowhere in front of her"..
No one had dared to speak in front of him with louder voice..and This girl had crossed the limits.. SHe was DIFFERENT...
Jalal asked everyone to forget about the accident and carry on the party..
But somewhere in his mind, he remembered that lady's name - Hmm..JODHA... I need to meet you!! You need to pay for having an effect on me..for speaking in front of me!!
He grinned as the party continued!!
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It was damn horrible I know!!😕😕😕 Joota, chappals are welcomed!!😛😛
Part 2 - Page 9
Part 3 - Page 13
Part 4 - Page 20
Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago
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